
Look I don’t mind cursing, but cursing for cursings’ sake gets real old real fast. It really annoys me. It’s like the word like. It in itself is fine and using it is fine, but like, when you like, like use it to much, like, it like totally like, starts like getting like super annoying. I feel that the over use of cussing is poor writing and makes characters seem more one dimensional and childish if they always have to curse to make their point

It takes away its impact when it’s overused. The first chapter when out of nowhere she starts cursing in front of all the nobles your like Whoa Damn. But, then not only is everyone cool with it they all curse all the time too and nobody cares. What the f happened to princess training? What about being a noble? If the queen is going to be all casual and curse too what even was the point? If she was the only one cursing to rebel and those around her freaked out about it I’d understand, but this just logically doesn’t make sense
Beta dude says barely two sentences. Oh hey I just stepped on a land mine it appear I’m about to die.
Alpha skater: hey bitch want to see my gold metal?
Omega girl: of course!
Alpha skater: Ha! Knew it! Bitches love gold metals
Omega girl’s Alpha: Little does that skater punk know, but I am about to give him a colonoscopy with that gold metal
Beta Dude: But seriously please don’t kill me