I don’t fully understand why the uke fell in love with the seme. The monster thing told the seme that he had been having the wrong approach. Humans need kindness etc. So I expected to see a few chapters of the seme gradually getting kinder, and making the uke’s heart go badump with multiple small gestures. And then the uke’s impression of the seme softens after each gesture.
Instead, we only got one playful/ intimate moment where the uke pushed the seme into the water.
And a whole lot of smut.
I get that the seme was doing some investigation in the background, but ultimately the uke fell in love with him without those kind words even though the seme changed marginally. Instead, all the uke could talk about was how grateful he was that the seme chased those ghosts away.
So, the uke’s feelings changed from gratitude to love, not from gradually being treated better over a period of time.
And then the monster speaks to the seme again, remarking that carnal desires have led to love. So, what have we learned? Sex leads to love and not being treated kindly? The implication here is not great.
I think ultimately the uke just fell in love too fast.
When their hair is open, the MC and ML look like 2 beautiful women. It’s a bit disconcerting at times.