I think Korea should normalize having shorter series cuz what I'm realizing is that a lot of these mfa don't know how to write long stories. Like I'm noticing often like the first maybe 30 to 40 chapters, maybe the first season is like really good and then everything subsequently after that just goes to shit.
Maybe they're like writing themselves into a wall? and but then proceed to like dig under the wall instead of getting over it. The story and characters start to suffer, shit gets dragged on for like 20 chapters, characters make crazy ass decisions, like it's very shit, it's not great.
This one for example, the first season was sooo cute like I genuinely enjoyed , might have been my fav at the time. But now i'm realizing this author/artist doesn't know how to express complex emotions lmao? I'm pretty sure each character doesn't have more than like three three emotions. The MC looks nervous 24/7 and the ML looks secretly angry 24/7 like I don't understand what they're supposed to express in any given chapter other than sadness, anxiety, horny, and the occasional happiness. Its like there's nothing else it's so sad and we're all confused and we're all tired.
I think it's okay to have one season stories. Not everything needs to have three seasons, not everything needs to be 60 chapters plus. We all can't write Naruto and god forbid we all can't write one piece like it's okay let's keep it short and simple let's keep it cute yeah
I was like, no way thats how the reveal is. Looks like the story will resume properly next chapter, this was just a sneak peak?
I thought it was taking him back to the first day of junior high, but now they're seniors? Is this after the day he didn't show?
Is adding SA to stories like a drug authors just can't get rid off?? Cause as usual this is completely unnecessary.
If you can't write and rise in conflict without SA then don't write at all!!!!!
It's actually been years since I read this, idk if i've seen any of the side chapters
But looking at the comments, are there actually red-head defenders?????? The same fucking bitch that tormented and assulted the main couple????? The literal fucking devil???? And want him to be with the best friend????? Have we lost all sanity??????
NOO NOO NOOOO DON'T DO IT
Anyway that ended very lacklusterly
A lot of unresolved sub plots, like why have sexual assault and have it add absolutely nothing to the plotline. Like they're still friends ffs.
Anyway, hopefully the writing improves, but i don't have much faith if they're gonna jump into onegaverse right after this one
Just bad writing. Everything was going fine until now :/ yikes
Like why not use his mental degredation as a way to learn more about each other, not a way to..... that
Leo goes on a holiday to a cabin resort with his two female childhood friends, Misty and Jody, but b...
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I started it when it first released, but i don't like lying plots cause the fallout is often annoying. Is it worth the read?
The way that these 2 were so fucking gay, i didn't expect there to be a homophobic society, but it makes sense considering the hierarchy of nobles here
First of all Blondie don't even really like the sub, he's just never considered he's in love with Hwayoung cause they're both tops, or he's in denial idk. He just thinks he wants what Hwayoung has, which is also a desperate cry for his attention
Second, leave them alone!!! Why yall so desperate to break them up, this ain't no fucking contract bdsm, they're in fucking love !!!! Desperate, pathetic ass hoes
I think this is the first time i've seen like, a story starting with a flash forward, and when we go through the plot to the flash forward.... It doesn't make any sense
Like literally nothing sparked this??? He just decided this on his own???? If this has a novel, something has to be missing cause otherwise, this story writing was fucked from the start
