Idk if it’s just me but I’m not really enjoying the story, mostly cause their feelings change so quickly and the fl’s personality goes from one side to the other, at first it was refreshing but now it just feels like the author didn’t know how to write her. Especially with the ml. It was obvious at the beginning that she atleast showed interest in him and wanted to marry him but when he starts showing the same interest she wants to end the engagement? She’s very obviously depending on the book way too much and having it change the way she feels about people, the characters and the plot itself all just feel way too fickle.
It also doesn't help that there is zero chemistry between MC and ML. I also find MC to be wishy-washy about what to do. Case in point, deciding to stay away from red head then suddenly she's not doing so. Liking the ML and doing actions that encourage feelings to grow then suddenly he throws him to red head. I can't take the characters seriously at all.
I also saw spoilers and it just devolves from here. Personally, I just couldn't muster the patience to read more.
Well it's because the book said that she will die by Maria's hands. That's when she started doubting her feelings for Ricardo, thinking that if she truly loved him she wouldn’t be scared to die.
dawg, you’re going to be scared to die, it’s human, all those other stories where they don’t gaf there is literally something wrong with them psychologically. the other stories have normalized putting everything you are and live for up for their partner and it’s just not true in reality
Yeah I agree lol. At least to hesitate for a moment. I think in FL's case it's completely legitimate cuz the ML was never nice to her either except one time in their childhood. Can you truly love someone you're not dating anyway? One sided crush? I think it's not a big deal in that case lol
It’s tagged with romance and there is a romantic aspect but I don’t think it’s right to tag this as a romance story, it’s a really good story and confronted a lot of societal norms, I started reading hoping for a romance but I’m also really happy with what it ended up becoming though I am sad that they never officially got together
ughhh why won’t that man just communicate, he’s getting me so irritated with the misunderstandings. Evelyn has no clue about anything and no one will tell her anything either it’s getting me so annoyedddd
what the fuck did I just spend the last hour of my time reading
I don’t know exactly why yet but this story is starting to get me irritated and bored :/ , it’s not like there’s no plot but there’s just something about it that’s got me grinding my teeth
Ngl true
Same
Same!
Off topic but I love your taste in bl (most of them look non-toxic and healthy idk)
why the fuck are people so surprised at the incest as if one it’s not a tag, and two very fucking common back then ? yes our moralities have grown since then and it’s now shunned upon but back then do you know how fucking common that shit was, hell I bet most of you mfs got some form of yo family in you from your ancestors. And no I don’t condone it but if you’re gonna whine about it then simply don’t read this one ?
people when they click on a story they know has incest in it. end up having incest in it
bro I didn't even know it was going down that path man!! I read it cause the cover looked cool
I love the story but I get so sad at the bad translations, it has so much potential
I wanna let this marinate so badly but everytime I see there’s an update I can’t resist
omo, I intended to like lol sorry
Me:
first time I’ve ever wished I could block a story from being able to view it fuck ass 2 male leads plot