Usually straight smutty stories make me uncomfortable because the female body is depicted so weirdly, but here FL is sexy without being your typical cute girl and her body is so much "normal" compared to other female characters and kudos to ML who is not your usual macho, he's the cute one here.
Ryouma and Tori are very cute, but the Hiro plot was so unsettlinh, I dunno it kinda spoiled the story. It would've been better without Hiro and magic, or if Hiro wasn't such a creep and had other motives. But oh well, all in all it was very cute.
Finally the husband! Also the cards are super interesting, if they annoy someone they can just skip them omg