
Idk, I feel like something about the structure of the story could be written better. Like the art is good. MC back story is decent...and why we are in this current situation is alrigh. But I always feel like there are pieces in-between of how we got to one point to another is missing. Like the chapters are chopped and pieces are missing. Idk. I still like the story tho, the ML is a cutie. I hope he can convince the MC to want to keep living.

Ppl think Jo is boring because he has normal dreams and aspirations with a normal family and life....is crazy to me. So I guess needing trauma and falling into a life of crime, drugs and murder is the fun stuff. Ppl are mentally unbalanced. From how I see it Ian needs the life Jo has. To want him to be in a relationship with TJ that's built on trauma and shacked with guilt..... that's diabolical.

Burn this bullshit...CUZ WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK!!!!! Who authorized these two chapters because it doesn't make sense. Where does it make sense sis?!?!?!! Hello is anyone in the rooooooom!?! Like why are you for real playing right now, author. I want to file a fucking complaint and talk to the damn manager, at this point.
These comments have me in tearsssssss! Why are ya like this?!
I can't blame them they're a lot of traumatizing plot in yaoi LMAO