
I love this manga , great story great art , but really this could have been better , edith was defeated way too easy for me , atropos could have been a full character with a past similar to ray , and have her timeline and maybe revenge too , I WOULD HAVE LOVED to see ray take his esp back and have his revenge from edith after a defeat , I dont know so much more exiting potential could have come out of this , also we definetly needed some sides of ray life after giving up his esp and honesty lucy&kile sides were too boring even with the sex .

Also we kept reading that ray's powers were extraordinary and exceptional but we didt really see anything huge he did with said power it was only the murder of that agent .
I also would have loved if kile kept the esp alittle longer and learned how to use it and actually help or even kill edith himself.
AHHHH this really ended better in my head

Why do I not understand the english in this story ?

I love it. The official translator is serving poetry.
The Korean version uses Joseon-era Korean. The English version uses 19th century English. That’s why the English feels kind of stuffy, old and high-brow “my lord, you jest~~”. It’s just matching the era to set the mood.
The translator didn’t have to do it this way but it feels more authentic to the original material, I guess. It all sounds like poetry to me so I love it.
They really never showed any progress in their relationship or any effort from that s class guy to shoo away the 3 others and maybe get jealous and be nice to him , anything really that can keep this as romance so when they end up together it doesn't turn into delulu .
This had so much potential to be something other than group sex on top of group sex but the auther just wasted it .
I wish they were more clear in illustrating his Stockholm syndrome, ptsd, and emotional vulnerability which all contribute to his growing reliance on Blondie, rather than a random growth of feelings