I like how plot is interesting, but the characters are all so annoying and un-orginal! And why isnt this tagged as romance when it obviously is!! Like, at least warn me next time buddy, I hate romance...
If you guys want somewhat similar story I recommend this one: http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/kamonohashi_ron_no_kindan_suiri/
Some things I would change:
— get the girl to be a bit more interesting and independent, maybe funny and let her train as some sort of athlete (gymnastic, judo, etc.) So she at least isnt so defenseless if she's stupid (which she might not be, just naive for now, but she isnt "brain" of the team, so let her be more then a "heart" cause that's cliche.
— get the creepy doctor out of the story (who wants to know a doctor can be a creep even towards dead bodies, who asked for that??? I'm so disgusted, why not portray Ted Bundy as good guy as well?)
— why is the new police guy (working for MC's police friend, a pedo) And why is that not addressed? He is grown man, the girl is still a student and he has crush on her??? Ew.
The story is interesting, the plot is cool.
But author really messed up with characters.
(I'm still around volume 2, chapter 17 so do say if they get better)
I'm so proud! I hope that girl sees that guy being beaten up and is at least happy now
I need son and father to be reunited ╥﹏╥
And I hope the girl isnt love interest cause she seems too young for him (he looks rather old), maybe they came be like father – daughter. That seems like fools idea
Cool*
Is nobody gonna mention how sad He Tian looked before he saw Mo? Nobody noticed that, really?
I hope it's not already time for him to leave ╥﹏╥
I'm glad Eleceed is updating so I cant judge cause he dropped this one, I feel sorry for you all tho.
This made me more pumped up then Solo Leveling update–
That guy deserves it, criple him for life Hobin! (I wonder if you'll end up in prison if you do though, hmmm. Well, you can also do it to Jiho if you meet him there)
fucking jiho, hope he stays there
jihoE
Jiho that shot devil from lookism,
You missed the joke, he write "ji-hoe" get it?
Yeah jihoe suit him better
I've read up to 25th chapter before i decided to drop this. I love revange stories, esspecialy those with justice. When i first read the story it had bad quality and art wasnt my favorite. The MC wasnt exactly bad but i didnt really connect to him.
Then the whole "swprd falls from the sky" part started and i got interested, but after the fighting started i was again not interested. The action is bland and boring to me.
His character design is hot mess, he looks like hulk with those muscles.
And his brute strenght he uses to kill innocent people just made me cringe. He was Intruduced as "victim" (which he is, in a way) but he croosed the line after he stabbed that bodyguard (whose job was to protect that girl and was only trying to do his job) in the elevator and broke his neck. And when he decided to threaten the bad guy's siblings (who had nothing with his parents death as far as we know) i was just like "nope, i aint reading this"
It would be nore interesting if he stayed looking like a weak kid, and secretly took revange on them by outsmarting them or he had some unique powers, but this here, this plot just makes him look like Super-man, unbeatable. (He has super strenght, definitivly not most orginal concept)
How do you beat a monster like that? You cant. And even if he gets his revange, what then?
Also, His aunt will be killed because he revealed his identity so soon. I can already guess that, but he probably didnt seeing he is so foolish.
But yeah, it did show some potential at first.
Just not my style.
5/10
Is nobody gonna talk about Mo biting walnut looked like he is a cat cause of his teeth? (Also, you stomp on it, dont bite it people)