This is a good draft!
I had a couple of questions and suggestions:
- Do you have a maximum word count?
- And what kind of scholarship is it? Academic, financial aid?
If it’s a financial aid scholarship, I recommend placing greater emphasis on the challenges you've faced. Don’t be afraid to shed light on your struggles; This not only humanises...... reply
I don't know... Like yeah, I have tokophobia, but it's not just the physical pain I'm scared of; It's what I have to lose.
The moment you have a child, your whole life is changed; it's irreversible.
I respect all amazing and brave mothers who love and cherish their kids, but motherhood comes with a cost: losing your best self, and I don't think I'...... reply