It took me a while, but I finally noticed which author this is by. I love one of their works, but I knew very early on that. I would not likely continue reading this. The age gap grosses me out. I can also tell that he the ml
isn’t a good person like he knows that he’s not trying to be something he’s not. Which that’s a pleasantly a good thing for multiple reasons he gives me the eck but the other one also gives me. Like they’re extremely naïve and just basically the standard of what a little white rich boy is.
I understand why the authors did this but I’m gonna be realistic. I kinda don’t like that. He just went to the 50th floor. I don’t like the skipping thing I would want him to grind him for us to have like 50 more chapters or probably way more of him just getting there. I’m being strong enough in the first place.
Don't worry it's just a small detour that's important for plot development.. We'll be back in the og floor after this
Librarian, is that you?
I knew that this might be something like that, but I wanted it to feel fresh when we got to the 50th floor because now we know how it looks like we know what we’re expecting so when we go back, it’s not gonna give the same impact when we get back there again, I know this is gonna be kind of like a measuring type of situation when it comes to strength and everything I came to the realization after I got less peeved
Coming by the title I also don’t think it’s Jeffrey because it says like somebody that wasn’t in already in my adoption plan my adoption plan meaning that it was already her plan so it might not be Jeffrey
I believe the title is like that because she’s already been adopted by havernic
I’m so confused. It was fine until it wasn’t like the first time he got turned into a little kid at first like it was completely fine at the start of a soft transformation. It was also still fine. Even a little bit of the beach part was completely fine. It had very nice motion. It had really nice dialogue and then that happened then you were like. Oh, I am very confused. I don’t like that like if that part was in there, I would be like a little weird, but it’s fine.
I swear I read this when it was complete and now I’m so confused
I’m very happy with what’s happening.
I must say I really really want somebody specifically RMC to go straight to her face and whispered inside her ear that does she really think that this was a fucking game this world might be like the game but this isn’t a fucking game people die here and then have her fucking die that will be the biggest pleasure in my life Actually, I think that might be a little too easy.
I don’t know if I feel sad or if I feel happy but to be realistic I was doom scrolling those chapters and I couldn’t stop so this was good. This is good. I can’t do anymore. I need to go take a shower. I have work tomorrow.
I’m sorry, but I’m so close to taking down the score that I gave it because I understand what he said like raise sex magical ability but not age that’s not something you finagle away with like that I would literally have asked them like my only concern is his age because that’s disgusting and I just will not do it so you either make me younger or make him older or this is not happening
Yup I agree with this one or they wait a long time but I took it as this is a different world with a different law ish but if it was below 16 crazy but still I agree with this even in a different world it’s still a bit iffy they need to do something like he ages quickly or something
I will say that at one point I was. at the cusp of dropping it because first of all I just don’t like this specific trope the literal human trafficking like I can’t I barely can deal with it. it’s even worse because of the brothel thing like I can’t and there were children there was he make the kids do that like I cannot. That’s Fucked up it Just won’t leave my head I need to know, I am very happy that it becomes so Much better that it became so manageable for my mental health because I was about to be even more depressed
I can’t get where the reading is so low now first of all the starts not the best it’s non-con and I was very uncomfortable with that. I felt like it could’ve been done a different way and still had the same vibe by the end the ending is satisfied, but at the same time it’s lovely. He gets to technically disappear to be with him. I don’t think they’re dead. I think they’re just going to reincarnate again because I believe in that shit so that’s good enough for me. It’s very beautiful but like the start is an issue I’m still gonna give it a low rating because of that I don’t like the forcefulness. I don’t like the word forgiveness. I don’t understand that he most likely was faded to meet him, but I don’t like that. It didn’t need to be like that. I understand being like a little forceful kiss a little bit like I don’t wanna let you go in a little bit like oh I will stay if you’d like stop or whatever and he’s scared that he’s actually going to instead of just you know our word him instead of is gonna seem like oh he’s actually going to eat me alive or something like that I don’t give a fuck just not that.