
"But will the people, who covet the power of heaven people, let them remain hidden there" - One of several equally appalling sentences. Idk if it's the translation or the actual writing, but one of those things is not good. Which is too bad because the art is beautiful. I'mma keep reading in the hopes that these weird sentences will become less common as the story progresses, but so far I'm a bit disappointed.

Ugh, I waited so long for a new chapter... but, I wasn’t really a fan of this one. I don't mind incest, but mother/son is just too deranged and grosses me out.

Hmm. No one's ever asked me this before. How do I explain this? If I can relate to it too strongly, like if it makes me think of people I know in real life, I'm not going to be okay with it, because it'll repulse me. Maybe "relate to it" is the wrong wording, but I'm not sure how else to phrase it. For example, I have a sister, so I don't want to read incest that's about two sisters, cause ewww. I don't have a father or brothers, so I'm fine reading f/d or b/s. And since I'm not a guy I can read just about any yaoi incest. So, as long as there's some degree of separation from my self, I don't mind reading it. Does that make sense?
Wow. I really liked this, way more than I thought I would. I'm happy I stuck it out until the end.