Figgy Pudding May 5, 2021 9:10 pm

This is purely opinional, and everything I’m about to say shouldn’t deteriorate you from reading because it’s a genuinely good story, however, I’ll admit I have a few issues here and there. ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶

It’s a fun concept- one well thought out, but not so well executed, to put it bluntly.
It’s kind of rushed, the story often switches from third to first person from panel to panel, and the translation is a bit off. When describing the fl, it often feels as though we’re stacking books without any prior information, (i.e “Charlize has fairy blood” “Charlize is a top notch swords-woman” “Charlize is the same as Dylan” “Charlize is-) etc, it just feels majorly repeated ya know? Please don’t take this to heart- it’s purely constructive criticism from an outside perspective, but it is good so far. Just needs to be tweaked a bit...

Figgy Pudding May 5, 2021 7:32 pm

Ah yes, denial

Figgy Pudding May 5, 2021 7:28 pm

Don’t get me wrong, that white haired guy is a manipulative turd, but he had “the look” you know?
I feel like he caught feelings near the end of her life- I could be wrong, it’s pure gut instinct, but the only times I’ve ever seen that pitiful stare in mangas were when the love interest(s) were heartbroken.

    ...? May 5, 2021 7:50 pm

    I thought so too from the "face" but I don't care at this point I just hope she'll be happy with the ml (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

    bishounensupremacy May 5, 2021 7:51 pm

    i prefer him rather than the ml based on looks alone so i've been trying to find something that can justify what he did but nah lol he's just an asshole ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ probably did regret it after seeing her die though you're right

    I'm too single for this May 5, 2021 7:57 pm

    ikr I felt that too

Figgy Pudding March 13, 2021 6:46 am

My girl legit got a memory swiping BB gun

Figgy Pudding March 8, 2021 10:57 am

The fuck you mean “season finale” you means I gots to wait for one of these fuckers to CONFESS ALREADY *cough* *cough* MR DUKE?! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧

Figgy Pudding March 5, 2021 9:54 pm

Love the art, love the anime, love the ship, but, and I will stand by this, ITADORI is uke (๑•ㅂ•)و✧

Figgy Pudding March 5, 2021 9:14 pm

Vol. 3 Chapter 5
The shellshock I got was crazy but like- I think that was my favorite chapter by far, holy shit ( ̄∇ ̄")

Figgy Pudding March 4, 2021 11:58 am

If anything happens to the dad I’ll kill everyone and then myself- I am completely serious he better not get hurt or die or I’ll be in my room for crying for years until I have a whole ass villain origin story

Figgy Pudding March 2, 2021 5:51 am

The ML had black hair in one panel, and the baby in the title is shown w/ black hair- I think it’s just a mistake on the artists parts. Maybe there was a miscommunication...?

Figgy Pudding February 26, 2021 9:10 am

I FRICKEN LOVE ZEKE HOLY CRAP
╥﹏╥ HE'S SUCH A GOOD HUSBAND AND DAD- I WANT A RELATIONSHIP LIKE THAT ╥﹏╥

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