
There is a lot of things I want to say about this that I can't properly articulate, but I'll try. I love the desaturated and sunken art style, the inner monologue, the stroies structure and the somewhat accurate portrayal of BDSM. What I I dont like is the pacing, it can't pick whether it wants to be fast or slow. I also dont like the unprofessionalism, the sub should know his self worth and express whether he wants something or not, everything is also heading down cliche lane, hopefully this story does more with its potential.
Im trying so hard to fuck with this but im not forgetting how param JUST got roofied. There is a time and a place for some fucking and now isnt it.
Yeah, I can't get behind drunk sex. And drugged sex? Don't even get me started. If they were both drunk, that'd be one thing. A stupid mistake by a couple of drunk people. But Hwi knows he's shitfaced at the very least. Not okay, bruh
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I am completely against drunk/drug sex but we don’t know how long time has passed in this case? The trainer probably thought the uke had sobered up when he woke up when he said “Are you awake now?” The uke jumped at the trainer first which the trainer stopped him. And then uke told him everything that had happened that night so he remembered everything.
A roofie lasts 3-6 hours... yeah the bottom pounced on him first but he was very obviously mentally unstable, even when he was rambling he was very obviously hurting inside. Any sane person would refrain from sticking their dick in someone who is drunk, drugged, and in emotional distress. This is wrong, dont let the hot men distract you from that fact.
Oh, I’m not distracted. He didn’t know he was roofied though and again, we don’t know how long time has passed. He woke up after how long?
Someone who is roofied or drunk (even a little bit) can’t really remember everything and recall the entire night and what other people said, etc. They can’t speak in a clear way.
I agree more so about the emotional distress. He shouldn’t have done it. But I don’t think he was trying to take advantage of the uke in this case.