These characters have very little chemistry. It feels like they're together because he marked him and that's it.
Also, holy fuck the writing!!! It's so bad. The plot is good, the art is beautiful, but the writing kills me =/
"We could interrogate the killer and ask him where he got the poison, but he killed himself after being caught." ~ Wow. This story is just a masterclass in writing >_> Seriously though, if this is how it's actually written in its native language, then why didn't the translator fix it?? I'm really trying hard to enjoy it, but they're making it difficult.
I waited for the official version because I thought it would be written better... but it turns out the unofficial translations did their best with a story that's just not that well written (or the official version just sucks). I like the art and plot and I'm going to continue reading it even though the writing isn't that good. I just change some things around in my head while I'm reading to make it flow better.
I haven’t read official ones yet. So you tell me all official Eli uploaded are not translated?
Yeah, they're translated. The story just isn't well written.
Does anyone know how long the hiatus will be?
no seriously its been so long
I'm pretty sure it's gonna be to early january
The raws will resume the 10th of January, BUT they are at ch.76 already so I have no idea why the translation is also on hiatus 7 chapters earlier
Oh wow, they come out on my birthday. That feels lucky somehow.
Idk, it doesn't make sense that we got a hiatus when there should be more chapters. And it happened when this was starting to get way more interesting.
Well, I have hope that there's finally going to be some plot after this hiatus because the author said on her socials that she's going on hiatus "just before something serious starts". Maybe... CLIFF???!?!!!?
hapy birday
I really hope so, cause once the smut died down and the plot started to plot it got waaay more interesting.
Thanks!
That was the worst ending. I saw people commenting on the end before I read it and I was like "nah, surely it can't be that bad." Nope, I was wrong. And even though parts of this story were great, I kind of feel like I wasted my time.
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Totally agree. There was so much potential for the ending. This was trash. It was rushed, in 2 chapters they can't find him at all then he reveals himself practically, remorsefully runs off and she angrily shoots him like it's nothing after the relationship they developed. Then he ends up surviving anyways. So what's the point? That he is a monster after all even though she repeatedly tells him he's not?? And that's why she shot him, in the back even?? I'm totally confused and irritated. Honestly I think they should have ended up together but w/e. Never recommending this to anyone.
Are Penny and Leo married? She says something about her house and then he says "but you're mine, so it's my house too." But isn't she with the vampire chick?
No fr that means that she didn’t get with blue bell I feel kinda bad for her :(
I don't understand why she loses her noble title and all her wealth just because her house burned down. Banks existed back then, as did insurance. Also, doesn't her husband own a business? From the very beginning she should've just gotten Isaac to help her kill her husband. That would've been way more satisfying.
...The fuck? Kinda seems like the ending of this chapter came out of nowhere. I scrolled back up to make sure I didn't miss anything, cause it seemed so weirdly abrupt that she'd just send him away. And did he even get a chance to tell her about the lady trying to poison her? Wtf? I guess it could be a misdirect and we'll get a flashback later, but it just seems so weird.
The unofficial translation skips this chapter =/