
The art of the story is alright. The potential of the story was high, but the mix of rushed plot and bland characters made it hard to enjoy it.
MC as in Main Character was fine, kinda bland tho cause beside his heroic acts we didnt see anything impressive truly. He didn't think stuff through he just rushed in. He belived in people who experimented on him without his consent (totally saw the betrayal coming) and his backstory is too cliche.
The supporting characters are all garbage. Every single character in this story pi$$ed me off except the guy who stood up for the MC in the beginning of the story and wanted to rush in burning house to save him.
and also the girl who was experimented on. She deserved to live and I feel sorry for her and the rest of the people they experimented on.
The plot was waaaaay too rushed. It almost makes no sanse(/TДT)/
I kinda hoped for something Similar to eleceed cause the story did have potential to be a cool hero story but except MC being fire-fighter everything is all unoriginal.
(Enough for me to just want to rewrite everything tbh)
6/10

I called it that the boy (bodyguard) has potential to be his rival/friend but the girl still hasn't found her purpose in the story and I hope it remains as "rich girl that sometimes helps MC but isnt big part of the story" ( ̄∇ ̄")
Also, I love the lieutenant guy. He seems like such a good person and I hope to see more of him around (his team included) but I'm also really worried about the guy trying to track down 101 which might be codename of Ijin Σ(  ̄□ ̄||)
Thanks for update (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
I feel sorry for Johoo though lol
Bestie WHOS johoo
Jooho (spelled the name wrong lol) is the orange-haired guy with long hair who serves our MC all the time
It’s Yooho-
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