I have the feeling the author just didn't know what to do with the seme.
It feels like they tried to deepen the plot and make his character more interesting but failed miserably at connecting the given information. There are so many holes. The whole vibe doesn't fit anymore. You really notice when the author changes their mind about the character again:
First stage: The loyal and nice Seme. The Seme who likes SM and likes the Uke and secretly was always in love with him. Uke seemed like a crush to him.
Second stage: Author tried to make the Seme darker. The Seme who lost interest as soon as they met again and then just wanted to use the Uke and dump him. Uke seemed completely worthless and boring to him when they met again.
Third stage: The poor fake heir who always liked the Uke who didn't like him and just doesn't want to admit it but in truth he always liked him. Seme had only precious thoughts about Uke when they met again and it seems like they also tried to make the Uke look more "cold".
The information and the way it was drawn really doesn't match up. I think you often are able to notice when an author wants to change up the character or improvises to create more drama but I have never seen a severe case like this. Maybe it's a translation issue? But even the art doesn't match up. I think you can notice how the author tries to connect everything and I hope they will succeed.
I like the story in itself but all in all it just feels like the storyline wasn't thought through at all and they are just deciding on a whim what they should do now, without a regard to what they have already written or they are just glossing over it.
Wow good analysis!
Yeah, I agree. I was genuinely shocked at the second stage and thought it was a compelling plot twist, overall well done and with good writing it could’ve convinced me. Third stage is just confusing, the seme’s character is just inconsistent. I wish authors would just commit to dark semes if that’s the kind of romance they like instead of doing this flip flopping shit.
I don't like the cheating and I don't know if I can get over it as the story progresses :/
I'm going to give this a chance though (for now)
How did people notice they can comment again? Did they try every chapter? I honestly gave them up for good and didn't even try anymore. I didn't see any hope. ( T﹏T )
What the fuck happened to the storyline?? O.O
This is like 0 to 100 but with rape and cliche porn plot.
Don't worry, it's always better to have a nude dick without much detail than having some white lightsaber or blurry image. (▰˘◡˘▰)
I wish there was more of this ╥﹏╥