he’s so oblivious it’s starting to hurt my brain a bit…
a wholesome and freaky couple, how refreshing.
also i rlly fw the dialogue… while i can’t pinpoint what exactly makes it like fun to read, it just feels so natural yet new (in a good way)
i almost don’t want mori to find his “real”/biological parents, like those two r his family !!
Wait isn’t that with white hair his mother?
no she is his sponsor the one that bought him all the gifts
the way this is progressing it’s giving short story but i could be wrong
both characters (THE BROTHER HE RAISED AND HIS BOYFRIEND) involving themselves with a person they understand is fuck ass and being semi-surprised at it backfiring and having consequences (ones that we have yet to see too but i’m sure will occur…)
i just feel bad for the mc atp, whole circle is just trashy whether intentionally being so or not.
i’m sorry but i can only laugh when reading ts, the dialogue deadass feels so unnatural at times/silly because it feels like they’re going out their way to emphasize the toxicity of the seme when they don’t need to:
like i’ll just be reading a line of dialogue and immediately go “???” after processing it.
you wouldn’t even have to change a single detail in the image drawn, JUST tweak the line a bit to not sound toxic and it would make this sm more refreshing, normal, and not werid asf— like atp i’m just wondering “why?” like he didn’t even pursue him in a crazy toxic way, they just had a bad misunderstanding. but now that they’re together it just feels like they’re making him way “worse” even though he was technically always like this.
point being i genuinely don’t remember it being this drastic imo. it rlly just needs some toning down ngl
i just rlly don’t like that there wasn’t a stronger reaction to the fact he was getting prostituted out by his sister and that he felt obligated to please her, implying coercion, implying non-consensual actions… like what happened?
this was def rushed, which is disappointing but oh well…
wow he looks fine asf passed out, the hair flowing down and the back arched asf??! mhmmm, now that’s what i’m talking about
girl
LMAOOO
skipped thru chapter 9 with a quickness, adds nothing to the plot and heavily implied grooming