Even if some people don’t like the story, that doesn’t mean they have to drop it. You can’t expect a webtoon to not be criticized, because if everyone liked a webtoon then every webtoon would have a 5 star rating already. And that’s not how it works. It’s a comment section and everyone should be able to say their opinion (even if they are negative, sadly). Besides, you shouldn’t read a webtoon for the comment section, right? And being negative about a point doesn’t mean they are stating the whole webtoon is trash. Please accept criticism.
No offense but is tia gonna have a character development or something? Cause idk even tho she’s learning swordsmanship we never saw her fighting for real (and it doesn’t look like she’s a genius at it either)... I feel like they are selling her as a strong fl while she’s not, she keeps crying on her bed and being dramatic (I’m sorry but she doesn’t do much for the guys to fall in love w her, and they keep making every of her interactions with the boyz like its a k-drama or smth w all the sparkles n shit) i don’t hate her tho but I don’t find her interesting. (Also spoiler: why?,,, did ?,? she??get ? with the prince?’ Even if he was controlled by black magic the only reason he likes her in this timeline is cause she started smiling more, and tried not to keep her cold face. If she didn’t do that he’d have likely abused her here too. And he’s the cause of her ptsd in the first place.If you’re gonna make her weak at least don’t sell her as a strong female lead.)
I also feel like she totally brushed off allen’s mental health. I mean, she doesn’t have to help him with that, it’s not her job, but if you’re really friend with someone you would try to help them or understand them. And she broke their friendship that easily while allen still cares about someone that doesn't care about his problems. Well, rather than being tia’s fault it’s the authors, they clearly messed up the writing of the characters here. The only person that doesn’t have ptsd, psychotic behavior or inferiority complex is carsein, who’s forever in the friendzone.
Tia is a strong female lead. You were just used to characters that is physically strong. What she has was very disturbing and traumatic but she still tried to go against fate. She's not a genius which makes her much more stronger knowing that she still strives to what she has now. The definition of 'strong' is now usually misinterpreted because of other webtoons. If you think being strong is the same as the characters of 'this girl is a little wild' or 'be careful with the villain' then you are still have an immature way of judging what is weak and what is not. As for ignoring Allen's condition, she has her own mental issues and it was already showed several times that she, herself, is unstable. Can you imagine a person with depression helping someone with bipolar disorder? In order to help someone effectively, you must heal yourself first. Helping someone while having issues yourself is childish and unrealistic. This story showed how strong a woman can be only with her determination and will. She is not gifted with anything which can make the readers relate to her more. If you complain her crying moments, it is as if telling your friend not to cry to her own problems and keep it straight. That's straight fucked up. In order to be strong, you must recognize your weakness and more importantly, being strong is being able to stand after falling. If you only count to how many times she breaks down, then you are too narrow minded. The author has made a wonderful job making a character that is not genius yet she still managed to get this far and change her fate which can actually influence her readers who are also a simple people themselves. Think about your opinion again before discriminating an author who works hard to have this wonderful masterpiece.
Me criticizing something that YOU like doesn’t mean I said it’s trash. It’s my opinion. I didn’t read the novel so I cant judge the writing, but I can at least judge the situations based on the spoilers ive been given by a friend. I never said she had to be strong from the start, be a fucking knight and everything. But to me they tried to sell her as a strong female lead, « changing her destiny, becoming a knight » and on the cover her holding a sword. As I also said I didn’t except her to help Allen with his mental issues, but to at least give it some thoughts. To me she just brushed it off. And a lot of people have problems in their lives and are still helping other people, even if it might not be tia’s case. And, she’s kind of a mary sue character, playing with the birds and everything, so I actually excepted her to help him (but well she didn’t). Although, i’ll give her that : she is strong willed, and her crying doesn’t bother me- i just thought i’ll point it out. But knowing she gives up her dreams at the end, becoming a knight, thing she trained a lot for, and ends up with the one that gave her ptsd, that trauma in the first place, I think it’s kind of fucked up. For example, if the prince was controlled by black magic i’d understand what led to the abuse, but even without it he would have likely abused her too, because of his inferiority complex and his hatred towards tia and her cold face. The prince is straight up shitty. And her getting 3 male leads that would do anything for her for no reason was also unnecessary. If it’s kind of a self acceptance story, where she becomes more mature with more experience, doesn’t depend on the others and tries to the VERY END to change her fate, then this isn’t it. She gave up in the end. She’s still dependable, it feels like people need to push her to her goals and that she can’t herself. And the dramatic feeling is also unnecessary, not saying there can’t be drama, but as I stated in my og comment it feels too much like a k drama imo) So basically : the story isn’t trash but it isn’t a masterpiece either. You’re free to like it and tia, but I don’t, and that’s okay, people should be allowed to have opinions without being disrespectful (and I don’t think I was). However, this isn’t a great story in logical terms (still imo) because the decision made at the end clearly is a choice that almost nobody would make, but she did. Her goals just vanished, so my expectations. Thats it.
Yes that may be YOUR opinion but also remembee that placing bad remarks on the story may affect the quantity of possible readers of this story. We may be in an illegal site but how would one feel if a bad review affect the number of readers the story can get? Your opinion was too detailed and more on the negative side and you even mentioned that it was the author's fault for making the story this way. You can criticize the story in any way you want but mentioning how the author makes the story and the characters dull can have future readers affect their perception of this story before they read it. The stort may not be THAT good to you but some would think otherwise and speaking badly of the story is not bad at all. You can say that the plot is dull and way too predictable but mentioning how the author works on her characters is also saying that she is working hard for something that is trashy. This is fiction. Everyone can do anything and there is no rules in fiction stories. May it be trashy or not, one person worked hard for this and planned meticulously. You can say that the story is bad itself is fine, that's for you. Saying that the author is doing a bad job is not fine. Well for me atleast. Do you get my point?
I do got it. But again I said many times thats its my opinion and that doesn’t mean the story is trash, nor that I hated tia. Still, I don’t think that them making tia end up in a toxic relationship (where the guy says he doesn’t love her in the end) makes any sense, it feels like romanticizing toxic relationships, which isn’t okay, unless the story goes deeper into the complexity of the characters and their toxicity. But well, the author didn’t mess up writing the characters or anything, for that point i meant to say that their actions are not logical, and it feels like the author didn’t know what their own characters should do, at the very least it’s how I interpreted it, and because you worked hard doesn’t mean it’ll be good. One of the steps to be an author is to accept criticism, as long as it’s constructive. I only criticized the characters here, but I didn’t say anything about the plot, and I like it btw. But there’s a lot of positive critics here (I mean, come on, it has 9.4 stars) and people are only saying negative stuff about the prince, not other characters. So I didn’t trash the author hard work, just pointed out the flaws imo, and even if I didn’t bring the author into it it wouldn’t have changed the fact that they wrote the story. Whoever you might be, if there’s a flaw in your artwork, then yeah technically it’s « your fault ». Because you’re the one who wrote the story, not other people. I don’t mean to sound bitchy or anything, or trying to shame them, sorry if you misinterpreted it in a rude way.
can someone tell me which chapter is ch49 (of the webtoon) in the novel ?
Here you go honey XD
https://rubymaybetranslations.com/2018/04/19/lucia-chapter-21/








People are saying that the prince is different in this timeline but the only reason he isn’t abusing her is because she just fucking smiled and stopped making her cold face. If she kept her cold face his inferiority complex would grow, with him thinking she looks down on him, and hence abusing her. He’s just not doing it because he’s intrigued by her actions and her being so scared of him. even at the end of the novel he says he doesn’t love her. The prince in this timeline is as fucked up mentally as the other, he’s just not doing the abuse.
Okay apparently in the previous life he regretted his actions so he’s valid now!!!!! Just kidding hell nah lol
Lmaooo "hell nah"
Yh lol he was drugged in the past timeline which made him act out so clearly raping and then killing Tia's baby gets a pass since this is a new timeline. I mean, forgive him since he isn't drugged now, sure. Fall in Love with him?? Mmmn, whut?
╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ bitch plz, I hope Allen and carrot get a happy end cuz lmao
lol preach girl