Mikel's Topics (266)

I want it to end like 'Years have past and leo is still not back. During those years, every day, taehoon always goes back to the beach they went to wishing that leo would go back there but still no leo comes back. One day at the current moment, its already night but he still went to the beach. He went near the water and just star at the moon, thinking how much he misses leo. Unfortunately that night, there's still no leo back. He then decided to go back home. When he's near his home, he notice the light being opened so he thought a thief might came in. He went to the door and saw it was open. He took a metal rod that he found near him and began approaching the door. He entered the house but he found no one. And then he heard a sound coming from the bathroom. He got on guard. As the bathroom door opens, he began feeling more nervous. His hands that was on guard slowly goes down and he dropped the metal rod he's holding as the person who comes out of the bathroom was the person he's been waiting for too long. It was leo. He ran towards him, with tears running down his eyes, and quickly hugged leo. Leo then said "Im back, Sir Taehoon". The end.

(and then give us extra chapters about leo and taehoon being lovey dovey and suches)

For the whole story, it could be like mixed pov for leo and taehoon. Fir taehoon's pov, it would be how much he misses leo and how much he was used to being with him. Should also show how some people tried to confess to him yet he rejected them all as he's fathfully waiting for leo. As for leo's pov, it should be also about how he misses taehoon and how determined he is to go back to leo's side. It should also show how they fight that evil villain. Now to the chapter before the ending i suggested, i want it to be in leo's pov showing the fight they'll have with the villain and i want that chapt to end at the villain about to release a powerfull attack and says that it will be the last for them then the chapter end. After that is the ending i suggested and tge first extra story should be about how leo managed to defeat the villain and how he was sent back to the future. Should also show how when he went back, no one is inside taehoons house so he decided to go in and while waiting he decided to go to the back and that after bathing he went out of the bath to see taehoon inside the house holding a metal rod in a guarding position and as he also sees taehoon drop the rod and runs towards him. Then the following extras is about them being lovey dovey

Is chapter 5 that kind of story where in the end they just live their life on separate ways? Then why bother showing it to us? Pls continue it with like a sudden re encounter things like that