I fricken loved it! It was so well made and put together that I enjoyed almost every second, but I’m not gonna lie, there were a few plot holes. For one, the death of Fuckface McGee (the Ex) felt abrupt, there were moments it felt like intensity in situations (like the boardline breakup) were too easily overlooked, and major characters who contributed were either not shown or went in another unexpected direction. For example, Lin was never featured, and the blue eyed dude, who would’ve made a damn good antagonist, became comedic relief. But don’t let me stop anyone who skipped over the spoiler warning stop from reading, it was genuinely good and a lot of work was put into its production. ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
They fucked and confessed to each other within 2 minutes of meeting each other. It’s a fun concept, but poorly executed. Don’t get me wrong, it’s not horrible, but it wasn’t the best...props to the author though, you worked hard, and I applaud that, lord knows I could never build up the courage to post a story. ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ノ~











He literally said step on me- I know what he meant to say but my forehead has decided that it’s canon. He said “step on me”, end of story. (=・ω・=)