they crack me tf up are you or are you not in the drawing room of someone else's hotel suite?!?? put on your clothes ennid!
taking the fleshlight to class every is diabolical work LMAOOOO
ig its time to reread. cant believe theres no side story chapters yet
going straight for the tiddy is craaaaaazyyy ennid omg. then he was about to brush it off with a 'no homo' like girl bffr
he said well while i’m at it …
the end is falling flat for me.... feeling rushed, esp at their reunion. they had so much to talk abt and it kept getting tossed aside with "well whatever!"s and "no sir!! uwu" "ahhh ahh ahhhh"s and its like what happened to the plot?!?!
and then they had the nerve to jump headfirst back into the storyline so casually and drop the entire denouement and brother arc/reveal in one go lmao. i cant believe he remembered everything and had the nerve to ask him out when hes back in the country. have some mf decorum! anyways i didnt need the bro arc any longer than this, it did just fine as is. but the main characters' personalities feel a little like caricatures now :(((
Right, I didn't understand why it had to be so rushed. I feel like the older brother had a lot going on for him too. He had complexity. He was obsessed with the main character to the point where he would kidnap him & kill his lover... etc etc... but there was nothing there to show us why he was like this. We just KNOW he was obsessed and that's it. It falls flat for me. The brother being an antagonist made no sense to me.
i hope more bl in this genre come out. just slice of life, casual, paced, romantic, tender, wholesome. easy and not frustrating. peaceful sunny
they’re soooo refreching