RUSHED. That’s all I can say lol. At least...25-30 more chapters could have been squeezed out of a story concept like this, definitely no less than 20 (if it was written properly ofc). But when I look at the story overall...I imagine that this is what mediocre BL stories on wattpad look like ╮(￣▽￣)╭
That escalated quickly (⊙…⊙ ) I wanted to see more of the brother and how he would become involved in the plot. What a bummer tbh..
Cain you’re a demon, I’m gonna need for you to calm down with that dreamy sweetheart facial expression you made ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
Her hair may be shorter now but does she really look that much like a boy because of it? Her features and voice are the same plus you can see some of her curves (well her breast at least) throw the baggy clothes. Are you that dense? LOLOL
That stable boy or whatever the hell he is needs to check himself. You’re gonna “teach her a lesson” just because she’s explaining the poison and medicine? Fall back and sit down, I hope to see him less often in the story after the horse is cured
“If you let me, I’ll be there for her. I’ll protect you both...I’ll never hurt you again...dad, mom, wait for me.”
For Christ sake someone hand me a tissue, PLEASE!! T~T
I almost started to jump up and down when he punched Jiang Wenxu in the face, he deserved it!! And then he testified the TRUTH and shut the door in his damn face, yeeesss!!
And I, oop- (⊙…⊙ )
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