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It’s kind of trash I thought it would’ve been better it was going a really good way at the start but no trash and it even had a time to redeem itself and it’s still not the best first of all I hate the girl like I fucking hate her so bad she knows for a fact that he’s going to get beaten up and he’s getting in trouble if she keeps going near him I know that she’s trying to make him feel better but at least she could be more tactful about it in a way that she wouldn’t get fucking caught number two what’s up with the dad like I’m not even kidding was he like nice and then me not to fucking know where is he relieving some trauma that he had like that his dad regret making him the successor and now he’s just pissed off so he’s like oh he has low power he needs to be smacked around but that’s which is way too quick I get a rise angry but at first just being detached and kind of even disgusted glaring a little bit like push you away and being like ill and then when he finally said something snapping that would’ve made a lot more sense like a slow drag out and not just stuff let’s do a bunch of sporadic bullshit that makes no absolute fucking sense even in story mode because that’s what we’re trying to tell fantasy or not oh unless probably make the FL his cousin no and make her so pathetic and make the MC not be able to use any of his clearly advance knowledge that he has from his world and mostly comics and no sort of way because they’re not useful and he won’t even try them like I don’t get that shit

So I’m gonna put this in two parts because I’m annoyed because there’s a lot of things wrong with this besides it being messy incoherent it’s not giving you a proper sense of a lore There’s a lot of things are unexplained and I told him that when she ran away it didn’t seem proper the Hate that the King has seems a little bit arbitrary Like he doesn’t seem like he’s planning proper understanding of the whole thing mostly of why it is also good to have those two places separate because I don’t know what he’s so mad his father give up his left for him I don’t get it and it doesn’t even give you a semblance of it either also it doesn’t make any sense that they would put a child with someone that she clearly run away from because the first person to question should be the prince not make up their own conclusions like what the fuck

I feel bad for finding another problem besides what everybody else said but it’s messy it’s really messy it’s not even like in different places for a reason how the story is played out it’s just messy and the characters feel a little bit too flat like there wasn’t enough idea going into the plot in general mostly the start I don’t know if you’ll get better and the characters I get part of it but it feels like it’s lacking because it feels it doesn’t quite get to the three-dimensional part it doesn’t quite get there mostly her

I’m trying to understand but even though she was 18 she did leave her whole life in a little tiny shack and was abused you are though she did see other people and read both books which I don’t know how she learned to read or if she already knew also it’s weird that they haven’t they currently just gave her a teacher because he’s receiving lessons also I was very concerned at the first dress so they put her in after she got into the mansion because it had no underwear old Timey underwear was actually very big and mostly for girls the pantaloons


Besides all that yeah they are is freaking adorable prince feels a little bit off the story is very messy it doesn’t feel like It has any concrete bases on the plot if feels like the ark is going no where it’s like opened it doesn’t even feel mysteriously or anything like that it just gives you and uncompleted kind of what the fucks going on type of thing it doesn’t give you the proper wanting to know what’s going on and a lot of the information ‘s not even there like how they met makes no sense to me

I was going to say yes 5 stars if the story actually put psychological horror or psychological thriller.

It would’ve been amazing because it’s so like what the fuck the whole Time and it’s very well written but at the same time what the fuck just having psychological mind games not straight up rape that falls under the category of psychological horror or because of the other scenes a little bit closer to thriller which is close Two whore but not the same because it’s meant to mentally fuck you if it was put like that in the tags and it clearly show that a little bit more in certain aspects like it played with us a little bit in that regard I would be like yes because it’s good when you look at it that way because it makes you wanna cry but it’s not so I don’t know I don’t think I’m gonna give it like anything

Am I opinion he’s a good guy a little messed up but the way he takes actions a little crude not even a little it’s just fist instead of words

OK I like it a lot but I only have some nitpicks about the design because first of all the bottom how old exactly should he be because if he’s in his 30s some people have said he looks like he’s in his 30s but the other guy which could’ve been his father did not look like he was in his 30s because he didn’t have any wrinkles but they said he was in his 30s number two the top him yes his character design could’ve been put together better I mean about appearance wise I wish that they would cut the front tie his hair in the back cut it a little bit and then give him pants not tight pants kind of like theChloe white pants yeah those ones do you get what I mean that would look really good and I hope he learns to shrink also am a kind of mad about the face it looks kind a like Magus the mages bride I think that was the name I wish it was more slanted a tiny bit more flat in his eyes look probably very beautiful I do hope that maybe he shrinks because if he can shrink his dick I hope he can shrink the rest of himself

I forgot about the art change so when I went back to finish off the chapters that I didn’t read I got so confused it made me also very unhappy because their eyes look ridiculously stupid but not all of them just a couple which makes me even more mad if you didn’t even try to make the guys more handsome because their eyes look a little weird for the shape of the phrase it looks kind of sunken in way too much

OK the start start feels like it was executed OK and there was a lot of mysteries we could’ve been told about and then went to shit not the best execution start to the story usually 25 is when you said in but whatever like they do decide to teach Anyway to protect yourself because this was after all the north and it’s where demons are in a bunch of problems even if the tear thing concealed them showed no progress in her type of being that she did and all those years like taking one extra chapter to explain what she did across all those years would’ve gotten everybody excited and a lot closer to the main character a lot of manga use a strategy and it makes everybody excited to see how she’s going to use all the things she learned no it just feels flaky anyway to protect yourself because this was after all the north and it’s where demons are in a bunch of problems even if the tear thing concealed them showed no progress in her type of being that she did and all those years like taking one extra chapter to explain what she did across all those years would’ve gotten everybody excited and a lot closer to the main character a lot of manga use a strategy and it makes everybody excited to see how she’s going to use all the things she learned no it just feels flaky Nothing that is bad I’m just saying it’s messy

I could walk away from a lot of stuff but the one that I Cana is when he said she was egotistical because of the way she acted towards everybody else that she was hateful and outburst that she had towards other people and then her self at the end and that was egotistical do you have any idea how mad that makes me dislike the ignorance because of mental mental health like that’s clearly PTSD in extreme depression those bouts of anger usually have to do with the pressure In some amount of anxiety they’re quite normal when you know you have depression and you help to understand yourself you know how to deal with those feelings better because I hate people for no damn reason and I have like a weird hatred towards him and I know it’s a rational so I know that it’s just that I’m depressed but you judging someone when you clearly didn’t do anything even since their childhood to teach them anything what the fuck is wrong with you what the hell did you expect for her not to be suicidal clearly you want because you’re both psychopaths

OK just saying but if that was actually a comic that the guy wrote if you guys saw the end of the one with the cat and the lion And he kind of basically based off his boyfriend that might be the best route is experience meaning that the other guy the Muskdeer was actually a person as well and there’s a very high chance that the reason why they broke up and the guy left him was because he had children and he already had a family and he didn’t say anything or he had to take care of either his family his children and those many of the reasons because he couldn’t handle dating a guy would stop put it in a lot of perspective that this was just put sweetly