Yoonald's Topics (157)

You’re so funny did you realize it only towards the end ? (yeah this story is fucked but it’s done so well I’m here for this lol)

I tried to ignore it but omg

I mean, the whole plot is about sex and giving what readers want to see

A story doesn't need complex characters and a lot of backstory to hold attention

simple can be good

But that's the problem, it doesn't have a good simple plot. I mean I don't expect a masterpiece but just a cohesive plot, but I can see where your coming from

Are you sure you're an author? Just because you write something doesn't make you one

Author (noun)- a person who creates written work: a writer

Nah you right. Like, the sex is kinda hot but damn not one singular consent has been given. Also, so much trauma to work through together, not a single incidence of that either, no growth

Oh might have touched a nerve there. I am just simply pointing out bad writing is all and if you are offended then you can simply just say that

What do you mean by the characters are poorly written? In what way exactly?

Don't flatter yourself. Just saying. The characters are written so well though. Just because you don't like the story doesn't mean it is bad. It means it's not your taste.
And just because you wrote something, doesn't mean you're an author, or maybe it does. What have you wrote??? Give me the name. I will see if your characters are well written. I am a bookworm you see. If you don't want to give me the name of your book, or manga then .... hypocrite.

You're so real for this!!!

The characters are written excellently well. They are realistic and they react how they are supposed to due to the situation. I don't know what this user is saying. You're an author and you're not able to tell if a story is badly written? I laugh.

Wow, you are very offended. I don’t know why, but to call me a hypocrite because I choose to critically analyze this piece of work is funny and you can go and search anything that has to do with writing to tell you this isn’t a well written story. The characters barley have any real motivations. The characters of this story have no depth, they’re repetitive, and half the times the actions of the male lead makes no sense. In order for a well written story is strong characters. They lack any motivation nor do they have any real clear goals and lack substance. The story is simply boring. There’s nothing that engages me or many of the other people who have shared their opinions. This story barley checks off that list. I mean come on this story isn’t good. I mean the authors other work BJ Alex checked most of what I just listed.The only positive thing I can say is the art style. You can like what you like but for me I’m just gonna post my opinion.

I am just going to say this it is important to critically think and analyze the content you consume, whether that content is considered good or bad. I don’t need to prove to you how I am a better writer nor am I flattering myself. I am a person that chooses to critically think about the good and bad within the stories I choose to read. If you are offended that I choose to present my opinion that is fine. This isn’t a matter of taste but a matter of the importance of good writing

The most important thing they tell when you write a story is your characters. If you do not have good strong chars you do not have a good story. You clearly don’t know what you are talking about because it is very clear that these characters are one dimensional. Your comment clearly tells me you need to pick up a writing class if you think this is what a well written character looks like. The situations present within the story are not realistic, they only serve a purpose to play out a situation ( that situation leading up to the sex scenes). Any person who works with creating characters for a tv show, comic, etc, would tell you this is not what a well written character looks like. It seems to me you are going based of what you perceive to be entertaining to you and equating that to a good character. I am very sorry that you cannot clearly see this is a bad story. I sincerely laugh at your response.

You still haven't explained how the characters are badly written though. You're saying words but with no meaning to them. Explain how the characters are badly written and how they are unrealistic, let me understand how much of a good author you are

Right? And where is the book or manga that they mentioned??? I want to analyse their characters so bad

Same here lol.

Ok since you seem to not understand what my comment meant and entails I will explain it to you. Since you are illiterate. Jaekyung is a one dimension character. He has no clear motivations to his character. From the 38 chapters I have read, the only thing we know about his character is that he is a boxer, rich, and needs to have sex before a big match. We don't get a reason as to why he chooses to have sex with him or why he even chooses to. The only thing this man does is constantly rapes the main character with no thought. The author thought sprinkling "well Jaekyung might like you doc", as some kind of way to attempt to say "see he likes doc so therefore the actions we've seen him do are ok, cause he likes him". The only "plot" shown is the constant sex thrown at the screen. There is little build but those sex scenes and they just don't serve the purpose that's supposed to be there. I do not have a problem with story just being sex as I've read plenty of those before but this? This story can't even put together a reason as to why they should be together. One of the most important things in a romance story is a reason for why these two characters should be together. There is none.I mean come on they say he likes him in them the next scene he pours coke over his head? He is in no way complex either. His motivations aren't even known or hinted at at all. He's a boring character, because all he does is "be mean" and feel entitled to sex with the main character. Doc on the other hand is just a character that serves the purpose of being a cum doormat. I mean his motivations to stay in that relationship were absolved when he Jaekyung payed for the rest of debt he owed to those people. That scene was only added to show that he wasn't an asshole, but completely became useless because he isn't consistent with his actions. Doc himself is just a boring character where all he does is complain about a situation that realistically no one would stay in. The only purpose his character serves is to really just be there. Before you try to say that it's only 38 chapters, I have read better stories with less chapters that have better characters and writing.Constancy is key when writing a character.complex characters are important. A motive is important.I've only listed a couple of problems with the characters and writing.As I've told you before this isn't a good story. I am very surprised that someone who claims to know what good writing is can't even understand what I said. That in itself is very sad

I will forward you some well written pieces that you should check out. Full volume, shutline, lost in the clouds, and 19 days have better characters than this lol. I don't need to prove to someone who is offended by me being critical of a poorly written story

Offended? We wanted answers to how the characters are badly written. But you gave us none.

you ate with this. everyone wants u to explain why the characters are bad but they don’t even offer an explanation on why they think the characters are well written lol. kinda entitled tbh, since op did explain and all you guys can do is whine and not refute any of the claims they state . u don’t have to be a three star michelin chef to know a meal is bad just like you don’t HAVE to be a writer to know when a story isn’t good.

idk why some ppl are bagging on you that you have to prove you write. it was pretty obvious and clear that op didn’t mean it made them a better writer, it just meant they had experience with storytelling and using plot devices and see that this author is struggling with it this time around. getting soo offended over a readers opinion is so weird like y’all came on too strong and aggressive for no reason haha

Dude the characters are written so well though. And besides I already read all of those mangas. And they are written well except for full volume, now that is one meaning less manga. Just sex and 2 dimensional.

I just gave you multiple explanations . I'm starting to think you can't read

Omg THANK YOU. That was exactly the point I was trying to make but for some apparent reason people don't understand

Full volume although not as good has better writing than jinx in my opinion. Also jinx is quite literally full of sex just like full volume, except for the fact that the author realizes that a character needs motives and character development which was present within the story. I am interested in what you find jinx to be well written and would like to hear your opinion

no prob!! saw that randos were being rude for no reason when this wasn’t even a controversial take. if they wanted u to change opinions abt the story they should’ve explained why it was good or how the characters are fleshed out but it’s been silent. i mean this in the nicest way possible but some people have brain rot from only reading this, not for the story, but for the porn. ignore the manhwa person dude they keep bashing on people who criticize jinx and it’s gotten so funny seeing them scramble to attack everyone. im peeping the comments (for entertainment), and keep seeing how this individual only says harsh things to the many people who disagree with the story’s direction lmao. like that person must be soo bored, touch deprived, and disgustingly horny to think this is peak fiction/only bash on readers with different takes than them… like PLEASE unclench and relax

The chats cleared…im reading now

Oh, I see where you're coming from. You're going off based on motivation. That's not all about a poorly written-character. It is safe to say the characters aren't written perfectly well but to say they are written poorly is just a big no from me. It's not because I'm a fan, it's just what it is from my pov.

Let me ask you a question. Does romance need to be structured in a way the characters must have a reason for being together? Is that how things work in real life? Is that how things work in other romance stories? No.

Details of a well-written character:
one with a complex and relatable emotional side: I don't know what version of Jinx you've been reading, maybe the rape has made you blind to other aspects of the story, but Jk is relatable based on the emotional side. There's obviously a reason why he treated Dan awfully in the past two chapters. He's an athlete, they often tend to become very stressed when pressured. Anyone would feel enraged and restless when they're scared, uneasy, and pressured. His behaviors were understandable. About exposing Dan’s privates to Heesung, it is clear he's new to being emotionally attached to a person, so he acts in the worst way possible just to claim Dan. Try looking from his pov and understand his character.

interesting and thought-provoking goals or philosophies: His beliefs are abnormal, and he thinks the only way to succeed is to train nonstop, with no rest. He has a weird mentality and anyone would be able to understand that this man grew up in a bad way.

a dynamic character arc: I do not care what you say but it is only 38 chapters, This plot (and the conflict it creates) is what will trigger their journey, pushing them to take action, face difficult trials, and slowly evolve. This upcoming match will definitely have an impact on their relationship.

Season 2 will be a huge blast, I think mingwa would start to show more of JK’s POV. Her pace is quite unique and flowing. Understand the characters to predict how they're gonna evolve. It's the author's story, not yours and how she makes the characters evolve has nothing to do with you. Most situations here are quite realistic, maybe you prefer the cliche fluff romance? Anyone should understand that this is a toxic relationship, y'all should expect worse lmao. Mingwa was very specific.

Let's allow the story to progress. Your impatience is not needed. You either cope or leave if this ain't your cup of tea. I see so many reasons why mingwa adds so many fucked up things. This book is gonna be a long, sad, exhausting, and blissful ride. Let's see how things turn out pal. You need the full story to judge a book eh? Chill.

I'm still wondering why you're assuming that we're offended. Maybe @Arts is but I'm not at all. Not in the slightest. Just curious about your opinion is all.

Full volume had poorly written characters, don't even go there omg
Shut line is progressing slowly but the characters ain't the best either.
19 Days does not have too well-written characters actually…the fact that the chapters are always short is just a big no from me.
I haven't read Lost in the Clouds but I will definitely give it a try.

About Jinx, I noticed you don't like the personalities of the characters that's why you assume that they're poorly written. You haven't understood their personalities at all. You don't expect the personalities of those two to grow instantly. There have been slight changes between the characters and I feel Season 1 is going off based on JK’s Jinx only. For you to read 19 days and judge Jinx in this manner is quite questionable lol.

These are my own yaois of well written characters.

•painter of the night
•Dangerous convenience store
•dont mix business with pleasure
•the abyss
•a painter behind the curtains.

You should read them, they're really good!

“I just gave you multiple explanations . I'm starting to think you can't read“

“The most important thing they tell when you write a story is your characters. If you do not have good strong chars you do not have a good story. “ okay. Not really explanation on Jinx

“You clearly don’t know what you are talking about because it is very clear that these characters are one dimensional.” Personal attack. A personal attack shows you know you lost the debate somehow and trying to discredit your opponent. Here you are degrading your opponent because you feel inferior. You are also lying about the story. The story isn’t one dimensional as she put lots of thought and research into the story and characters.
You are missing many important details and points if your “opinion” is “one dimensional”


“Your comment clearly tells me you need to pick up a writing class if you think this is what a well written character looks like. “. Not an explanation and you are personally attacking again. Your “argument” against him can be said about you too.



“The situations present within the story are not realistic, they only serve a purpose to play out a situation ( that situation leading up to the sex scenes).” The sex scenes are the plot. You are dismissing the story to rant. What story is realistic?


“Any person who works with creating characters for a tv show, comic, etc, would tell you this is not what a well written character looks like.”

You don’t know much about trauma victims do you? She did her homework.

It seems to me you are going based of what you perceive to be entertaining to you and equating that to a good character. I am very sorry that you cannot clearly see this is a bad comments In degrading others to falsely rant. I sincerely laugh at your rants and personal attacks on others as they say you are insecure about yourself and can’t handle criticism.

“Since you are illiterate”. Why the personal attacks?


“Jaekyung is a one dimension character. He has no clear motivations to his character.”
No he is a deep. He does have motivation. You missed all the clues.
You are also calling him a boxer. He is not a boxer. He is a MMA fighter. Two different sports.

What have you read in the last 38 chapters? He craves an emotional connection from Dan. He is more of a tsundere. He has protected and defended Dan. He went out of his way to for Dan. He behaves like a 14 year old at times. He is an aggression. Most of the time he is reserved and quiet. He has a trigger that causes him to be aggressive. He wants to know what Dan thinks and likes. I can go on and on. You can paint it like it one dimensional and he is one dimensional but the real story is clearly different from your opinion.
He chooses Dan because he was into Dan. There is no rape in Jinx. There is sexual assault, sexual coercion, abusive and two attempts of rape but by Jaekyung. He does have thought on it. It is showed.
It seems you are focusing on the sex and non existent elements to actually see the story.
You need to read BJ Alex and compare. You need to remember this is a contract relationship not a romantic relationship yet. They are not boyfriends yet. They are not really together.
Jaekyung is complex. His motivations are hinted at. You took everything at face value instead of looking at the story deeper. He is an interesting character. Dan isn’t a doormat or a cum doormat. What is boring is your opinion and personal attacks.
It really seems like you have not taking the time to understand the story. You missed many important points and took things at face value. You don’t even understand Dan. I guess the story and characters are too complex? It is very sad how you attack others. And that levi person is a person who trolls to stir up trouble.

You are correct. I only see an opinion with no explanation and personal attacks.

From reading this the only one offended is you

If this story was turned in for a writing class, the instructor would point out the same criticisms you’ve given for Jinx. This shows to me (at least) that you are likely a good writer. Yaoi emphasizes sexual relationships over romance and literally means, “no climax, no point, no meaning”. By this definition, Jinx is your basic yaoi. I agree that It’s poorly written and it seems to be a caricature of itself, but it’s capitalized on notoriety and a cult-following. With that kind of marketing, it only needs a basic plot and pretty characters to sell itself

exactly! no arguing here, that this story wasn’t made to have think pieces and made solely for “light” entertainment. making observations and pointing out the inconsistencies in the relationship build up and how the characters progress throughout the story is literally just for fun and like you said the whole basis for these types of stories is pretty characters, sex, and easy plot

i haven’t seen a single good argument of people defending the writing in general because the romance has been dead this whole time. it sucks that we all know it’s fiction but in between the harsh raping and daily harassment/inconveniences, dan and jae have literally never emotionally bonded like COME ON NOW

ew @ weirdo TM

my god i tried to hear you out, i really did but to say there is no rape in JINX? of all stories
sincerely, you need help. i really hope you don’t carry this mindset irl because having a binding contract with someone where sex and money are exchanged does not mean consent is always given. to dissect your input:

when talking about his motivation, it’s not just the endgame of him wanting to become the best in his field but wanting to know why he plans to achieve this, how he was pushed in this direction, and any hints as to why this is so important to him. fyi saying that he’s deep but all we know is his jinx, what he wants in his career, and why he chose dan doesn’t make him deep? those are so surface level and don’t venture into his character at all. and before u say to give the story time, those things have to be slowly added in the story!! that’s what it means to create build up. you say he wants dan emotionally but what specific scenes are you recalling? and the assumptions you made over his feelings for dan aren’t even definitive or hinted at in any chapter. this whole time he’s only been possessive over him whenever dan has the attention of other people or straight up aggressive to him, and takes it out on dan whether that be through social humiliation or fucking him so roughly even though he’s yelling no and begging jae to stop? like where is the tsundere in that? when has he shown signs of wanting to know dan as a person and not use him as his own fuck toy regardless of how dan feels or where they’re at?

they have such a huge power imbalance and not just money/social wise, but the fact that dan is easily overpowered by jae in strength and stature. do you realize that even if their contract states jae can have sex with dan whenever/wherever he wants, the moment that dan disagrees it’s rape? just because the sex is legally binding doesn’t mean it’s all nilly willy bud

btw you’re forgetting in bj alex, the mc already had a crush on ml and idolized the man + his channel so much. mc was already willing to do whatever it takes to be by his side… very different from jae buying his way into dan, harassing him both public ally/privately, and having sex without dan’s say in it. jae was his savior the moment he paid off his debt and that was really the only “good” thing he did for him

also u keep mentioning that the story is deeper and that these are surface level mentions, but it looks like youre projecting the story you want for dan and jae LOL. because you aren’t describing the “hints” you mention other than implying they exist and also creating a storyline that hasn’t been supported (jae having feelings). btw this man is supposed to be 26… he should not be acting like a kid throwing a hissy fit because he has to share his favorite toy. and i have a feeling you won’t read this because you’re too busy living in your delusion that this story is oh so deep and telling

Why did no one reply to me? Triggered?

Thank you! Omg! You gave some good points right there! The rape that they claim it is has blinded them into understanding the story LOL. I was arguing with this @Levi account and they just seemed so unstable and impatient about the story. This might not be the best romance but if we look at it from the characters and their situations, you won't just expect a huge bond to form between them. The romance has to be slow.

I have noticed that Jaekyung is very bad at admitting to things. It's really obvious he feels that way but he denies them to seem like a strong individual. One who sees love as a distraction to his career or something, so he tries his best to cancel those thoughts or make others do the same.

@Silent seems very genuine and I agree with some of the things she said. But it's still her opinion and how she sees the story. I just wish they could look past the rape they claim it to be and understand the story more.

There is sexual assault, sexual coercion, abuse, and two attempts of rape but not * by Jaekyung. whoops.
That was a bad typo.

@levipleaseSTOPTROLLING

My second comment.. "You need to read BJ Alex and compare."
Dan had a crush on Jaekyung in Chapter 1. Jaekyung did not "buy" his way in.

Dear levipleasecallmeback. Stop trolling people to feel better about yourself. I said "And that levi person is a person who trolls to stir up trouble." THANK YOU FOR PROVE THAT FOR ME!



"ew @ weirdo TM"
-A pathetic attack with insults. This shows you already know you lost the debate and trying to discredit your opponent because you can't handle being wrong. It shows insecurities and lack of communication skills.

"my god i tried to hear you out, i really did but to say there is no rape in JINX? of all stories" No you just read what you wanted to make a rant to attack with lies and insults to feel better about yourself. Why do you have to harm a real person to feel better about yourself.

"sincerely, you need help." I am being honest and factual. I am ordinary. I am not trying to harm someone to feel better about myself. Your reply is abusive so far. Take your own advice. This was disgusting and more abusive than the story.

"i really hope you don’t carry this mindset irl because having a binding contract with someone where sex and money are exchanged does not mean consent is always given." That is your false imposing argument on me to degrade me as you feel superior and feel better about yourself. CHILDISH DISGUSTING BEHAVIOR.
That is gaslighting too.

" to dissect your input:"
you failed to dissect my input.
You unnecessarily explained his motivation. That shows to me you did not read my comments. You did not give me a chance as you said. He chose Dan because he was interested in Dan.
"before u say to give the story time," That is you putting words in my mouth and assuming what I would say. You are camping here and attacking people. You can't handle a civil conversation. "oh my god, they have a different opinion. They seem like real target auidence of Jinx. I must attack them and tell them they need help because I have no rational arguments. I need to feel better about myself instead of listening to them."
I would tell you and others like you to find more productive things to do than attack people over a trivial story. You are wasting your time. You are now wasting my time over your ridiculous trolling.
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The story says he wants dan emotionally. If I point out what is obvious would you listen? I have made no assumptions. His feelings are hinted at since chapter 1.
The story crushes your trolling opinion. The truth crushes your opinion. You are just attacking me over saying what is truth. What are you scared of? Heesung even sees it.
lol. It seems you are reading your own fanfic. I subscribe to Jinx, not your fanfic. I read the story. You will not fool me. Dan has yelled no but at the loan sharks and the hospital director. He has not begged either.
There are many places of him being a tsundere. There are places where he wants to know Dan as a person. He has never viewed Dan as a sex toy. Dan thinks he is and you are going from Dan's side.
You are not reading the real story. what you are saying is not the real story. You just wanted to spread the nonsense to attack me. I had you blocked for a reason.
You do know Dan has the power, right? it was shown a few times. You are taking things at face value. look deeper. Do you need me to hold your hand?
Why talk about the contract? The contract is legally binding. None are. And your point about rape doesn't stand.



https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/sexual-coercion#what-it-is
Sexual coercion is when a person pressures, tricks, threatens, or manipulates someone into having sex. It is a type of sexual assault because even if someone says yes, they are not giving their consent freely.

if you look at the examples of sexual coercion only one is considered rape.

https://www.healthdirect.gov.au/sexual-assault-and-rape#consent

Sexual assault is any unwanted behaviour of a sexual nature that makes a person feel uncomfortable, frightened or threatened. It can occur when a person is forced, tricked or coerced into sexual behaviour without agreeing to it.


https://florinroebig.com/sexual-assault-guide/. 




Rape is a form of sexual assault. However, not all forms of sexual assault will be considered rape. 


https://my.clevelandclinic.org/health/articles/4538-rape-and-date-rape


Rape is a form of sexual assault in which a person (man, woman or child) is forced to engage in sexual relations (vaginal, anal or oral) against his or her will or without having given consent. Often an attacker will use physical force in committing rape; however, rape also occurs when someone uses threats of violence or emotional force or manipulation to engage an individual in sex.





Jeakyung has did many good things for Dan besides pay off his debt. I read the story. You will not fool me. Stop trying. It is disgusting and shows how unstable you are.

The story is deeper as she did her research.. I am not projecting anything. You are projecting a disgusting heinous story for Jinx while attacking others with lies. You need your own advice.
There is no point with describing the points as for one they are clear in the story and it is a waste of time with trolls, like you who only want to attack real people to feel better about themselves instead of learning about the story. Please grow up. The storyline is clear. Jaekyung does have feelings. Stop making me the story. It is you creating a storyline. You missed when I said he acts like he is 14. Showing you did not read my comments once again. Dan is not a toy to him. I read your insecure toxic disgusting reply on your delusions that only attacked and insulted me because you can't handle a civil conversation or being wrong. The one that is too busy living in a delusion in this story, is not me. You just prove that. Many times over.

Stop being abusive and toxic. Leave me alone, troll.

Levi was triggered. Lol!

I couldn't have said it BETTER!!! PREACH!!!

One of the reasons why I adore TM

My comment got cut off.

One of the reasons why I adore TM, such an admirable person

I thought so!

Your welcome, and if I had the story fresh in my head I probably would have gave more! It seems they need someone to hold their hand and explain the complexity of this story. Why do they keep wanting to add romance?
They need to go read BJ Alex. Levi is person trolling. They are harming people instead of talking to them. They do seem unstable. They add so much to the story they miss the real story. It is a slow burn. They need to understand that.

Jaekyung is bad at admitting to things. Like: “ I hate flowers”. No dude you are jealous. lol. He is bad at communicating and doesn’t have those skills to I guess?
It could be because of your reasoning.

With Silent I wish the same. But unfortunately, I have stopped reading her comments due to what I believe was a misunderstanding between us but she took harmless DM comments and made it look more when she threw us under the bus when someone else lied on someone’s else gaslighting post.
The gaslighting post was a complete lie. They were harassing us and on one was harassing that person. Tora and I were not even making comments but accused of harassing them. One was a new account. That one account was the one person who talked to the OP. The rest either avoided her or were not making comments. People believe the OP on her lies.

Some one came in talking about how they got multiple DM from different people but they only got two messages from Tora. Tora only asked them if they wanted him to talk to me. The word apologize was not even in Tora’s messages. But Silent believed that lie.
I will never understand Slient’s response. “ So the dm thing wasn't just happening to me. Good to know”. She implied it was a bad thing.
What happened: She had me blocked and I noticed she seemed genuine. So I ask Tora to DM her asking why. Then his second response was like a month later saying I couldn’t DM her for a gitch. His DM messages were harmless to her. She quickly threw him under the bus on a lie.
My replies were harmless and friendly. One she believed I was assuming her thoughts but I was just pleading with her. So, she is quick to believe the lies from the trolls.
She also told me 10/09/2023 in DM “You won’t see me in the Jinx section again” she has been here many times. That is okay. That is her decision and she is welcomed here. I told her I wanted her to be here in my next reply.
So I really don’t understand why she threw us under the bus.
I don’t like bringing up what is said in private up but I have a point. This is more about me than her.

However, I will say this soon no one will see me as TM SM YZ in Jinx section again once I deleted this damage account with all the character assassination from the trolls.
She does seem cool but be careful. I have been slient for weeks. The drama still exists. I never caused it or created it. I only step up to the existing drama. That drama will was be here. I was just made a joke and a target because I wanted to make this a safe space for ALL comments but trolls being trolls with their gaslighting are always going to be here harming people. They are just trying to blame others.

That is one of the worst explanations for a character. This is a fictional romance novel, not real life. You need to develop a reason for your characters to be together. That is a core aspect of a relationship that quite literally has been told time and time again when writing a story, especially a romance story. That is a fact. The ML has no clear motivations as to why he treats him like that. From what I am gathering you are trying to make up excuses as to why his character acts that way, but that's the issue his character hasn't been fleshed out. You need to flesh out a character in order for a good story. Within those 38 chapters the author could have added a backstory, define a clear reason as to why they're together. A better reason overall. I don't expect this sorry to be fluffy or soft. But what I and others are criticizing is it's lack of writing. This story just doesn't care about it's characters. They have very little defining characteristics. I am going to say this in the nicest way possible, but you are coming up with reasons that are not there. Those are not qualities of a well written character. Those are just surface level reasons that just aren't present. This story is aiming for the characters to be together by a scrapping pieces to make a story. Not a well written one. Please realize that it is important as an author to develop your characters as early as you can. So that you can develop them properly over the course of the story. Yes it is the authors story, and I'm allowed to critic it any way I want.

Although full volume is not super well written it is still better than jinx with developing a relationship with the characters and defining a reason as to why they should be together and why they are together. 19 days are short because the author chooses to make them short and has way better writing than jinx. The personalities you claim are present in jinx really aren't there. I am criticizing them based on the important factors of what makes a good character. 19 days is much better than jinx and that is a fact. Those characters have motivations, are complex, have back stories, and are better at developing the characters overtime. Jinx isn't a good story. You seem to be a big fan of the author and that may be clouding your judgement to critically engage with this content

You are absolutely disgusting to use rape and sexual assault to disprove of what that comment said. They are correct in their critique of this story. Rape is rape no matter how much you want to defend in this story. For you to claim they are trolling is hilarious. They had good points that you refuse to listen to. What the ML did in this story is rape. Though fictional. It is a romanticization of rape. For the love of God listen and stop being offended

LOLL not those two slow folks having matches in the comments… it’s sad. didn’t reply to the first weirdo because their opinion isn’t worth hearing out or replying to. they can argue with themselves, i know they need the daily mental stimulation they can’t get with real people. read maybe until the second half of TM’s, until i realized they need medical attention for using therapy words OVER A DEBATE ABOUT RAPE AND A FICTIONAL STORY? LMAO?? both of y’all have no common sense and it’s clear that you’re unstable when it comes to this story. relax, no one is gaslighting you for saying there is rape or trying to explain their perspective. i think this story created the worst breeds of yaoi diehards because obviously the rape defenders stuck together like the birds they are. im begging you to post your opinion on a reddit forum and see what rational people think about your dissection of the characters/story. because safe to say, most porn addicts and incels will agree with you while the majority will offer insight that you probably can’t even begin to comprehend. have fun

they like personal attacks and victimizing themselves > valid explanations. it feeds their ego and need for people to talk to them :(

you’re kind for being patient and STILL trying to explain your perspective while also staying true that this is only a personal opinion that doesn’t affect anyone

You clearly don't know what a complex character is. What you just listed are not aspects of a character, the clues you say are not even present, I mean what are his actual reasons for staying together with Dan? Dan isn't a good character either. He doesn't even have a clear reason as to why he is in this relationship. My opinion is not a personal attack. Do you think this sorry is going to get an A+ when the characters aren't even realistic in their motivations or actions? The story isn't complex. It simply just evolves off of tropes. I understand Dan from a perspective of a writer. He as a motivationan. His grandmother and her health. He needs money. So he trades sex for money. A transaction. But we don't evolve from there. Sure there's a push towards the plot, but it's barley there The only things that are present is quite literally the sex. That's the selling pint of the story. A very bad story. The author can develop a sex scene, but not a plot. To claim their is no rape is funny. The literal definition of rape is to force intercourse onto a person. That is what the ML has done within this story. I am simply frustrated because you and that other person cannot even tell what a good character looks like.

I have you explanations. You just don't understand them. To claim that I am insecure is very funny. I am secure in my opinion and I have expressed that. Of course there is a level of unrealistic plot points in a story that is a given. But with any story there is always going to need to be a realistic outcome in how a character reacts or acts within a situation. A sex scene is not a plot. It is just something that adds to a plot and should not be a plot unless it is explicitly said to be. This is not a realistic outcome of what a trauma victim would react like realistically. If this is what you claim a good written trauma development then my god you need help. If you cannot handle constructive criticism of a story you like than maybe you should not be trying to critic what I said. I pointed out errors in this story that are not present. I gave a reason and explained. And as I said you are going based of what is entertaining to you and not the story as a whole. This is a story that doesn't care about fleshing out it's characters. Any person who reads my comments would understand what I am saying. You cannot.

Yeah it's getting pretty tiring that they keep attacking you. Your right in what you said. I'm trying to get my point across but man, if they were against up a professional writer they would not win

"You are absolutely disgusting to use rape and sexual assault to disprove of what that comment said. "

That is abusive and an insult. When you judge others, you don't define them, you define yourself. You are not harming me. You are degrading yourself. You can't handle a civil conversation or handle being wrong. You have to attack and gaslight.
That is abusive. That is what is disgusting. I am not your toy to feel about about yourself. If you have a miserable life, you should find more productive ways for feeling better for yourself instead of harming others. That is what is disgusting.



"They are correct in their critique of this story."
Why say that? I have critique this story. That was unnecessary and irrelevant.

" Rape is rape" I agree.
" no matter how much you want to defend in this story." i am not defending this story. STOP! I am stating the truth. There is no rape in Jinx. you are adding it.


" For you to claim they are trolling is hilarious." Thank you for exposing yourself to being sadistic. You should not be gaining pleasure from them harming others in their trolling. I am not claiming anything. Read their comments. Your comments are coming from as a troll too. "make a deliberately offensive or provocative online post with the aim of upsetting someone or eliciting an angry response from them:"

Trolling is from cowards.

"They had good points that you refuse to listen to." That is a FALSE!


"What the ML did in this story is rape. " Your pov and it is not accurate to the story.

"For the love of God listen and stop being offended" That does not fit to me. Good advice for you. Why do not you listen and stop making BS up. Stop being offended. You have no effect on me. Your comments are boring and a joke.

"You clearly don't know what a complex character is. "

Is attacking and trolling all you know to do? boring. You are talking about yourself.

"What you just listed are not aspects of a character, the clues you say are not even present, I mean what are his actual reasons for staying together with Dan? "
Why should I talk and explain it to someone only interested to making me a toy? I am not your toy. Find your amusement elsewhere. I can't take you seriously with all you abusive comments. You are degraded yourself to a status of a troll.

"Dan isn't a good character either." He is much better than you. Your "opinions" are personal attacks. Learn how to talk without at pathetic attacks. Why do you have to feel superior and make others feel inferior? Why do you have to harm others to talk to them? You are more toxic than the story is. The story is fake. I am a real person you are trying to degrade to feel better about yourself.

Why should I waste myself on you when you are deep rooted in your false beliefs while attacking me? Then you tried to justify those attacks as opinions. You called me disgusting but that is just projecting.

"Do you think this sorry is going to get an A+ when the characters aren't even realistic in their motivations or actions?" Are you sure about that? Why say that nonsense with that too.

"The story isn't complex." Yes it is. I am not buying your lies.

From your reviews, you are not a writer. If you were a writer you would see how it has evolved. You would Jaekyung for who he really is. You would understand Dan. You would know it is not rape. You would know it is literally not just sex. It could be a better story. I have said many times it is dull story. I wished it was better. I wished you were treating me better. It is disgusting how you are treating others.
I think the claim there is rape for most is either not looking at the story or being uneducated. They don't understand what rape really is. The literal definition as you posted it, debunks rape in Jinx. That is not what happens in Jinx. You failed to understand the story, Dan, and Jaekyung.
Do you even know what a good character looks like? You can't even see the real characters here.

I can't stop laughting at levi who is trolling. Which by the way, I don't think i called a troll. "And that levi person is a person who trolls to stir up trouble." I talked about them trolling. It about their actions. But if the shoes fits..


"LOLL not those two slow folks having matches in the comments"
that is comment from a troll and not describing me or Manhwaspicy.


"didn’t reply to the first weirdo because their opinion isn’t worth hearing out or replying to. "

An atttack showing they lost. A trolling comment.


"they can argue with themselves"

That does not describe me or Manhwaspicy.


"i know they need the daily mental stimulation they can’t get with real people."

That does not describe me or Manhwaspicy. Another trolling comment.


"read maybe until the second half of TM’s, until i realized they need medical attention for using therapy words OVER A DEBATE ABOUT RAPE AND A FICTIONAL STORY? LMAO?? "

More trolling.. Boring boring boring. They are talking about themselves. They are the ones who needs it. I don't.



"both of y’all have no common sense"

More trolling. This is not describing me or Manhwaspicy.


"and it’s clear that you’re unstable when it comes to this story."

That is not describing me or Manhwaspicy. More trolling. Pathetic. This person must have a miserable live to have to harm others to feel better about themselves.

"relax, no one is gaslighting you for saying there is rape or trying to explain their perspective."
Yes, people are gaslighting. People are trying explain a fake perspective. While I am trying to be factual and explain the story's perspective. They get scared and attack me. They show their immaturity and chlid-like behavior because they know they are wrong they go to gaslighting and attacking me.


"i think this story created the worst breeds of yaoi diehards because obviously the rape defenders stuck together like the birds they are."

What an abusive and disgusting thing. But this story has created the worst kind of people trolling to harm others. There are no rape defenders. We are not reap defenders from your pathetic pov that is not accurate to the story. You are a rape pov defender. You are going to great lengths to make it rape.
disgusting.

I think personal attacks are disgusting and immature. I don't like that. I don't and never victimizing myself. Disgusting and that is more boring trolling. trolling is for cowards.
There is no valid explanations here.
"it feeds their ego and need for people to talk to them :("
Projection. That is not describing me or Manhwaspicy.

"you’re kind for being patient and STILL trying to explain your perspective while also staying true that this is only a personal opinion that doesn’t affect anyone"

What comment thread are you reading? lol

Trolling degrades the troll. lol

tm- balls in their mouth- yz needs to stop cosplaying an introspective person and read real books for once not just smut bl im praying for you. we live in a world where calling out rape, for what is is, means you’re trolling. im laughing at you for thinking this opinion has gotten u somewhere when the arguments have not only been baseless but proving that jae is in fact raping dan and he’s one dimensional in the story so far

https://www.rainn.org/articles/sexual-assault

saying no to sex = rape
saying stop to sex = rape
not having the power to give consent to sex = rape
giving sex against your will = rape
should i keep going?

not surprising your ideas on sexual adult and rape are skewed but i genuinely wish the best for you to figure it out instead of changing the narrative that jae feels an ounce of sympathy for dan or even remotely cares about him in a healthy way. the traits you’ve given jae are all your head cannons and haven’t been explained in the slightest- those were your interpretations based on what you want them to mean

Omg you are making yourself a victim in a situation where all I did and the other person were pointing out writing errors in a story. You just confirmed my belief that you are not analyzing the story based on story or character elements busy based off what you perceived to be entertaining lm I called you disgusting because you tried to justify rape in this story that I am correct about. You are offended and that is ok. You cannot articulate your feelings without being offended, and so you call anyone who disagrees with you a gaslighter. I have an opinion. That's all I did. you are the most sensitive person I have ever met. Like you can't take constructive criticism so you lash out on anyone that disagrees with you. That isn't a trait you want to have. Please reevaluate yourself and reread everything I wrote verses what you wrote. The only person who is gaslighting you is yourself. Stop trying to play the victim in a situation where you are not

Lol you just proved my point. You are offended and you just defended rape lol. You said your not then in the same sentence you claim it's not rape. I feel bad for you. You are clearly a narcissist. You make yourself look like the victim in a situation where all I did and others are critique your opinion, by stating the obvious. I am a writer because I know I can see the good and bad in stories. That I can evaluate others options and not be offended unlike you. No one is abusing you. You can't handle the heat then maybe you should not be on the Internet. If this is what trolling is then you wouldn't survive in a writing class or in the real world. You are an embarrassment. Playing the victim when someone points out something wrong with what you said is . I hope God can bless you to be smarter than that.

No. You are wrong.

A romance story doesn't necessarily need to have a reason for the characters to be together. It isn't any core aspect. What is the reason for the characters to be together in a relationship?? Love…if both partners love each other, that is literally the only reason. Apart from that, what else? Is that how love works? To have a reason? Mafia romance stories, do they have a reason for being together? Or arranged marriage romance? Any reason. Love doesn't need to have a reason to progress. It just happens. You have no point there. Fiction or not.

You are allowed to criticize a story, but what becomes the aftermath? Nothing…you gain nothing but only add to the popularity of the book. You are not an official author to state such unreasonable things. Send me one of your books let me analyze it.

You are only stating how impatient you are with the book. You are talking about the back story? With the way the story line is progressing, where would be best to add a backstory? If I were mingwa, I would choose to expose JK’s back story in season 2 and I'm definitely sure that's where mingwa is headed. Many books have gone with that procedure, like Painter of the Night. The pacing was so perfect. You're showing more of how bad of an author you are. You are cliche.

To the one being abusive and trolling.

"tm- balls in their mouth- yz needs to stop cosplaying an introspective person and read real books for once not just smut bl im praying for you."

That is not describing me. You are desperately describing yourself. I have showed many times I read articles. They are not smut bl. Stop trolling and degrading yourself. That personal attacking shows you have lost and have no rational arguments.


"we live in a world where calling out rape, for what is is, means you’re trolling."

No I am calling out trolling. That is gaslighting. Is that all you know how to do. This is dreadful boring. It is joke.

" im laughing at you for thinking this opinion has gotten u somewhere when the arguments have not only been baseless but proving that jae is in fact raping dan and he’s one dimensional in the story so far"

Your opinion has no value. Your attacks have no value. Your are showing your insecurities and immaturity. This is patheic trolling of someone who lost.


https://www.rainn.org/articles/sexual-assault

"What is rape?
Rape is a form of sexual assault, but not all sexual assault is rape. The term rape is often used as a legal definition to specifically include sexual penetration without consent. For its Uniform Crime Reports, the FBI defines rape as “penetration, no matter how slight, of the vagina or anus with any body part or object, or oral penetration by a sex organ of another person, without the consent of the victim.” To see how your state legally defines rape and other forms of sexual assault, visit RAINN's State Law Database."


saying no to sex = is not rape ( no penetration)
saying stop to sex = is not rape ( no penetration)
not having the power to give consent to sex = is not rape ( no penetration)
giving sex against your will =is not rape ( no penetration)


https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/jinx/uu/br_chapter-129893/pg-32/
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/jinx/uu/br_chapter-129893/pg-42/


Dan consenting again.
https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/jinx/uu/br_chapter-130056/pg-17/


asking him to be gentler .... https://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/jinx/uu/br_chapter-130056/pg-31/

https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/sexual-coercion#what-it-is
Sexual coercion is when a person pressures, tricks, threatens, or manipulates someone into having sex. It is a type of sexual assault because even if someone says yes, they are not giving their consent freely.

if you look at the examples of sexual coercion only one is considered rape.

https://www.healthdirect.gov.au/sexual-assault-and-rape#consent

Sexual assault is any unwanted behaviour of a sexual nature that makes a person feel uncomfortable, frightened or threatened. It can occur when a person is forced, tricked or coerced into sexual behaviour without agreeing to it.


https://florinroebig.com/sexual-assault-guide/. 




Rape is a form of sexual assault. However, not all forms of sexual assault will be considered rape. 


https://my.clevelandclinic.org/health/articles/4538-rape-and-date-rape


Rape is a form of sexual assault in which a person (man, woman or child) is forced to engage in sexual relations (vaginal, anal or oral) against his or her will or without having given consent. Often an attacker will use physical force in committing rape; however, rape also occurs when someone uses threats of violence or emotional force or manipulation to engage an individual in sex.





The definition of rape literally debunks rape in Jinx. It is sexual assault and sexual coercion and other abusive behavior.
The ones claiming rape, if genuine are just from first impressions from the first reading and not reading the story in full detail or not understanding the terms they are using. Or something like that.
However, most on this page are not genuine are only want to stir up drama and troubles. They know they would get responses to harm others to feel better about themselves and only want they degrade others or shame them. Most of them never read the story they get fake summaries from their friends.



"not surprising your ideas on sexual adult and rape are skewed"
You are desperately descibing yourself as what I am posting is from articles and factual.
"but i genuinely wish the best for you to figure it out instead of changing the narrative"
No you don't wish the best for me. You are changing the narrative. I simply saying what is there and what is not.

"that jae feels an ounce of sympathy for dan or even remotely cares about him in a healthy way. " He does care for him. You are not reading the story.

"the traits you’ve given jae are all your head cannons" I am not the story. lol

" and haven’t been explained in the slightest- those were your interpretations based on what you want them to mean" It is not my interpretations. It is simply the story. I am not the story.

I would explain if I thought it would matter. But you attacking, trolling, lying, gaslighting, and being abusive as it is a waste of time. Why explain when you are just going do more of the same thing. You are broken record player stuck on abusing behavior instead of listening and having conversation with others.

https://www.verywellmind.com/how-to-be-a-better-person-4167628

Again…judging a book in 38 chapters.

19 days is like 379 chapters or so…what the hell are you even comparing??? Mehn you're exposing yourself and I'm laughing at you.

Another fact that you haven't read the synopsis. Congrats.

DUDE IF U LOOK AT THE COMMENTS ON JINX, THIS CREATURE IS BEING FLAMED BY EVERYONE OMFG???

TM is purposefully seeking out comments that call jae a rapist or say dan is a victim, and then calling everyone a gaslighter or other abusive names to make themselves sound smart and correct. the evidence they pull up contradicts the arguments they make and the unfolding of all this is so funny, they sold themselves out. you (yoonald) cleared them so baddd. such an intellectual and thoughtful dig at them, they could never serve as easily as u

the environment both those commenters are creating is so hostile for no apparent reason. can’t handle a difference of opinion and play defensive so bad when they know they’re losing an argument. the internet is such a funny place to see idiots like those two huff and puff about a bad story. give it up and just comment on opinions you agree with since you have a hard time understanding that other people think this story is not good and that jae is a rapist. it’s so easy to tell when a narcissist picks up therapist language in order to control a narrative about people, when we see right through you

I am still wondering why you want your opponent to be offended. No one is offended. You want them to be but it ain't working. You are claiming wrongs about a person. You are trying to shape that user into your delusions but it isn't so.

No one is claiming victim, he is simply calling you out on your deeds. You are trying so much to claim right but you haven't given any clear point for you to be. You are abusive. Your choice of words is pathetic. You not only disrespect your opponent's opinions but you attack them to believe your delusions. You are exposing yourself and I'm seeing more sides of your personality.

You all think we're losing an argument but it isn't so. We are trying to have a conversation but it is clear @Levi is a troll and wants to start an unhealthy argument. @Levi is more toxic than the story. I feel sorry for that user.

@Yoonald seems genuine at first but you began to shape your words into that of @Levi to seem disrespectful. No one is arguing here. We want to come to terms but @Levi doesn't want that. She wants to degrade people and make them feel like shit. Her plan is failing and we are only seeing how childish and unstable she is.

@Yoonald why are you letting @Levi control you?

I prove no point. I am not offended. That is a trolling trick. I have not defended rape. Just being rape is your pov that does not make it is rape exist in the book. There is no rape to defend with the real story pov.

I feel sorry for you. because I am not a narcissit. I don't make make look like a victim when I am a victim to your attacks. Critique what opinion? That is the problem. I give you no opinions to critique. You are attacking me over facts and thinking I am upset. You are now gaslighting me because I called you out.

According to your own comments, you are not a writer. I am the one evaluating comments and you failed to accurately know me. You are the one offended. You are the one projecting here. Levi and you are writing abusive comments and to deny that, that is gaslighting.
if you can handle the heat then many you should take your own advice. "If this is what trolling is then you wouldn't survive in a writing class or in the real world. You are an embarrassment" You are desperately describing yourself. You are bored or feeling miserable. You have came online to harm others to feel better about yourself or you are sadistic. One you can fix. One you can't. If you have a miserable life harming others is not the way to change your life.
I have A's in my English class. I am a writer. I have stories and poems published. duh! Your opinion has no value. You are just trolling. I live in the real world maybe you should make your life better instead of harming others.
you are the embarrassment.
I said the truth. I did not say anything wrong. You did not point out anything wrong with what i said. that was pathetic and disgusting. I know you are smarter than this. I hope you will start making better choices. God don't exist. I am an atheist. Why don't you step away from the fictional story that is only meant to control ignorant people from thousands of years ago.





"Omg you are making yourself a victim in a situation where all I did and the other person were pointing out writing errors in a story."
FALSE

"You just confirmed my belief that you are not analyzing the story based on story or character elements busy based off what you perceived to be entertaining"
FALSE. Your opinion has no value. I am not the story either.

" I called you disgusting because you tried to justify rape in this story that I am correct about."
FALSE I never tried to justify your delusions that is not in the story. You are being disgusting. Being is an action and different from what you stated.

"You are offended and that is ok. " Trolling trick to discredit others when you know you are losing or lost the debate. You have no power to offend me. I am not offend by a joke.


"You cannot articulate your feelings without being offended,"
That is you.

"and so you call anyone who disagrees with you a gaslighter."
I have not called someone a gaslighter. I said the action was gaslighting.
That was more gaslighting. You making about anyone who disagress with me is gaslighting. This shows you know you lost.

"I have an opinion." One i don't value now.
"you are the most sensitive person I have ever met. " You are not talking about me.
Like you can't take constructive criticism so you lash out on anyone that disagrees with you.
you are talking about yourself. See your comments. You are not talking about me. That is more gaslighting. That is disgusting.


"That isn't a trait you want to have. Please reevaluate yourself and reread everything I wrote verses what you wrote. The only person who is gaslighting you is yourself. " Gaslighting. Take your own advice.

"Stop trying to play the victim in a situation where you are not"

More disgusting gaslighting with insults. I am not playing victim. Stop gaslight and being abusive. Learn how to take constructive criticism without attacking and gaslighting. Your gaslighting and trolling will not work. Stop or have a real conversation with me. You have no right to make these comments towards me. Stop lying.

You are right. They have no point and reduced to gaslighting and attacking. It is disgusting.

I have to look but when was Alex's back story revealed. She is following the same pattern, it seems.

I would not want to read a story written from them. They have showed how bad of a writer they are. They have.

Yes, I think Mingwa is following the same pattern she used for BJ Alex. Alex’s backstory was also exposed at the end of season 1. That was chapters 49-50 I think so…although I think some slides were exposed in chapter 29… not really sure. Maybe mingwa would use that pattern?

"DUDE IF U LOOK AT THE COMMENTS ON JINX, THIS CREATURE IS BEING FLAMED BY EVERYONE OMFG???

TM is purposefully seeking out comments that call jae a rapist or say dan is a victim, and then calling everyone a gaslighter or other abusive names to make themselves sound smart and correct."


What a big fat lie. I did not make a comment on Jinx for 18 days. I only responsed to a few comments yesterday to share knowledge. To bad there are unstable hateful people out that can't accept the truth or other pov that they attack, gaslight you and make you a toy. They flame me because they know they are wrong and they think I am easy target. They are than Jaekyung will ever be. I am not seeking out comments. I am calling out gaslighting when they gaslight. I have not called anyone a name. lol.

I am posting facts and being factual. It is not my fault they can't handle being wrong. Nothing in my post contradicts what I said. They are selling themselves out. Yoonald and levi has did nothing here but show how desperate and insecure they are. They can't even make a dig. They have no edge. They have no rational arguments they only want harm others. It is a waste of time talking to them. They are hostile and creating an hositie enviroment.

They are hostile and create a hostile environment. lol

I went to correct that and posted it. lol

The hostile environment was here before I got here and it was hostile in those 18 days I did not respond to the page. I have no effect or power. If I did it would be a safe environment from all opinions. Trolls will be blocked from the page or there will be two topic sections one for the hate readers and one for the real readers.

I have not lost the "argument". What argument? I only shared facts and the truth. that can't lose. There have been barely an opinions. Levi is projecting themselves talking about us/me whatever. I wished they would give an opinion and only opinions.. But they are trying to justify their attacks. yuck.

Jaekyung from the story that is, is not and will not be a rapist. He is a sexual abuser. They can't see through me. They are not even talking to the real me. They are talking about themselves.

levipleasecallmeback, let's use Rose's words here, which is a rape survivor who knew this was not rape.. She would say they are speaking loser. They can keep speaking loser. The "flaming" is because they know I am right and they are bored with nothing better to do than to harm someone because they can't handle the truth and they are wrong. It is sad they are this hostile. This have a thing for me that is why 18 days ago I have decided to deleted my account for all this fake drama. It is childish behavior. Who knew sharing facts will offend trolls. They are being cowards and insecure people. What is the fun thing about this. I will have a new account and they will not know who I am but I will know who they are as they troll and harm others here in the hostile environment they created because they see rape in a non-rape story and can't handle being wrong. They are so obsessed with rape. Rape this. rape that. I am genuinely concerned about many of them.

At the end of season 1? I have to look.

I took your opinion and critiqued it. You took my opinion and claim I was bullying you. What I said was correct and your "facts" are just an offended opinion. Like I'm sorry if what I said made you that mad but seriously you cannot take criticism. You are playing a victim in a situation where you are not. Right now you are lashing out because I simply gave back what you said. You can't take constructive criticism because you view it as if someone is attacking you. You just don't want to acknowledge it. To claim you aren't offended is funny because you just typed a full length comment trying to disprove what I said. You are sensitive and you are offended

Levi pointing out flaws in your argument isn't abusive, you are loosing the argument so you result to claim that I'm harming you or being mean to you lol. Levi doesn't need to agree with you either and neither do I. You are not a child. You are showing your true colors. Because you are loosing the argument, so now you simply claim to be the victim. Their language wasn't abusive. They pointed out a problem and explained it to you. I simply agreed with Levi because they had some points that were true. Whether you believe it or not. And we are arguing, just about who's the most sensitive here and it's clearly you

Because someone has an opinion you are offended. Because they shared their thoughts you think it's ok to discredit them. I am sure your stories aren't any better. And I'm for damn sure you can't take criticism either. You are offended and you choose to not believe it. I have seen you up in arms in people's comment section because they shared an opinion you disliked. You don't like opinions that differ from yours. That's not wrong to feel, but to attack them because they shared a different opinion is embarrassing. It's almost like you are a child. Go and reread all of your comments vs mine. It will show you that you are offended and not me.

Your entire comment is the definition of being offended. Because I called you out you are lashing out at me. I have no issue with you being an atheist because I am one too, but do not disrespect religions just because you don't have one. You did call me a gaslighter by saying I'm gaslighting you lol. It seems your trying to convince yourself that your the victim. I'm not a victim either. I'm just a person sharing an opinion. You can't take constructive criticism. You proved that with many of your comments. When I shared an opinion you immediately jump off the fence to try and call me a liar. Say my claims were false, and went on to attack Levi And then had the audacity to complain when they did exactly what you did back to you. You cannot call yourself a writer if you can't handle criticism. You can't even handle a person's opinion. This is the Internet, if you can't handle an opinion than dude you might just need to get off. What I said was true it's an ugly trait to have

What opinion? What did you critique?
i took you attacks and called them out. Calling someone out isn't meant to harm someone–it's meant to point out where someone went wrong in hopes of them correcting themself and apologizing. Being called out isn't the same thing as being attacked. Being attacked is a malicious intent to hurt

What I said are facts. They are not opinions. Facts can't be offended. Facts don't care about feelings.


"Like I'm sorry if what I said made you that mad but seriously you cannot take criticism. You are playing a victim in a situation where you are not. Right now you are lashing out because I simply gave back what you said. You can't take constructive criticism because you view it as if someone is attacking you. You just don't want to acknowledge it. "


you are describing yourself. That does not reflect my comments. How do you live with yourself?



"To claim you aren't offended is funny because you just typed a full length comment trying to disprove what I said. You are sensitive and you are offended "

I am a writer and a full-length comment only betters a conversation. it is gross you tried to use that as evidence for your false accusations. You are talking about yourself again. I pity you for falling down. The only emotion I have is pity for you. Why would I feel offended by someone choosing to be a loser and a coward that has to hurt others to feel better about themselves?

"Because someone has an opinion you are offended."

FALSE. I am not you.

" Because they shared their thoughts you think it's ok to discredit them."

Never happened. I am not you

" I am sure your stories aren't any better. "
lol what a joke.

"And I'm for damn sure you can't take criticism either. "
I am not you.

"You are offended and you choose to not believe it.
Still not you.

"I have seen you up in arms in people's comment section because they shared an opinion you disliked."

False..

" You don't like opinions that differ from yours. "

FALSE!!!!!



"That's not wrong to feel, but to attack them because they shared a different opinion is embarrassing."

I never have. it is embarrassing so why did you do it?


" It's almost like you are a child. Go and reread all of your comments vs mine. It will show you that you are offended and not me. "

I should say that to you. it would fit better. Stop gaslighting

"Your entire comment is the definition of being offended."
False

"Because I called you out you are lashing out at me. "
False

"I have no issue with you being an atheist because I am one too, but do not disrespect religions just because you don't have one."
In reality, I don't, but you should not push religion on people. Would you stop disrespecting people with different opinions?



"You did call me a gaslighter by saying I'm gaslighting you lol." You are gaslighting me is an action. I did not call you a gaslighter. It looks like this" You are a gaslighter"
You are gaslighting me is talking about your actions at this moment. I did not call you anything. This is you being sensitive. It must be true as you are putting up a fight about it where I drop your false insults.

"It seems your trying to convince yourself that your the victim. I'm not a victim either. I'm just a person sharing an opinion."

False.. You shared opinion with lies and insults. You have gaslighted. You have personal attacked.


"You can't take constructive criticism"

I am not you

". You proved that with many of your comments"
You have. I have not.

" When I shared an opinion you immediately jump off the fence to try and call me a liar."

false


' Say my claims were false, and went on to attack Levi And then had the audacity to complain when they did exactly what you did back to you."
false. I have not attacked anyone.

"You cannot call yourself a writer if you can't handle criticism."

Now I see why you are so heavy on your lie there.

"You can't even handle a person's opinion. This is the Internet, if you can't handle an opinion than dude you might just need to get off. What I said was true it's an ugly trait to have"

Great advice for you and all the trolls offended by the truth and links. Stop forcing people off line. That is controlling. It is abusive.

You are offended. You are hurt. Your long comments have nothing to do with being a writer lol. Anyone can write long comments, but you are writing them because you are offended and hurt.No one is attacking you. They just are sharing an opinion or rebuttal. No where in any of my comments was I playing victim, but you are. What you said are opinions, you can't even back them up because you are too worried about looking like a victim. You act like someone is holding a gun to your head and saying mean things lol. I can admit that my comments were on somewhat bad taste. I am also not the one who's offended. I could care less about your baseless claims about me. What I said is a fact. This conversation alone shows me you can't take criticism. You try and make yourself look like a victim because you can't accept the fact that someone might not like jinx. So you are forwarding the conversation to "look at me I'm a victim". The only looser here is you. I critiqued your opinion on jinx. I gave claims and then you rebutted, so I simply replied back. From analyzing your comment and previous ones. You don't even look like your being attacked. You like like a sensitive person trying to make another person look bad because your offended

LOL!!!! Tell me where I have attacked anyone. Tell me where I offended. What a joke this thread has become.

Just miserable people who are bored. Most of what they are trying to make my opinion is from research. They should do some research. "They are showing how insecure they are" is from research. They are offended by the callouts when they have said worst and with the intent to harm us when I just want a conversation. They make this site unsafe with their hostility. This is just toxic. Only cowardly people do this and that is quoting research too. I feel sorry for them.

For fucks sake it's the Internet. It's not here to coddle your feeling to make sure your ok. People are gonna have an opinion whether you like it or not.You can't handle an opinion, you can't even handle an argument. You are not a child. It is not my job nor any others to make sure your feeling aren't hurt. It's embarrassing for someone like you to claim all this nonsense and then still claim to not be offended. What you said isn't the truth but a baseless claims because you can't handle being on the Internet. If a person's opinion on something causes this much of a reaction out of you then you need help. You can't take criticism, you just can't. You can't even acknowledge that your upset and offended, so for some apparent reason you try to say that I am lol. No one is gaslighting you. You are a child trying to appear as an adult.

My god. You are a child. You can't handle anything. This conversation is pointless. It's like I'm arguing with a 5 year old. This conversation is just you trying to make yourself look like a victim. Jesus it's like people like you on this sight can't handle anones opinion that's different from yours so now you have to claim that their attacking you

"You are offended. You are hurt."
HAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHHAA Nothing in my comments show that. Lame story, bro.
" you are writing them because you are offended and hurt."
HAHAHHAHA You are projecting.
You are projecting. hahaha.
You have attacked me. Levi has attacked me. STOP gaslighting and STOP normalizing cyber bullying. DISGUSTING!!
Attacking me is not an opinion or rebuttal. Gaslighting me is not opinion or rebuttal. You cant really rebuttal the truth. You can try but you will fail. lol

I am not playing the victim. You are saying the same things showing how sick you are. You have not said anything factual. You are stuck on repeat lol. You are just wasting my time with the nonsense that describes you. I don't like Jinx. lol, You are assuming. lol. Jinx is dull. what do you understand of that?

hahahaha. You are imposing a position on me. heheheheheeheheheehe. What a JOKE.
You did not critique my opinion because I did not give my opinion. You failed at your critique.

"You like a sensitive person trying to make another person look bad because your offended"

That is 100 you. You can't judge me. When you judge others, you don't define them, you define yourself. I never called anyone a loser. You called me one. Who are you defining? You are defining yourself. You can't define me. Keep showing who is offended here. lol This is bad story writing here. It is boring with the lies and repeated lies. It is not hard to admit you were wrong. It is not hard to admit you are attacking and gaslighting me. It is up to you to be an adult or not.

I block bad-faith actors. You have proven that over and over with the fake drama. Blocked.

I am not you

Who is the child. Not me. lol

You have made this pointless with the trolling and being like a 5-year-old. The rest you are talking about yourself

You didn't reply to what I said earlier. Are you purposely ignoring my comments because I'm right?. Don't be shy.

No it just made me realize how I'm wasting my time arguing with children. I will protect my peace and not have to be worried about arguing with chronically online children

As long as you're exploiting all private communication between us, you might as well mention that you were upset that I stopped following you and I told you the reason was I was not interested in the drama and seeing your name was an unpleasant reminder of it. I left because of you and yours. It seemed you were gone, so I came back. Clearly a mistake. I have not communicated with you since then, nor directed any comments toward you. Why are dragging me into this against my will? I ask that you no longer direct any comments toward me or even bring up my name from this point on

You exploiting all the private communication between you three? It seems like you explained what has happened to her implying something negative when it was harmless and talked about one of her lines. You said you did not like doing that.

You said you were pleading with her. I think how you explained it you were not upset but she wants you to be upset. She misunderstood your message and your DM message. You were not upset she stopped following she thinks too highly of herself.

You are not interested in the drama. I am not interested in the drama. It is not caused by us. You were trying to talk about the story but the trolls attacked you.
We are the victims here. She did not leave because you and yours because you don't cause the drama. She is giving you and yours to much power.

Yoonald was the one causing the drama here because they could not talk about the point.
Silent is missing the point that you are being targeted harassed. At least she can talk about Jinx without getting attacked.
Also, you did not write a comment for like 18-19 days THE DRAMA STILL EXISTS. What was she talking about?
She must mean the targeted harassment on you and yours. The trolls gang up on you and attack you for talking about Jinx. She is making you cause that drama? VILE!
she must be a loser to make it you and yours cause the drama.

Then she makes more false claims. You did not drag her into it. Against her will? You were not even talking to her. She keeps throwing you under the bus. The victim of target harassment. You have not given her a direct comment. What the hell is she on?

She is a joke if she thinks we cause this fake drama.
As Rose would say, what a loser move.
Soon you will delete your account and maybe you will be back. No one will know who you are to target harassed you. You can talk about Jinx without drama or people throwing you under the bus. She must know know you left the page over 24 hours and may not return on TM SM before you delete your account. What a wasted comment. But it exposed her for what she truly was. She supported you in what you were saying to Manhwaspicy.
I hope he sees the warnings and she is not as genuine as she seems. She likes to throw the victim under the bus with false claims.

Like here. you could not control Yoonald. You could not get Yoonald to talk about their points and explain in detail what you thought was interesting. You are not a mind reader.
"This is an Apple" Yes but it did not explain anything. You wanted what the colour was, the taste and so on. You wanted to have a deep conversation conversation with Yoonald. Yoonald only wanted to attack and degrade others. Then they created FAKE drama and they were probably was told too because someone has a grudge against you. Or Yoonald is an alt. This was just a bait to cause fake drama. Silent needs to open her damn eyes. You never caused the drama or started it. You are the target of harassment. She needs to stop throwing you under the bus. You are the victim here. Or she needs to shut the fuck up. If she is a genuine person she just made herself a troll and cyber bully for not having all the details.

Manhwa and Tm was not arguing. They wanted to see your perpectives.
You were saying "This is an apple" They wanted you to go on and explain "This is apple is red. It is a Honeycrisp. it size is this. blah blah.
They are not mindreaders. You degraded them and attacked them because they could not get it was a Honeycrisp from this is an apple. It could be a braeburn, Jonagold, winesap, mutsu, cortland, Mcintosh, rome, and on and on.

Here is the difference. They asked you and did not attack. You did not ask them, imposed false positions, and attacked them. You caused the drama.

The problem here was you and Levi. You tried to make it TM and at one point you ignored everyone but TM. TM only wanted to talk about the apple. Which he thinks the apple is dull and you tried to force positions on him.

You used tactics that many trolls have used on him in the past and forced him in what he is not. You played that sick mind game with him. You are one sick fuck to do this to someone that only wants to here your perspective. He wanted to see you and your opinions.
I think you don't have one that is why you could not explain and that is why you were here to create fake drama. So when Tm responded did someone DM to cause that fake drama with him to play that sick game on him? When he only wanted to learn about you and your opinion? That is fucked up.
IF you talked to him the drama would never happen. You are the problem.

I didn't even know that there was a novel. If you know the stuff that were excluded can you please spoil them to me? I want to know more spoilers and stuff about this manhwa but the pacing is really slow and it shows only Soru's suffering.

I only know this because my FIL will travel to watch the Chiefs play anywhere and they’ve played in the UK and other European countries.
But
There is a British American Football Association that is like our NFL, or something. Idk the details. It’s not as big overseas as in the states, but they do have it.

But I do agree that’s there way too much American university culture feel it is prob not how England would have it, even if the university had American Football.

I also didn’t realize people wore letterman’s jackets in college XD no one I knew did, I always thought it was a high school thing lmao

Yes they do have American football in England and as for letterman jackets a lot of universities and colleges have clothing and jackets with their logo on it. It’s not a new trend at all.

Oh I did not know that. I just noticed there were a lot of American clothing and sports that just feel really out of place hence the time period being set in 1973

No no its not a thing here I'm literally a uni student in England and NEVER would I have guessed this was in England, and it is absolutely not something like NFL it would be a small minority cause its hated here

Nikes was created in 1964

Bye you’re so dumb as the other person said it was founded in 1964 and while Nikes didn’t become really popular til the 80s, in the 70s the Nike blazers came out and became popular during the 70s though adidas were more of a popular shoe during the 70s. Also the blazers came out in 1972 and were popular so 1974 and wearing Nike is not unrealistic as the blazer was prob still popular and a trend within those 2 years.

I just worded that badly, yes I know Nikes came out but if you look at his shoe style it is very modern and isn’t an exact model of shoe that was popular during that time. I am coming from a creative standpoint where honesty his character feels out of place in this time period. Which is why i said the author needs to look at what was popular of that decade lol. Because it’s clear that they tried to get a look book of American fashion, but just incorporated modern looks from what it seams.

I hope people know I’m not hating on the author, I’m just pointing at small historical inaccuracies I notice

he jst got them fye jordans

Plot twist he’s a time traveler