the pacing faster than my heart palpitations id at least wanted to see a sneak peek into the past after he found out her death and how he truly felt n shi and not just from dialogues i need to see the crashout visualised
also does gang not get the message!?? the fact you knew she tried to khs 4 times after turning back time but still refuse to let her go like damn.
and its so shallow and its moreso their feelings are like a brief overview like solan “yea he ignored me in the past for a long as time so im still really hurt by that.” like could they show us more of his rejected and how she truly felt in the moment not just a flashback just to build up that pov and emotional turmoil the fl has??
and like him its literally just “yea i drove her to her death and i ignored her so i regret it but dw i gotchu in this life” like??? sir. it dont work like that lmao
also like the plot is so messy??? cause its all over the place rn but yea i get they’ll all have a conclusion but its just too much to let go at once first is the past, then the whole soruk, then some new chick got introduced, then theres like that brief hint of the soruk blood in the walls of the empire or some bs, and then ofc the main characs and their own plot n shi
too much introduced at once
and lemme tell ya not once did this man genuinely grovel or apologise or done anything to “win” her back its always possessive n shi like bravo but cmon man have you not learn anything??
also like the sudden rush of topics like fl about to invest n shi to make her rich and funny moment where the mine collapse lolol but never to be brought up again!?
also the obvious holes on how the dragon life/lifeline works like erm do they just get reincarnated? and have the same mate throughout their whole lifetime like same soul/reborn ykyk bc when she mentioned when he chose a mate he mentioned ab sumn like being stupid and didnt mean to ignore her or was that a hint to their first life idk
and then the whole only one dragon awaken every few centuries but all of a sudden theres 3 mf dragons?? like erm WHAT esp a child?
this fic has potential but gaw dayummm the pacing is so fast and theres too many plot introduced at the same time
its finally happening oml freaky ahh demon god wtf
also hwi dont tell me he died i need some typa redemption arc
bro the sudden face change of the colleague☠ get yo lonely ahh outta here
also ngl the body and facial proportions of fmc is wild☠
what the hell is happening i think imma let it brew so i can read it consecutively and have an idea whats going on
the last panel is so cute lee gun has always lived in isolation and basically only had one friend/comrade and now the last panel shows his whole new companionship as such i love ittt rahhhh
NOBODY IS GONNA GO ON YOUR STUPID WEBSITE AND GO READ THERE WITH ALL YOUR MALWARE ADS FFS
pls can someone upload the whole damn thing (pls)
like honestly ur gon promote your malware infested ad website like get out and delete your acc atp
can this dumbass dragon god/chinyoy not think that he is within enemy territory obv you gotta deal with the demon god but bffr u need to make a plan instead of leaping into reckless action
for a god he has negative battle iq
can mincheol just disappear alr he took over half the panels smh idc hes a piece of trash actually an understatement
In order to clear the name of 'Emi,' a girl who had reincarnated as Remilia, the villaines...
- Author: makiburo,shiraume nazuna
- Genres: Shoujo / Drama / Fantasy