I should have waited for the complete version ugh this is fucking torture.
Ikr （/TДT)/
the slow updates are slowly killing me, especially since this story is so dang INTERESTING
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Okay let me start this off because I have a lot of opinions unpopular might I add
I think that story could have used a lot of editing and when I mean a lot! I mean there was shit that should have not have been in there that took up way too much space like I didn't need to know everything about his job. I'm being very honest that was boring as fuck to read about all the set pieces and everything they could have cut at least about a good 30% of that out. （￣へ￣）
Now they should have mentioned that there was no sex. I know everybody's interpretation of vampires is different all the way down to Sesame Street, but bitch this is not fucking Sesame Street. vampires hunt with sexuality, so this should have definitely had a lot more explicit material in there to cover the boring-ass content revolving around his work.(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
The brother should have gotten with the third friend I mean this is yaoi after all so we're expecting a majority of the characters to be gay. so it should have completed the Trinity so none of the friends would have been able to die, and they all would have been able to live forever and to depend on each other. （/TДT)/
And to be honest I felt very frustrated reading how helpless the son was throughout the whole thing. I know his purpose was not to kill but he doesn't have to be a bitch either like I would have straight up punch the shit out of my dad if he bit my lover like that and then took off with my friend. But the son he just literally just walked past them I couldn't deal with that I was seriously going to end reading it at that. (=・ω・=)
There are a lot of plot stuff and minor and major issues with fluidity in the storyline but let me move on to some of the things I did like. To the reason why I gave it three stars.
The artwork was awesome being folklore was experimental this was something I haven't read about vampires of 4 also I liked that each character showed emotion very differently I also like how the MC the stood up for himself and adjusted until world that told him he shouldn't exist and I relate to that very much so I did like that aspect of it.
My conclusion to the story is I think that if you're going to write about vampires it needs to be done with no limits. if you're going to write about yaoi with vampires it needs a lot more character development when it comes to establishing power dynamics, establishing what the fuck is going on clearly so it doesn't confuse readers. Any Arthur who wants to take on projects like this that are based almost widley in horror and want to romanticize it like let's say Twilight or something like that. You need to understand what category you're writing for, yaoi is known for tackling very taboo subjects. So when you're combining something that's already taboo with something that's as ancient as vampires this just let me down quite a bit.
I was expecting a lot more risque, and just something to keep me reading. But if I was somebody who wasn't a fanatic for the stuff I would have dropped this, comic a long time ago. So I just want to say I really do appreciate the effort of everybody involved in that comic, and I hope that this is seen as constructive for a lot of reasons. because I think that it had really good potential. I just think that maybe because of the the laws in their country about writing things explicit like this, probably kept them from really going there. but I think that it's best to wait if you're going to produce content that's already going to be taboo that you need to be able to fully ground yourself in it and be allowed to express it. if you're not somewhere where you can do that save your story and write it somewhere that allows you to fully benefit from writers freedom and expression.
I completely agree with you...this plot line and the smut scenes along with some of the characters were boring and stale
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He has a great ass. I stan men with great asses (￣∇￣") pretty sure I'm a perv lol
Nah, everybody appreciates good butt. You're not alone my dear~.
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firmly believe a great ass is a good indication of good "pump-"ability.... ya know, cuz all that muscle in there....
That's my logic 100% (▰˘◡˘▰)
smart minds think alike
girl! the dam writer needs to slapped. And so do all these dam people who clearly shouldn't indulge in disrespecting women like that.
As a justification bringing that up was kinda useless(and disrespectful), as to say she can't be allowed to be beautiful with out other saying she has had a past. Freaking weird, even in comics I see how women writing about putting women down. That's like saying "she is gorgeous for a black woman" or "that Latin girl looks better as a blonde she looks more sexy" or "that lesbian just hasn't met the right guy she isn't gay just enexperienced" fuckin weird. (︶︿︶)＝凸
Stop using women to be the but of your jokes and insults no matter the color or origin we come from.
uhh this is a yaoi ... Asahi is a boy and you need to do some research about omegaverse
Well if I was as lose as you. I would make the assumption that I didn't know it was yoai (if you checked my profile you will see I know what yaoi is extensively), Asahi is a trans woman, and even if it is omegaverse (I've read every manga in this category). Yaoi has by nature presented misogyny in it's characters in many topics. Whether it was the loud gay guys friend always being a shit starter, or trans women being disrespected. Women have always been made villains, in a majority of circumstances.
If you are aware females can impregnate males but they are shown very rarely I'm this genre. And most of the time if they are it's in a villain role. I understand clearly yaoi separates itself from normal manga but it can at least treat women better cis or trans.
um ... no ? male omegas aren't trans they're just rare in that universe and if you aren't aware others don't think highly of omegas because of their troublesome pheromones when their heat comes causing Alpha and Beta to feel uneasy and it have a strong effect on Alpha . Not beacause they have characteristic that resemble a women that they're mistreated but beacause they're troublesome to deal with ( don't get me wrong i hated when they mistreated omegas )
Anywho there are one manga that resolved the heat issue very well and if you've read every manga in the omegaverse category i think that you might also know this particular manga
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Let me explain to you omegaverse lol
There has been 4 written genders I've read so far
Recessive, dominant omegas
Recessive, dominant alphas
Betas/ those who go through a second puberty this changes into omega or alpha.
Then the fourth I forgot the comics it was
But essential it is a race that can get alpha males and beta males pregnant basically it's the rarest according to its authors take of omegaverse.
Male omegas can be women if the transition, but I was referring to Asahi.
She is women because she has breasts and hips and gender neutral name.
Also the regular translation (thank goodness I speak the language) refers to her with neutral pronouns, how ever the weird misogyny in yaoi always seem to get the better of either translator or authors. They love female villains and tearing this down. Asahi should be respected and if people continue to allow themselves to support that type of misogyny we will continue to see things like this that to me added absolutely nothing to the story. I've read so much yaoi that I can tell when something is yaoi logic and when things are added that are hurtful and serve no purpose.
I saw a author who wrote into their end notes that described gays as loveless because they can't produce kids, even though they literally just wrote a comic about yaoi. To me that is not needed and is to be honest offensive. So it doesn't suprise me that there are going to be women who write about female villains in their story. But to me I think their if a fine line between what fiction and what's the opinion of the writer. And alot of times I see that they use transvestites to be the butt of many jokes. While at time it can be cute and funny other times it can seem very disrespectful to trans women who are apart of the sisterhood of women. Now here we have a case were the mc saw a beautiful woman in the workplace, the other guy next to her decided to put her in a situation that could have been very dangerous. She was not a transvestite but she is a woman she has breast she also wears womans clothes to work. It's weird to try point out why she is a woman when it's no one's business what her past was. Gays and jealous women and toxic men always seem to break what being a women is down to a point that literally is offensive to any woman. So Asahi should filled out a defamation case for disclosure of potentially harmful information with out consent. But this yaoi there is always either gotta be some form of female misogyny or villain edit to some degree. Since they also write about "hetro" men falling for gay guys. （￣へ￣）
i think the person you're talking about is the president of athena productions Goutou Minoru . As far as i know ,Asahi don't have breast ( if chest counts that is ) and the only ones who has shown to have is the president . If that's not the case then do you mean that males can't wear clothes that is gender neutral like Asahi's ? or is that Asahi's body type is particularly a feminine type and not just slender ?
Also you've ignored my question about a certain manga and i find it quite rude ...
I'll have a double check on the name LOL
but I'm pretty sure I got it right
I'm pretty sure you're the first person to be rude to me so I went back to read your responses and I didn't see any questions that you asked me about any other Comics that I read.
the question was about an omegaverse manga that resolved the heat issue far better than any other of the same genre and since you've read every omegaverse manga i asked if you know this particular manga .
Well there is a lot of comics I could name, it depends because in some Comics they like to do the whole beta and Omega partnering which is ultimately really hard on the Omega. I mean any standard Alpha and Omega pairing is usually the best combo if you're referring to a containment of dominant Omegas but dominant omegas are extremely rare in the genre. I made a short list of some I found in my list that I cared to rate. Some are not finished and some are. But almost all these omegas would be considered more dominant then recessive.
Megumi and Tsugumi
Love shuttle
Kanraku Alpha ~Enigma~ 4 verse - I think this is the fourth sex alpha gets prego
Okusama wa Alpha
Pheromone Shower - Omegaverse Short Stories
Unmei no Kisu wa Oazuke
Remnant JUJIN Omegaverse
i'm sorry but i did not ask about the mangas that feature dominant omegas although i also like bold and straighforward omegas but what you answered is not what i meant by "resolving the heat issue" at this point i just assumed that you didn't even read my question and just answer as you pleased ( =_="")
to spare your time to look for it the manga's name is "Ou-sama to Puppy Love" and the couple are cute as heck ( _-'w'-_)
Well a lot of the issues that happened to these omegas doesn't revolve around their personality. it has to do with the fact that their dominant omegas. So even when they had an alpha pairing their Heats still posed a threat to them in their day-to-day life. So these mangas on this list are answering your question, it's just that your question wasn't really descriptive enough for me to give you a direct answer, so it's not like I didn't want to answer you simply. Just that your answer was very vague, you could have asked me if I knew about mangas that specify disadvantages with omegas and their heat issues that pose a threat to them even with an alpha pairing. but the question that you asked was very vague so I had to answer with a small list of Comics that I know where omegas have had issues with their heat Cycles even if they've had Alphas with them and they have been paired. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
That comic I've already read I gave a 5-star review there are other omegaverse stories that are a better example of what you're trying to say but I understand what you're trying to say
yes
now that you understands what i'm saying i'm okay for the time being . Thank you for the talk
Anytime (⌒▽⌒)
Asahi is not a trans woman...
Thank you ( uwu)
Did you actually read the responses I stated I got the name mixed up (●￣(ｴ)￣●)
Girl not you trying to revive a old convo I laid to rest. Pettttyyyyyyyyy ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
wait wat? im confused..... oh wait are you talking about when they minouru chan, that beauty of a woman, a man??
This Comic started out so well but I feel bad for deity, and the MC is just treating him like shit and I can't stand i,t I know this is a shounen which means this is going to go on for a long time I can't stand seeing this endless cycle of abuse. Good luck readers ┑(￣Д ￣)┍