I fricken loved it! It was so well made and put together that I enjoyed almost every second, but I’m not gonna lie, there were a few plot holes. For one, the death of Fuckface McGee (the Ex) felt abrupt, there were moments it felt like intensity in situations (like the boardline breakup) were too easily overlooked, and major characters who contributed were either not shown or went in another unexpected direction. For example, Lin was never featured, and the blue eyed dude, who would’ve made a damn good antagonist, became comedic relief. But don’t let me stop anyone who skipped over the spoiler warning stop from reading, it was genuinely good and a lot of work was put into its production. ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
They fucked and confessed to each other within 2 minutes of meeting each other. It’s a fun concept, but poorly executed. Don’t get me wrong, it’s not horrible, but it wasn’t the best...props to the author though, you worked hard, and I applaud that, lord knows I could never build up the courage to post a story. ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~
You should read Caramel Honey. It has the exact same concept of this but does a little better. One of my favorites.
While it was rushed I thought it was a while before they sept together... at least 1 day.
thankyou!
She has the ability to predict the future and seeing that her daughter has the possibility of becoming who she was previous to the reincarnation chooses to do nothing about it? Yes. You are a horrible mother. You may be queen, but you don’t deserve your title as a parent. She lucked out with Tiara because it was in her second nature as a perfect heroine, but parenting isn’t leaving things up to fate, that’s just neglect.
Nine you shouldn’t hog all the cake like that- gimme some (づ￣ ³￣)づ
Does NO ONE else realize he looks exactly like Draco Malfoy if Draco had blue instead of silver eyes-
I thought of it the MINUTE I saw this man and now I’m having a conflict of whether to read this or not because of my HP ships...I ain’t gonna lie though- I’m falling hard and fast...ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
OMFG SAME GIRL SAME!!
Even being entertainingly evil, lol.
Haha I thought same think!
I’MMA CALL IT RIGHT NOW- YURI’S STUCK IN AN OTOME LOOP
I bet for 1000000000000000000 that Yuri stuck in an otome loop too
Do I ship the King and Luke? Yes. Do I ship the Main Character and Kuro? Also yes.
Should I legally be allowed to ship that last pair? Definitely, most absolutely, without the slightest doubt no. Not. At. All.
But will that stop me....? Also, no. ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
lol, i ship the first one as well.
The second one, the mc already made me see kuro as his best buddy.. ╥﹏╥
i ship them as besties
I CANT STRESS THIS ENOUGH-
NINE. DESERVES. THE. WOOORLD ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ
Nine is baby ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ WE MUST PROTECT THE PRECIOUS BABY BOY!!(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
You can't tell me this man DOES NOT look like Hisoka with black hair- tell me I'm not just trippin' here (⊙…⊙ )