
Listen, Tranquil:
You did a phenomenal job with your original translation of this oneshot. Phenomenal. I am currently learning Icelandic, and trying to practise by translating stuff, so I have a vague idea of how difficult the job you do is. Neither art nor science but with the complications of both. I often feel like something has been lost when I read Japanese translations, not in this case, I really feel you captured the beauty of the prose. So well done and from the bottom of my heart; thank you. Basically, those (*coughclodscough*) who struggled with the language here and decided for some reason to blame you for it can just go suck a pear of ducks. xxx ;D

Ah comments are moderated that was why. To prevent spams and such. Thank you. It was really tiring for me to do it since I did it alone essentially. This is not part of my group's projects so I didn't check the script after translating. It was supposed to be for fun. Haha. When I released the second version it was just with a better raw. But I did notice a few typos although not something critical. But I will update the third version after proofreading it and it will be the last. (I feel very reluctant about this because they are just a few minor changes and it might not be worth our time.)

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Just binge read all of this in like 3 days; and it is fan-fucking-tastic: Love the characters, they are *painfully* sharply observed.(though the girls are a bit 2D and, well, *girly*, though he has the bitchy competitiveness down) The guys are great though. Highlights: Vasco's single tear moments, JaeYeol surrounded by crumpled 'lets be friends' letters, whenever 500 Won says 'take off your glasses though' when other Rapper dude is bragging bout his looks, JaeYeol giving TWO chocolate milks, All the authors little notes and scribbles in the backgound graffitti etc, and at the beginning when Hyung Suk gets a haircut and looks like Chairman Mao. Boom. This shit is genius.
Not Mao but Kim Jong Un.
Maybe, K.J.U. for hair, but for face... I'm stickin with Mao- tho the incident happened after a haircut so yea, I can see how they meant kim. Either way the scene is still genius.