The story was overall pretty decent. I hated the idol arc because it seemed random and just super unnecessary. And although I kind of shipped Kang and Irae together I wish the author made him older. In non Korean years Kang was 16 while Irae was 20 so it was kind of weird for me. I don’t understand why he couldn’t have been 18 instead like??? Obviously in the story and irl, an age gap that involves a minor and is that far apart is looked down on, so thats really my only major issue with this story. Otherwise, it was a pretty cute story.
I think that's what made it cute, idk
They didn't even kids until he turned into an adult so I see nothing wrong with it. And when they confess their feelings I think Kang is 17 and Irae 21, even though it's not much better haha
To be blunt, this story is a mess. I really tried my best to enjoy it because the plot is really interesting, but the writing isn’t the best. The pacing is way too fast and the character’s aren’t written well. I genuinely do not understand nocton’s character and his actions. If he just straight up told Valrose about his feelings and what happened, their relationship wouldn’t be so shitty. Also, I’m not going to even GET into how hes able to suddenly read Valrose’s mind because that makes literally no sense. Someone in the comments said he doesnt want to say Duora because he thinks shes under his spell, but that doesn’t make sense. Shes obviously not understand his spell because at one point he couldnt read her mind and she clearly resented him at times. So if that’s the explanation that the author is gonna give in the future then I- I honestly have nothing to say atp... There’s way too many things going on and not enough things being explained. It’s nearly impossible to not be confused half the time because of the writing. I really want to see how this story turns out so I’ll continue to read it, but right now its a huge let down for me.
Yes I know right its so frustrating ahhhh I wish they clear things up so they'll understand each other, instead of avoiding and thinking negative. ╥﹏╥
LITERALLY LIKE?? The whole thing with Alice and Allen is making me so mad because I don’t understand why Allen won’t tell her that hes Ed??? His fiance is clearly encouraging it and he has the locket she gave him so.......why not confess??
I agree with you. The plot is really interesting but their characters are too confusing. Alice and Aaron can be together so easily but they keep making it complicated. And for Duroa and Nocton-- KSKSSKSKKS idk everything about them is really confusing.
The reason he wasn't able to hear her thoughts was simply because she was saying what she felt. Meaning, she spoked to him with good intentions and her mind was blank when she talked to him. But after Alice otter all the bs, she began to second guess EVERYTHING and paranoia became her best friend. Because of this he believe he brainwashed her the moment he said her name and invited her to his mansion. ╮(￣▽￣)╭ I mean, who wouldn't be confused. Right?
Wowthe ending was hella rushed. That was kind of disappointing. There were so many things that was left out or presented yet never explored. The story was nice, but really unsatisfying.
How are there primitive tribes in korea......and “primitive” koreans don’t look like that-
It’s not she just understands them and think they’re speaking korean I think she’s some magical girl or something cause she even healed his wound lol
Oh....okay.......thanks for explaining this makes more sense
PLS why can’t we just have a smooth wedding without anyone interrupting . Pain!
So far I really like this story, but I wish she was more transparent with her ex-friend about why she avoided them and how she felt. It just feels like nothing was really resolved and it seems like that girl really cared for her and wanted to be her friend :(. But since Byul kept avoiding her without any explanation I can understand why she feels some resentment towards her.
they literally talk bout her behind her back...
The friend group did but not eun-ah. She literally just explained the real reason for why Byul wasn’t hanging out with them. Which she shouldnt have done without her permission, but it wasn’t done to spite or anything. She just didn’t want the other girls to get the wrong idea about Byul. She obviously cared about byul because she went out of her way to check on her even when she was distancing herself. So my point still stands. I wish she was more transparent about her feelings because nothing was resolved and only bitter feelings are left.
Eun-ah literally knew the Mc was a lot smarter than her and it was not her place to say things about her mother she basically took advantage of the situation.
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