I'm not the type to get sensitive about fiction so I'll say, it should had a better ending
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That view of the back of horus(づ￣ ³￣)づ that guy looks like he would be useful for just 1 things lol. Cause none of them truthfully in this story are useful much lol.
The pervy sage is coming out ╮(￣▽￣)╭
My critique is going to be basically based on the fact that there wasn't enough to support the plot. They had a good thing going but there was a lot of things that were missing to help support what could have been a very compelling story.
♡Such as flashbacks to the characters Origins
♡Since the kouta was straight I would have expected him to be a little bit more slutty when confronted with homosexual feelings that the character never had before meeting kuro.
♡I also wanted the kuro to be less stupid seeming as though cats are very intelligent and know their way around the city very well
♡And also I would have loved to have seen perhaps a family member
*unfinished plots
*rushed ending
But with that said that was a dam good example of defined characters
Choi in my opinion should have received some brutal force.
And teo I can under stand his feelings better, I honestly think that if I could switch partners around I think it would be
Kata - jins bf
Jin - teo
And Chei - raymond
It would have made a more complex story and drama filled plot. But this was decent(づ￣ ³￣)づ
I felt like I was chopped in the throat #－.－) almost cried but even worse I was mentally assaulted by fluff (︶︿︶)＝凸
When I read yaoi when they twitch I twitch lol. I'm a perv lol yup. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
I am also a perv, I do the same thing
Nothin wrong with that plus...
thats the best part(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
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I catch myself like...bitch no body is touching you
* looks back at my tablet * *puts hands over my face* (￣∇￣")
I'm so glad it ended on a realistic happy ending however! when I saw that they were spending so much time apart in my head in true reality I was thinking oh no here comes the affair bitches going to get dicked down by another bitch or a bitch is going to dick down some other bitch couldn't help thinking that ╮(￣▽￣)╭
Take the dam dick bitch (︶︿︶)＝凸 sometimes moments like this is when I think if I had the option I would insert myself into the room and just slap the uke ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ