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I have a lot of issue with the story one of them being that I just don’t find the top that attractive I think it’s the shading, and because he’s a literal hot piece of garbage. I don’t know if he was a experiment or some freaking Frankenstein. People had told me he was like a green forest. They lied to me. Well, I’m the stupid one for believing them I guess I’m mad that he sounds like a child sometimes with understanding, but he has no desire to give a shit about it just makes me feel sad I just don’t think I can handle it been reading too many like this.

If anything, I’ll continue seeing the story just to see the ending in a couple extra chapters in the middle of it and that’s gonna be it.
It’s genuinely just not worth it. It makes you fall into a false sign of security and the sex failed too much legs straight up break. It was a It makes you fall into a false sense of security and the sex felt like a dog with a chew toy it made me feel a little uncomfortable, but this is all personal preference and my opinion

This was great. I wish there was more because I feel like this could’ve added hundreds more chapters like so much. It wouldn’t even have to be this couple. It just needed more the world that it was created in is rich of everything. The author is amazing. They put so much work into it
It’s constructed so great I wish we had

Bro, I don’t know who the fuck it was. I don’t even know if it was this story or not but I swear to God somebody said he was agreeing inside at one point and I thought like what the fuck are they fucking talking about?

Finally decided to read this. Write this in one shot and I’m over here and I’m thinking oh they’re both crazy. I 100% don’t dial that they’re both sociopaths to an extent to one of them. Remind me of the Frankenstein monster that just doesn’t understand appropriately anything until he’s taught And for the bottom I swear to God I don’t know what’s wrong with him, but I know for a fact that he most likely murdered his mom I feel like his father is the one who tried to kill him. I feel like he’s not normal with the way that he tried to kill him either he killed his father he Knows And there’s a bunch of chunks missing from his memory because he was originally running away from him.

Why were the side stories like that everything in the story at one point closer to the end felt like oddly rushed what I didn’t get to see the baby as an actual fucking baby I would’ve loved the more of them as a side story because I would’ve enjoyed that

But also, if they wanted to make a side story with the brother, I thought it was good except for the very obvious facts of the sexual assault all incest, brother thing it was extremely unnecessary. It was disgusting uncomfortable the discussions around it weren’t like enough. Everything felt very, not even just open ended it just felt Unnecessary. They could’ve added a different completely new person to spice up their relationship as well as give it a lot more development and dimension and I think it would’ve done 1000 times better.

I would’ve really loved for the side stories to have included the friend the work friend. I really really would’ve loved to see a little bit more of them because I feel like the author also had a story for what was going on with them and I would’ve loved that we had got to see a little bit of it. I was very disappointed about that.

I would’ve also loved to see the grandparents with the baby.

I have a couple of combs with this just because I understand the way that it progressed and it is beautiful but at the same time I find a solution that is always better is to talk to him to come to the realization of his feelings for the porn to fall off him to see his master And I believe that seeing each other again would’ve been good for both of them. I think he would’ve realized that he was in love with was the memory of what they shared at that time. He does understood him for the time that he was at, but I believe that those emotions would’ve gone away at one point now he’s just stuck in this frozen spot of this memory that will never change and that he will never come to circle with just as I believe that the master did love him somewhat as he loved his family, his wife, and by the way his apprentice because he’s a samurai if you guys don’t know about this, if the Doctor Who is originally actually a samurai which they have a lot of different paths was at one point he gave him his name and has a duty towards him. They sleep with them at one point where they’re teaching them so in my opinion, I think it would’ve been way more dramatic and way better, but I do understand why I had to end this way in the concept, it’s just I don’t exactly like bittersweet things and I don’t think I like this at all. I feel like this is a cop out For everybody involved. It’s this unrequited sense of in completion that is so very human and I do not enjoy that.

I thought you would plan better and instead, if he still could’ve stupid, it doesn’t deserve anything he’s going through, but he feels a little bit dumb like I’m starting to agree why they banned Omega from taking the throne

Am I opinion I think peanut is right like our girls like one of them is the past life I think she was just absorbed into the more dominant one that was needed at the time and that’s what’s supposed to happen overtime but the more crazy or dominant personality kind of overdrew the other one I think that’s what happened and that’s why we have that crazy ass fucking bitch I think the other soul most likely was the softer nicer one in this life that had gone through a lot of shit but was so much less dominant and did have a desire to want all those things just probably not in that way so now I feel like shit and kind of hope she You know saves her if she still there

How do I put into words that this story has too much story and because of that and kind of the plot itself is shit it pissed me off. It didn’t even make me feel melancholy because I was always angry at the dog God like I didn’t get it like the whole story pissed me off the way that they set it up a little bit for him was kind of shitty because it and itself doesn’t make sense to keep a human trap like that has to be some selfish ass fucker to want to have a bunch of people be your literal concubines at that point because you’re lonely at the same time it isn’t just lonely. It’s like it’s not inappropriate God there’s no analter if it’s as old as they say it it is there is no guardians because it’s supposed to always have like two guardians with it to be helpers to help with loneliness that’s one of the main things that I was so confused about it being so different. I don’t know even if it’s because it’s not for humans it makes no fucking sense to me



Like the whole story, I was unnecessarily angry at that freaking dog the whole time I’ve never been so angry at a dog that in itself felt very confusing. The assault was also very uncalled for unnecessary. It was like very what the fuck I do get that it was to make like a ruse or like for a brother into a corner but bro, it’s not like he can leave like I get tormenting him and like telling him but still not doing anything at that point just punch him or some shit there was no need for that type of assault so yeah the story kind of pissed me off. I read it out of spite and because I wanted to know the ending, it is good and the fact that it could’ve been good. This could’ve had like a nice 30 chapters even with a nice developed story it would’ve been the typical short BL anymore, but it would’ve been good.

I can understand why everybody calls the story kind of boring, but to me. it’s because of the type of story this is like the orientation?
A very complex story very relationship oriented very much so about the individual characters behaviors specifically when you have like a reset button and do over for everything that you did wrong that turned out horrendously you get to see their approach to it, but because it was originally about their relationship and everything they occurred towards it. It feels boring because it’s very technical.

Like ml the fact that he’s trying so much to let go of the person he loved but contradicting himself I love how very complex all the characters are as well as he wanna make everything better now that he has the chances but he’s very contradictory because emotionally what he wants and logically of what he knows he has to do is very showing if you look at it proper and to the reader, this can seem very boring because it’s very technical they’re so very flawed and it’s very entertaining if you get into it this is a very slow story that you should read like maybe one or two chapters once in a while and then get over

This isn’t really the type of story that you I also like the MC because a lot of people he seems overly passive, but it’s more like he’s an overly calculating person because of all the trauma another thing he’s gone through so because of that he overthink, and even if he has a little bit passive he weighs too long to do a lot of things and it turns out being passive because it’s not a lot he doesn’t need to do a lot. He’s learned to just roll with I like their characters I like how it focuses on their relationship to the minute because that’s what the amount wanted to fix. You don’t go back and try to fix everything. Maybe there are some small things that he changed but this is what he wanted. This is all that he wanted so what’s the point of showing anything else but this

Dialogue is conflicting the art is not really that good. It feels uncomfortable like it needs somebody to fine-tune everything including somebody needs to edit the shit out of the dialogue. The clothes are good though very good. They just need a little work with proportioning and everything but everything else is fine.