this is actually so good. but above all, I love how the development of the second volume is mainly about telling their families and friends, about their relationship. I just love how much thought was put into,, their thoughts ahahah.
if there's something that I would have liked to see more of, is their youth. I think the first volume suffered a bit because of the lack of flashbacks and so, but as it went on, it got better :)
it's adorable, but after rereading it (after a long while) I'm just left with the feeling it could be more developed, since it doesn't explain almost anything. making the choice of the prince actually being from another place in the world is,, fine? a bit weird since I think everyone thought it was a different world,, but that also makes it seem like there wasn't actually magic magic involved, but?? what about the magic mirror?? how? what? ,, besides that if they're actually from the same world, just from different places, how do they communicate so well? how do they speak the same language?? it could be have been fun to make the mirror have more powers and one is like, it helps translate what people are saying? plus, after they found each other again they would have to learn to communicate without magic help eheh,, that could be so cute. would also love to know where they got the mirror and why it started connecting both. because they were lonely and born from the same "tree"? you know what I'm saying?
with the amount of things the author could build upon, is a bit weird we were just left with no answers whatsoever,,, but I still find them absolutely adorable.
really nicely written,, gives you really interesting characters all around. and the mains? most adorable little guys. I'm so happy they found each other.
it's nice and I'm glad even after rereading after so long it still holds up quite well. but ! there are some things that I wish we could've seen cause it ended quite abruptly. Seunghyun 's friends suddenly disappeared from the plot? would have loved to see them actually meet Hojun face to face or at the very least for them to appear one more time after the couple got together. the "I'm a fake teacher", and the "scammer" drama, is a bit weird, cause you don't need a license to teach people about what you know (like, there are online courses for everything.) and in regards of what he was teaching, he knew what he was doing and even made sure to do his best,,, so I'm glad Hojun realized Seunghyun had actually studied a lot for their classes and actually wanted to teach him. (to add, I loved their classes, I think they were really well done). the thing with the ex, maybe there could have been more past drama since I felt it was a bit idk,, anticlimactic? the conversation with the drunk friend killed their relationship? then make the ex's answer a bit more rough or something,, make them talk more idk, he just said the topic was boring and to talk about something else like???,,, but I liked the way he ended up leaving the story, and that he wasn't a bad dude really.
all in all, for me, it's a fun and a bit undeveloped story but full of charm and I love the main characters relationship.
also. the rings? would have loved to see that but like- yeah sure,, (●￣(ｴ)￣●)
What ch was the threesome
both very nice,, I especially liked the second story, but wish it was just a bit longer ,, sigh,, wanted to see them actually realize they're head over heels with each other (and not just maybe interested),, but the ending is still okay, very very cute
and actually, especially in regards of the first one, this is the first time where I don't feel too bad about there being more than 1 story, and them being shorter, so ,, nice ahah
still, of course,, would love to get more of both
it's one of those that could have gone on and on and I wouldn't mind. just reread it after some years and I can say that I understand why it was on my favorites list ahahah.
it's very adorable, and the characters are all really well written,,
hmm I guess there's just two things that made me go like "damn, really,," (they're not bad btw !). one is that, there's a lot of little time skips and such in the story making some interactions that I really wanted to see, not happen,, such as game shows, interviews, more concerts (and other more personal situations),, I understand they weren't needed but,, I still wanted to see them
the other one is in regards of the ending! I think it's really cute and love them a lot (they could talk about adoption being an option too, but whatever),, however, a last chapter, where everyone appeared? like one of those massive shows with multiple groups, or even an award ceremony? so we could see them all interacting together "one last time", and maybe add some appearances of characters that just disappeared completely (which like- I understand the twins weren't important anymore but c'mon,,,) ,,,
oh- just to add,, I think not knowing their future is fine,, even though I wanted to see more,,, but imagine a huge timeskip, where they're old and wrinkly and happy
the plot point with the stalker client seemed a bit forced and like it appeared out of nowhere, since I don't remember he ever appearing in the first chapter(s) (which would have been important to happen, if it was supposed to have impact. even more since it was the only actual conflict,, plus it got resolved too quickly and suddenly.)
I also think it was a weird choice for it to be a misunderstanding "cheating" plot,, even more since there was so much more they could have done with the fact one of the members of the couple literally belongs to a yakuza family,,, which, unfortunately, doesn't matter at all to the story???
it just felt constantly like the author wasn't sure what to write.
it's okay, it was still fun and they're very cute,,, it just could be a lot better and that saddens me.
HOPE there's eventually a volume 2 that makes this story actually shine,, cause it desperately needs it ,,,,
didn't expect it to be so good,, two broken people scared of love but still wanting to be together in some way (I can relate, especially to ryo),, the character development is so good,,
side note but, I'm really glad this was well written cause not gonna lie, it could have gone bad at any moment with some rape between them or something like that- so I'm glad it wasn't the case.
i love how they fixed the misunderstandings, it's like what really happen in real life
yesyes exactly. it also wasn't forced nor did it feel like it. plus, their fears were valid af.
a lot of potential wasted on whatever this is.
there's quite a few interesting things (related to the dead and so on) ,, but other than that ?? this is such trash??? the relationship? disgusting. the plot? confusing as hell. idk what I just read,,
like- I reread this constantly,, it's really entertaining and cute,, but the way everyone prefers Kiri ,, I still think it's nice, but if the main dude was poly ??? oh boy. or even if he ended up with Kiri like- the story would be even more interesting ahdjdk,, besides we not getting to see any actual action between the main couple didn't help in the long run (they're still cute),,,
to add,,, the way the bully got off so easily and was forgiven just as if all he did was a silly joke?? was not it??? ,, should have gotten an actual nice redemption arc if the author wanted to have the four sillies as friends (which I think is fun, but also,, wouldn't happen like that in the slightest. like- I fully believe Kiri doesn't know about what the dude did in the end, cause otherwise, he wouldn't be standing.)
it needs more volumes. I need at least one more. or a Kiri story.