
The art is great, the set up is well done. I'm really a big fan of this author, the only thing I find hard to like about him and his work is the massive verbiage this guy likes to put us through.
Find it in you to swallow all those word filled speech bubbles and you're in to a pretty enjoyable and well worked story.

Idk if it'll help but here's my resume of this.
Darien the dark knight is a long time subject of the demon lord, despite that, he never held a weapon in his entire life. After an evaluation of some sorts, the demons learned his magic aptitud is null, so he got fired from the demon army. Some village girl finds him and after some display of bravery she bring him to her village where the father of the girl, after test him, finds out he's actually proeficient with any weapon to the point of ridicule. All that for naught, because the girl, in a burst of excitement, hugged him to her chest with such force that the guy's neck broke and died. End.
Ok, that last part wasn't the end. But for me IT IS. I'm done with this shit xD
Loved it <3