
the same reason why i dont read mosy chinses mamhua is the reason why im dropping this.
the main character is written to be perfect and have everything. there is little to no growth. the story is more about the main character displaying her advantages because she went back in time. everything is utterly cliche and predictable. there is no excitement in this story.
did we really think tev wouldnt become an apprentice?
did we really think that she would just summon a low-level being?
did we really think blonde mc wouldnt dance with her?
she is literally the main character of an isekai shounen manga. given the advantage, written to be over powered, and has literally people auto flaunt her at some points. it's bland and tasteless.
the art is also just. no. as an artist myself, i can tell that the artist coming up with the designs of the wardrobe before the body. the male characters' proportions look significantly better than those of the female characters because, for male clothing, the outfit is fit to the skin. for women's garbs, everything is hidden with frills. since the hips are lost, the legs are too long along with the entire dress. the waist is incredibly thin. making it harder for the character to have a average sized bodice. as a result, the top half of her body looks tiny compared to the bottom half. the artist is trying to fit pieces of body onto the clothing instead of the other way around and it's just ridiculous.
that's my piece on this.
if you enjoy the webtoon, keep reading it. im sure it gets better. i just dont care for it.

Tbh as an artist myself, I think yhe art on some panels were pretty but most of it is just a huge miss. They make out everything about the character so detailed that its hard for your eyes to rest on one thing. The same thing goes with the background, most panels have a full body art of a character with so many flowers and ornaments that it just looses focus on the character.
I've always prioritized "less is more" but in this manhwa they thought that the more detailed they put, the prettier it'll be...
Ok but the proportions tho omg- I know that the art is really pretty but gosh the one on the cover just irks me so much;; Not only is her posture so off, the perspective of it is also incorrect. In this essay I will-

I'm sorry, but what are these proportions.....
love the art, but someone missed their human anatomy class o-o

Can y’all just appreciate the work and effort the creators took to make this. This isn’t something easy that takes 30 mins to do. The proportions look human enough to me, everyone has their own art style, so if you’re that dissatisfied just do it and draw it yourself or just simply drop it, instead of complaining about it.

Yeah I know that you can’t like everything about it, I’m not saying u should, I am just aware as you are about the flaws in this art/comic. All I was saying is that you shouldn’t overlook everything in the story and just focus on the bad and hate on it. Which I’m not saying any of you are, I was just choose the first comment to simply state it for people in general who are dissing and hating on it

Honey, did you even bother to comprehend what I wrote? I never said to praise it or anything of the sorts. All I was doing was expressing my opinion on the matter to some of the people dissing on it in other comments I seen, but I guess now that’s considered being a “rabid fan” pls that’s just to show u got nothing better to do than hate on people.

this was lowkey for kicks and giggles. if you cant admit that the anatomy of the characters is at least slightly fucked up, you are delusional.
this chapter especially failed in my opinion. in the panel with her ball gown, her legs are literally triple the size of her bodice/torso area. thats literally the definition of fucked up anatomy.

"so if you’re that dissatisfied just do it and draw it yourself or just simply drop it, instead of complaining about it". Yup we can't appreciate the art style but it doesn't include complaining about it. That's you're main gist. Idk even what your version of art appreciation is when it comes to anatomy. And me putting a label doesn't mean I hate on people. That's just too tiring. Why waste energy. Well maybe you like the term deleusional more as the other commenter said. Welp this post is getting longer. Gotta go and enjoy life.. and art. Byeee

Idk why people here try to cancel other people's opinion regarding a flaw in a manga. It's not like we're invalidating the mangaka's work. We "just appreciate the work and effort the creators took to make this". Why scorn a criticism when we just want something to be better. Let's face it, manga's art style either progress or degrade as the chapters go longer. And saying that you should just draw it yourself... what's the point?? Even if I can draw better, will it affect this manga? We like this piece of work so we're commenting for things that could have been better so why would we drop it. That's saying people who aren't completely contented at this manga should stop reading it. Wayyy to promote more support to the creators.

no one said proportions are easy, but its easy to see when they're done wrong.
no one said this art wasnt hard work, so i dont know where that assumption is coming from.
i get where you're coming from, but your defending an opinion no one is against.
all people are saying is that he proportions are off. are you really going to say that they're wrong?

I never said it wasn’t hard. I was just saying that proportions are hard. I never assumed anything. Nor was I defending anything I agreed with their comment. Saying that although the proportions aren’t the best the art is really good and took a lot of time and effort. instead of coming at them and constantly saying the proportions are bad just appreciate it. I never once said anyone was wrong idk where you read that but okay. The artist/ author whoever is drawing will get better with time. Theirs no need for everyone to repeat the same thing about the proportions. So you trying to put words in my mouth and say I said things I didn’t is hella embarrassing.

Yesssss say it again. (▰˘◡˘▰) I don't think they understand that them hating back to back. Then getting mad when people call them out for is embarrassing. Criticism is needed, but some of them, they're just hating and only focusing on the flaws just to hate and diss. I'm glad someone said it though. I'm not sure why people are getting mad at your comment when it makes sense. Some are just overlooking everything else just to hate on it. not everyone is but those who are making fun of it and hating.

someone cant read omfg
i was telling you that no one said proportions are easy. no one is saying that the artist isnt working hard. i dont know where YOU got that idea from. you assumed that people commenting on the proprtions believe that proportions are easy and that this art is NOT hard work. your comment literally says "it’s really hard work and body proportions are hella difficult to do" as if people critisizing the proportions dont know that lmao.
when did anyone here constantly come at the author/artist????? i dont pay enough attention to the comments to know if this is an ongoing issue. you, again, ASSUMED that the people agreeing with me are always going after the art when that even isnt the case...
and i never said you told anyone was wrong, i asked if you would really say that the proportions were perfect. i asked IF you would call those commenting about the proportions wrong. i NEVER said that you called someone incorrect.
also, i never repeated anything about the proportions nor have i said anything about it til now.
YOU need to take reading comprehension again because you obviously dont know how to read with critical thinking.
read my comment again. you're the one twisting people's words.

i think its so fucking funny that if this was an ecci shounen manga and i commented how the bodily proportions are societally harming and incredibly idealistic, creating high expectations and insecurities in young audiences, the ones against me would be with me.
this literally isnt any different. the idealization of the thin waist, long legs, small face and thin limbs are all there. the only thing absent is the sexualization.
the proportions in shounen mangas are just as hard if not harder. at least they get their legs right.
as long as you enjoy it, anyone who sees what you like as slightly unpleasing they are automatically viewed as a threat. its so sad

You’d be surprised at what people do, there are people like that. as I said I’m talking about the people who are only reading it to hate it etc. You not understanding that like I’ve said is embarrassing. the world isn’t as sweet as you think it is. People hate just to hate or make themselves feel better about themselves. Idk why you took it personally. it must be you, I’ve said it several times. my comment was for those who were hating just to hate nobody else nor anyone personally. So stop embarrassing yourself.

Okay, this is really embarrassing, I never twisted your words or anything of the sort.
As I've explained before all I did was agree with a comment, nothing more nothing less.
I never assumed anything or put words in your mouth.
I know the proportions aren't amazing you know that as well. All I was saying was that it's hard work and the author/artist whoever will get better with it in due time agreeing with another comment and adding my own 2 cents in. This is what my previous comment was saying and all I was saying. there's no need to constantly hate or argue in the comments about it.
The art is really beautiful WE all know that. I never said you said it's wasn't. But then again I never said you said anything you didn't say. Because I didn't want to argue with anyone.
If anything I think you need reading and comprehension classes.
I never said anything in my comment to you specifically, but you keep taking it personally which is pretty embarrassing. I’m not gonna keep responding to childish comments constantly clarifying what I said.
I honestly don't care what her body looks like. it's up to the artist, she can look however, she wants. the story itself is really good. as I'm not gonna continue arguing for nothing Please have a nice day.
Ps. I wasn't sure if you were going to read all of my comment. so I spaced it out so you could read it and get the gist of it. I myself, read someone's entire comment before commenting. but I am not everyone, everyone is different.

lmao, im not taking anything personally. you literally dont know how to read.
the main point is that the proportions are getting worse every fucking chapter. no one can deny that.
no one is making an argument that proportions are easy or that the art as a whole is shit. you put that into the conversation.
from my FIRST reply to you, all i was saying was that your comment was full of irrelevent shit. you brought points no one was going against or denying.
all i asked was if you would tell the people who believe that the proportions are fucked that they are wrong. that is literally all i asked. and you finally answered.
if it makes it easier for you to read, replace no one with nobody. i think you'll actually understand it.
ps. replying to a comment means you're specitficallt responding to that specific person and therefore you are specifically writing a comment in context that your opinions are about them specifically.
it took this long to answer a simple fucking question jfc

No one in this thread has made that point though, youre the one coming in implying they are. Everyone in here has said they enjoy the story, just that the proportions are terrible and becoming a bit of a pet peeve. So you're not only embarrassing in your actions but rude as well. If you can't handle someone criticizing ONE aspect of something you like, maybe you should stay out of comment sections.

The story has major flaws, I think we can all agree with that, but I think it has the potential to be better and more unique.
For the art, though, it looks like blatent copying. I know, I checked the artist's instagram and their comments/posts. While the artist might've not blatently traced the art, they definitely took attributes of WMMAP. There are also scenes that look identical. I think it's incredibly interesting that the style of their prints and previous art is different from this webtoon. I'm going to look for specific scenes that look alike, but for now you can see the similarities in the eyes, the hairstyles (especially on the bangs), the fashion, and the furniture.

s2manga, stop updating and ruinning shit. whoever is uploading these trash updates needs to stop. i knew it was s2manga within the first fucking text bubble. that's how terrible it is. if you want to translate your own webtoon/manga go for it, hut sniping projects with your own bullshit is just gross

mangago has been removing them consistently. why would mangago reupload or constantly upload s2manga only to remove it again? for examle, in the monster duccess webtoon, chapter 70 from an s2manga translation was uploaded last night. mangago QUICKLY removed it. hours later chapter 71 was uploaded. you really think mangago was like "yea, they didnt like chapter 70, how about chapter 71"

There is not a single scan group that post on managago because they get no recognition from aggregators (which are for profit.) If you really want to support them either go to their sites/discord or go to managadex because that where they upload their chapters. Other websites just steal them. And thats only for chapters that are scanlated and not stoled from by official sites

all im saying is that it wouldnt make sense if mangago itself would upload translations when this is an independent uploading system. someone is uploading these, not mangago. and it's mainly to promote a different site. yes, both sites suck more than shit, i'm not denying that. and im not saying that mangago supports translators. im saying thats someone is uploading s2manga chapters to promote s2manga which is fucking annoying

also, if you didn't notice, s2manga is basically just a watered down mangago that steals from instagram and twitter translators. like, i don't understand your point. can we just agree that the person who is uploading shit from s2manga should just stop? whether or not it's someone connected to mangago or not? which is highly unlikely, but let's just play it out your way. even if mangago was stealing from s2manga, they should stop. thats all im saying??? i dont get your point

Oh no I mean the opposite. Managago’s system automatic uploads new chapters that are on other other manga sites so it’s likely that s2managa chapters are not uploaded directly to Mangago but was found by the automatic system and uploaded. No one would take the time to directly upload all the chapters s2manga has done especially on another site when it’s expected that aggregators will take it anyway lol

Managago is uploading these automatically because aggregators steal any new chapters it can find on other sites with their systems that are constantly scanning and monitoring the internet. The problem you have is not with a person but with Mangago's uploading system, which won't change (its how aggregators can literally upload hundreds of chapters a day)

If you want to see a site that is purely based on people uploading chapters go to managadex and you will see there are many managas that are not updated compared to Mangago because people didn't upload anything. While mangago automatically just takes from the internet so it can automatically update chapters

s2manga, stop updating and ruinning shit. whoever is uploading these trash updates needs to stop. i knew it was s2manga within the first fucking text bubble. that's how terrible it is. if you want to translate your own webtoon/manga go for it, hut sniping projects with your own bullshit is just gross

sooo, i know this isn't a big deal, but i couldn't get my mind off it. how does that plump count in the latest chapter have a higher status than charti? charti is the daughter of a duke? and a regina?

Also since I was really curious, I searched up the difference between the Arch duchy and the grand duchy.
So basically the Archduke was a title that signified that the holder was a prince (descendant of a king or emperor) as well as a duke.
Grand duke is a title for a duke that is not under the authority of a king, such as the Grand Duke of Luxembourg.

The update is chapter 3
CHAPTER 2 SPOILERS (not big ones tho so yah know)
In chapter 2, the FL greets Ain and joins him for breakfast and gives him some fruit for desert. However, the next day (or later that day idk) Ain didn't return to the FL so she became confused. She barges into Ain's room to find out what's going on and see's him rolled under the blanket. When he rises, he is covered in rashes.
so the person in the fl's body is someone outside the novel, correct??? then how come her memories of being younger with a black cat are with the fl's novel body???
So I think she’s lived 2 lives. The first one was the 1st life we saw where she killed herself. The second one was her regular life and the 3rd is this life. I don’t even know if this was a novel in her world.
No, the fl was always the fl, she just had a former life that she could recall in this life, where she read a novel about herself. She only recalled her past life recently.
She probably inherited the memories of the body of the original owner
She’s the same person but remembered her past life (when she was a normal worker and read the novel) so she found out her future by her past memories
She died and resurrected inside a novel. She was living inside the novel with no memories of her past life and after a while she regained her memories of the past where she and read the novel .... I don't know if I made sense... But technically she didn't take over the body of the villain she is the villain but with knowledge of what's gonna happen if she keeps being a villain
Ohhh thank u
Okay so in short--
There was a woman in modern times who read a novel which was incomplete and one day she died from a car accident.. when she woke up her soul was inside the “villainess” body
She got her memories of the previous (modern time) life after being in a relationship with the “original excuse-of-a-human ML” That means she's probably a soon-to-be adult
She has the memories of the previous/original “villainess” body(~‾▿‾)~
Lol, I rant so gud tho
Oh and she had been in a relationship with that shitty “original ML” for 2 years already so yeah prob 16 or 17 ig
o ok
ty all