why did i think this was all out? i usually check if they're all out before i read but my mind just assumed they were? or at least most of this? i have no idea why. this just hit me really hard for no reason at all. i was like? what? where's the rest of it ? took me a solid 4 seconds to realize it wasn't done hahaha
the character development is phenomenal. there's so much meaning behind the small smiles and the time he takes to make him happy. there's so much affection and personal growth, and seriously important messages, like the 'you cannot love another until you love yourself' which was great. love this story.











i wish that he fell in love with mujin again possibly after confessing his love for lewellin (? however you spell it) and I wish that while he was being mean to mujin, he would say in his head something like "I cant. I cant like him. I dont want him to disappear" sorta thing, or at least want to ask mujin WHY he moved away so long ago.
the story would be more interesting I suppose if he was convinced they were two different people and then realized he liked them both SEPARATELY and it was hard for him to decide between the two.
either way, the problem seems to be only with the bad set up for his backstory. not wanting to like someone because they disappeared suddenly? i feel like instead it would just result in really bad trust issues, and that would have made much more sense.
anyway, decent story! but probably wont be reading again