I was expecting the usual esper x guide plot where smut is thrown here and there at guidance scene but this one is actually so good?? The storyline is quite developed as good as a kdrama, and it’s well introduced, even with the reborn cliche. I have lot of expectation for this one, love it so far. I believe it’s gonna be a slow burn type?
This really remind me of Despicable!! (psyche delico) Not wholly but this could have been the same but in a more dark/creepier ver. So happy I found this, it was a good read. And that was really hot to see both of them together and maybe ending together.. But didn’t really like how the smut started.. I mean, I’m sure it would have been all the same with consent if Peach asked Lemon to prove him he’s not into cherry or just start something mutually bc they’re drunk and horny. But that felt unnecessary.. it only highlight Peace personality I guess.
But I was wishing to see more of cherry and lemon..
I think this one isn’t gonna be fairly rated.. the story was original even tho it’s a cliche beginning, the characters stand out but I don’t think it’s anything too special either. The development on the story and character was very poor, the only thing that is game changing is the new kind of trait it introduced and it might become the next popular thing in omegaverse as someone said.. but I still think it could have been better, it feels rushed and is confusing, especially on Ryu’s end, even if I understand the point of him not being honest and keeping us from finding out too soon that it’s in fact mutual love idk.. it’s not really coherent with his sudden mood swing. A moment he’s frail and vulnerable, another he’s someone who beat 3 guys and is an idgaf about you.. I think we could use a chapter from his pov, it would benefit greatly to their characters deepness and tying everything together. Also agree with some of the comment, it would have been more interesting to call it mutual attraction rather than love
This one was surprisingly good! A cliche you saw many time of an incubus with a task. But beginning to end this one had me hooked with the way the story was leading and how wholesome it was. (Despite how Aoi is acting toward his relationship.) The type of story you can’t stop reading bc you wanna know what happen next. And I wouldn’t mind having more of them either, they are so endearing, didn’t find it cringe either, to me it’s successful. Well written! Tho there’s lacking stuff here and there like what’s the point of passing and being free of responsibility and how people don’t seem to care much about the change of agreeing to everything from Aoi etc.. But it’s still so good
Can’t help but come back on it, but for a moment I really thought that J had the upper hand in the end when he said “Makoto” at first I thought they were at the same level and J fooled M in thinking he overtook him. And for that split of moment I thought it made sense bc the whole time J was toying with M showing him how naive he is, and well the whole time the author had us twisted and challenging our prediction.
But I do think both of them continuously taking the upper hand could’ve been a “happy alternative ending”
That, only if J had returned M’s feeling..
I am now wondering if J ever loved M at all.. or he was on,y seeking release.. and maybe that was what happened with W too? He used J to be release from this life or something
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i think that j probably didn't truly love m. the author is making it very clear that this whole story is just a cycle, which continues with m looking for someone to obsess over him so he can commit suicide too. so it is likely j felt the same way towards m. perhaps he only ever saw m as an opportunity. who knows. but i like to believe that j held a slight bit of affection for m even if it wasn't romantic in any capacity.
Can you pls explain more? The scene when J dreamt of his haunted past with Walt. What does it mean when J said it is Walt's curse? And Why did J touch the hand of Walt caused Walt to vanish? J mentioned thag Walt "lie" in the bedroom, what was that mean?
I am really desperate because I dont understand QAQ ╥﹏╥ ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍
Can you pls explain more? The scene when J dreamt of his haunted past with Walt. What does it mean when J said it is Walt's curse? And Why did J touch the hand of Walt caused Walt to vanish? J mentioned thag Walt "lie" in the bedroom, what was that mean?
I am really desperate because I dont understand QAQ ╥﹏╥










I think it’s a hard take essentially because Touji and Yachiyo both didn’t have a clear closure, with all those “what if” and all this longing for all those years.. So I personally have a hard time rooting for Kiyoto even if he seems like a good guy. If this kind of tragic love that is one sided end up being reciprocated I feel like anyone would go back together because it fulfill something it couldn’t before and it change those sad feeling into happiness at once. I’m not sure this story is completed or what kinda confusing but I do hope there’s more to it..