What made you think that all he wants is money? Especially YOUR money??
You never learn, sir! Go back to kindergarten! Learn empathy! Learn kindness!
Like a jealousy arc where the MC makes a comment like in ch. 39 and that comment gets spread around and the ML hears it and starts to misunderstand. But the truth is, he is jealous of himself. Like that's cute to me. I want some cute angst, a soft angst, a touch angst in my stories sometimes.
The world would be better if we keep her from living. Such a waste of oxygen. Clearly she did it to herself, let her unalive herself.
The story from ch. 1-13 sucks so bad I wanna erase it from my memory. The plot drastically improves by ch. 14-16 and so forth.
I love and hate this story because of how it started but I'm gonna just forget the first 13 chapters and say that ch. 14 is ch. 1.
My only complaint was how come the rapist got upset that they got rejected by the person they raped. Plus how come the raped apologized to his rapist???
Make it make sense
If you want something done perfect, you gotta do it yourself lol Camilla is such a queen!!
The hair flip, too! SLAY!!!