I like it. The seme is an antihero and isn't claimed to be the good guy, and his crime was imprisoning criminals and generating soul energy from that. I don't get the comments saying these are terrible characters. Granted it's not the most humane prison set up but historical prisons were awful. And have you never seen a story with an antihero like Deadpool, not all characters are role models that doesn't make them bad characters though.
Also this is a fun story. Unlike most historical BL it's an action plot, not just angst like most.
I don't think the stork lie or the graphic explanation were either the right thing to say to a 5 year old asking about babies.
Some version of just censored age appropriate version of the truth? Like talk about a special embrace only adults do that makes a baby cell in their tummy that gets bigger and bigger over 9 months until doctors can safely take a healthy baby out, but not growing in the stomach where food goes, and tell them don't worry about any hug or just sleeping next to someone won't cause babies and they don't need to be concerned by that. You know something covering the main facts without uses words you'd be mortified by them yelling loudly in a grocery store, or giving too specific a tutorial with enough details for them to try to copy (that would be a big problem like the girl's explanation here!), and addressing common fears in a few sentences. And usually the talk about private body parts is a seperate talk.
Thankfully I haven't had to plan for this yet since my nieces & nephews are babies and I don't have kids yet. But the guy doing the stork story has definitely told multiple of his kids the same story and I think that will just cause issues when the kids discover reality down the line











The mystery is now revealed. Poor Na-in was once a musician that caught the dragons interest, so Na-in was kidnapped by Amun 500 years ago and when he kept grieving his lost freedom, friends & family Amun wiped his memory and created a whole culture designed to keep Na-in trapped.