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The art is good plot as well and there’s definitely tension and passion between them. The thing is even tho I see what they tried to do for couple that has bad communications, it’s just badly executed

Why is it tbc but it’s written the end on the chapter

I think it’s a hard take essentially because Touji and Yachiyo both didn’t have a clear closure, with all those “what if” and all this longing for all those years.. So I personally have a hard time rooting for Kiyoto even if he seems like a good guy. If this kind of tragic love that is one sided end up being reciprocated I feel like anyone would go back together because it fulfill something it couldn’t before and it change those sad feeling into happiness at once. I’m not sure this story is completed or what kinda confusing but I do hope there’s more to it..

I was expecting the usual esper x guide plot where smut is thrown here and there at guidance scene but this one is actually so good?? The storyline is quite developed as good as a kdrama, and it’s well introduced, even with the reborn cliche. I have lot of expectation for this one, love it so far. I believe it’s gonna be a slow burn type?

The way he’s so hot I’m loosing my goddamn mind y’all!!! last chapter (36) has me kicking my feet and blushing. There’s 2 panned of him being drunk and dazed where you lost me, like how can he be so cute but hot at the same time

This really remind me of Despicable!! (psyche delico) Not wholly but this could have been the same but in a more dark/creepier ver. So happy I found this, it was a good read. And that was really hot to see both of them together and maybe ending together.. But didn’t really like how the smut started.. I mean, I’m sure it would have been all the same with consent if Peach asked Lemon to prove him he’s not into cherry or just start something mutually bc they’re drunk and horny. But that felt unnecessary.. it only highlight Peace personality I guess.

But I was wishing to see more of cherry and lemon..

I think this one isn’t gonna be fairly rated.. the story was original even tho it’s a cliche beginning, the characters stand out but I don’t think it’s anything too special either. The development on the story and character was very poor, the only thing that is game changing is the new kind of trait it introduced and it might become the next popular thing in omegaverse as someone said.. but I still think it could have been better, it feels rushed and is confusing, especially on Ryu’s end, even if I understand the point of him not being honest and keeping us from finding out too soon that it’s in fact mutual love idk.. it’s not really coherent with his sudden mood swing. A moment he’s frail and vulnerable, another he’s someone who beat 3 guys and is an idgaf about you.. I think we could use a chapter from his pov, it would benefit greatly to their characters deepness and tying everything together. Also agree with some of the comment, it would have been more interesting to call it mutual attraction rather than love

This one was surprisingly good! A cliche you saw many time of an incubus with a task. But beginning to end this one had me hooked with the way the story was leading and how wholesome it was. (Despite how Aoi is acting toward his relationship.) The type of story you can’t stop reading bc you wanna know what happen next. And I wouldn’t mind having more of them either, they are so endearing, didn’t find it cringe either, to me it’s successful. Well written! Tho there’s lacking stuff here and there like what’s the point of passing and being free of responsibility and how people don’t seem to care much about the change of agreeing to everything from Aoi etc.. But it’s still so good

Lmao ch6 came out of nowhere between all those stories.. like it’s really a hidden gem somehow lol. Was scrolling so quick but ch6 had me reading it haha

Can’t help but come back on it, but for a moment I really thought that J had the upper hand in the end when he said “Makoto” at first I thought they were at the same level and J fooled M in thinking he overtook him. And for that split of moment I thought it made sense bc the whole time J was toying with M showing him how naive he is, and well the whole time the author had us twisted and challenging our prediction.
But I do think both of them continuously taking the upper hand could’ve been a “happy alternative ending”
That, only if J had returned M’s feeling..