it's a decent story. I wish the abilities of the cube, the importance of it, and the overall world were a little more clear. I'm not particularly sure of why no one cares that he can now use three abilities, or why does he not care about the cube. first thing i would ask when waking up is "are my friends alright? where is the cube?" or is it something that's just with him all the time? anyways. this could play out alright, but the story seems wishy washy. it seems good, but some of the things that need to be very clear basically aren't. the main characters also seems to be lacking basic skills to ask basic questions, like who is the guy is the cloak? and if he isn't asking them, i want to know why he isn't.
this story was insanely cute AND earned my respect. personally, i prefer stories with a taller, stronger seme. i just always have and found the smaller, thin uke to be just so pretty. (completely my opinion!) and of course i've read a story here and there were it different but i never really really LOVED it. THEN THIS STORY SLIDES IN HERE LIKE ITS NOBODIES BUSINESS. their relationship was so just utterly adorable
when the wolves were making flower crowns? omg i almost cried. wish we could have seen more of them as adults it was so adorable i'm so happy for them. also goldy is SO CUTE WTF
at least it didn't drag on
that man had like 10000 red flags
at least he said 'i'll drop you if you're out of line' because honestly if he makes ONE wrong move and i was in the ukes position? done. it would feel like babysitting not dating. also hes straight up an ass and had zero character development
i really really loved this. beautiful. I could write 5 paragraphs of why i thought this was great including the characters, art, stories, depth, and overall writing. but, overall, i just really really appreciated this story and both of the couples. the second couple made me want a relationship just like theirs. incredible.











IM SO EXCITED FOR THIS AHHHH