Now why she just standing off to the side like that, look i got no problem with her. But we need a voice of reason rn to calm someone down or hype them up. She being to passive to be this deep in the story.
I geniuely have no idea whats actually going on
The omega is tasked by the system to make the alpha fall in love with him. The alpha feels repulsed by the fact he's becoming attracted to the omega. But in the end he starts falling for him and he asked him out. Which part is confusing for you?
I get the system and the alpha part, im not talking about the outline, its just everything in-between confuses me. Like the build up between scenes and shit, than the scenes thereselves I get the context... but after the first chapters and me going along with actual plot of it all however wonky it was i started getting lost on how certain feelings and things where developed.
I'll reread at some point and I'll update you.
For now iirc the alpha started feeling 1) that the omega isn't sincere in his feelings twds him bcz he sees the omega talking to another alpha (2nd ML) and then he got jealous. That's the turning point. Then he got upset when the omega started to not pay attention to him. He was used to being fawned over. His love meter didn't move up until now. The omega hasn't developed feelings, as far as I am aware. I read this story before the translation took a hiatus so the prev memory needs double checking. The omega only comes to him when the system calls, so that's why the inconsistencies in his "expressions of love" and the rest of the time between missions, which confuses the ML. Lol - so then he starts developing more of a secure attachment style than any real love. Over time he finds the quirky omega cute. (Aka, Entertaining). After overcoming suspicions of the omega being sent by an enemy. And recently he sees the omega isn't enticing him via pheromones and somehow appreciates that and takes it to mean he's serious about him. Not seduction but being interested in him. Not trying to sway him w pheromones. At this point his appreciation for the omega went up. And so does his love meter. Also, the omega is super strong 'n can come up head-to-head with him. Things he finds admirable. Like the martial arts match. And recently the pheromones match. Lol
I dont fuck with him but that old man shouldve put him through extensive therapy before giving him glove, im just gonna assume his college years was a mess and he got comfortable with being a shit person.
I know it's fiction, but do you really think they had the privilege to send him to therapy?
Man u right the probably didnt have or know of any alternative. I mean in school counseling but honestly thatd only get you so far and that is if the counselor is compent
Whoever made this needs their browser history checked
Im not gonna lie if he said he wanted a true duel after those timelines I would've been real disrespectful and told him to try and stand up after doing him dirty. Becuase what you mean? This is a death fight, man are dying in your trying to duel?
True like this is a war? A real battlefield where lives are at risk and you're more focused on having a duel?
Ill be back in ten chapters, need to let this wall sit.
I saw the rating and comments, and was like, what could possibly be that bad? Like really I seen some fucked up stories with atleast 6 or 7 something ratings so I looked. And maneee, it is that bad. I shouldn't have read this.
Let's count off the the shit that got me.
1. Art style, I typically stomach stuff with a bad art style if the plot is good. And I've seen people do the same with terrible plots on top of terrible art. But this doesn't make up for it at all. (One chapter, I'm pretty sure his head was levitating by a straight line)
2. Shitty art style but they still jump straight into porn. Okay people rated worse shit higher, gotcha. I mostly phased past the sex scenes while singling out issues.
3. He looks like a fucking child but is 24 which was surprising but im sure that's the author trying not to get flagged. That is a fucking child there's no reason he should be that short in comparison. He looks like a preteen when the ML lifts him.
4. Didn't think it would be OUTRIGHT rape thought it be some werid pseudo incest shit after the wife was noted of. And I don't know what's worse. He was raped not once but twice than technically ever time after because he was brainwashed and tricked into doing those marriage papers.
5. That golf park shit i barely read, that blonde 'couple' was some fucking form of incest and statutory rape because you ain't telling me that boy isn't twelve and they aren't look alike.
6. The boys dick! I save this for last, because wtf? I finally noticed it in the last chapter after zooming through. It's four inches AT MOST, even blurred.
7. Again the penis, your not telling me that's not a fucking child because he sure isn't 24. (No offense to the small kings.)
The author is freaked out, and baby, you haven't seen the half of it. This looks like something some gacha heat kid would make.
I actually thought he was a middle school child. I thought since apparently ml isn't in jail, mc would be like 20. Mc is 24 and ml is 44. In my opinion a 20 year age gap just sounds bad
This is mildly concerning but im messy so im curious