the end is falling flat for me.... feeling rushed, esp at their reunion. they had so much to talk abt and it kept getting tossed aside with "well whatever!"s and "no sir!! uwu" "ahhh ahh ahhhh"s and its like what happened to the plot?!?!
and then they had the nerve to jump headfirst back into the storyline so casually and drop the entire denouement and brother arc/reveal in one go lmao. i cant believe he remembered everything and had the nerve to ask him out when hes back in the country. have some mf decorum! anyways i didnt need the bro arc any longer than this, it did just fine as is. but the main characters' personalities feel a little like caricatures now :(((
Right, I didn't understand why it had to be so rushed. I feel like the older brother had a lot going on for him too. He had complexity. He was obsessed with the main character to the point where he would kidnap him & kill his lover... etc etc... but there was nothing there to show us why he was like this. We just KNOW he was obsessed and that's it. It falls flat for me. The brother being an antagonist made no sense to me.
whew, they running thru this plot like a tomb raider fr fr. absolutely no suspense, just the next event! still a fun lil read tho
if i heard Louie's brothers name 60 years from now it would be too soon. i want this to be his last mention
this guys a creep with a feeder kink. ion like him at allllllllll.
can someone remind me what the dragons curse is? i thought it was just not being able to touch them or something but he sounded like it was more severe
He turns into a child
if grow gets with someone other than his destined one he or his partner dies like the dragon blooded rejects them. i think it’s sexually so he can touch them? a few chapters back said he was a virgin
no i think that was sorcery someone else put on him, he wasnt born like that. ty tho
ok so if ennid IS his destined partner its ok?
taiga is what we call a reflector in human design lol. wishing them the best
going straight for the tiddy is craaaaaazyyy ennid omg. then he was about to brush it off with a 'no homo' like girl bffr
he said well while i’m at it …