this is an example of too much on a plate. there are too many story points that just appear out of nowhere just to never be explained afterwards. even though they eventually became quite a cute "couple"(?), their story was muddy and confusing.
a lot of potential that ended up not being used. also, the fact that they don't care how the fox feels and haven't even given him a name like,, okay.
this was so nice. and the fact it was better developed than the story with the fox, made me enjoy reading it.
(it was also interesting how different his wolf possession and the fox possession of akiha were.)
this was surprisingly SO GOOD. and the ending drawing of them sleeping together in their true forms really made me feel things aaaah. so good.
everything from the characters to the whole story, felt so real. this was so good. would love for it to have some extras too ngl,,
much better than I thought it would be. would have loved to see more, especially with them dating, since all they need to get healthier with time and to keep trying, (especially since one of the characters has something like antisocial personality disorder (which I find, is a nice change of pace, for an explanation for why he does what he does). STILL. I think it's a story that deserves/needs to be more explored.
this is a gem I'm always happy to reread. perfect comedy with amazing characters and relationships. I love them. I love the show. I just care about them so much waaah-
no. why is he, as a 39 years old man, going out with a 16/17 teen. like. no. and all the ways he described how he viewed the younger one as a kid but still had sex with him like. stop. stop romanticizing everything. if they really were infatuated with each other, and wanted to be together, they could have waited to start on the physical part. like. no.
I'm giving it one more star than it probably should just cause I really liked the older guy's background! like. I wasn't expecting it at all. but also. why would he be working in a school as an ex-convict especially a rapist? even if he was falsely accused, no one actually knew that so, wtf.
just to add. I enjoy fucked up stories too. but not when they try to pass it as "love" and "healthy" and so on like- who are you trying to fool here??
I don't know why the author didn't expand on the fact they literally said they wanted to be a girl. if they viewed liking girly stuff with being a girl and started to accept and like who they are, is one thing. if they're actually a girl, is another. gender is a spectrum of course,, but I find it a bit silly (and even close minded somehow) how these questions are not brought up by the main character. (just for context, I'm a trans guy :).
despite all that, I think it was extremely adorable,, so I don't want to give it a bad score,,
Frr if the didnt want to expand the story about the mc gender he shouldve worded or put light of the mcs interest in a different way,, cuz it rlly feels like the mc want to be viewed as a girl/woman
Omg why is my grammar so bad rn
don't worry ! my brain also isn't working rn ahah,, but yeah ! exactly !
forced myself to finish this cause I wanted to know if they'd have a nice development and talk about all the forced sex and how that's not okay,, but nope. it just kept happening till the end. the blond one was cute tho,,,, (also,, do these authors even know switch people exist??)
BTW. if you want to make a fucked up story, that's totally fine ! just stop brushing it off with "it's love" cause it's not.
THIS !!!