
lemme just prepare yall for the future chapters: in conclusion, he is very whipped

but if u wanna read full on spoilers then here's a link to one i made last year https://www.mangago.zone/home/mangatopic/8534723/

yall clearly didnt understand why eren did what he did. it isn't he "died for nothing". eren's real goal was to buy paradis time - just enough time - to protect themselves from the upcoming wrath of the 20% that survived the rumbling. although it did still end with paradis crumbling, at least it happened decades later - when the people eren loved had finally passed. paradis couldn't have fully defended themselves, not with different nations literally allying with each other. and that's the beauty to it. there are no winners or losers in war. there is only death and destruction. so saying eren died for nothing isn't right. he did die for something - he died giving paradis and its descendants more time to enjoy life after he sacrificed his own. and at the end of the story, nothing good came out of war, not for paradis, and not for their enemies.

love this. very realistic. it's inevitable that paradis got destroyed by the war. although by killing 80% of the population eren was able to buy them time to create their own resources as preparation, there was no absolute affirmation that they could've still escaped from the rest of the world's terror. this happened way after mikasa and the others' time on earth. by then the descendants of paradis would've been the ones to go against foreign nations. hate will always bear hate. and war is unbearingly inevitable. but I'm just glad armin and the rest weren't able to see the destruction of their home. they've lived through enough

dropped this when she left the castle and started her delusional fantasy escapade. can anyone give me a quick explanation on whats happening in the recent chapters? i read the novel up to the part where she's back and that daddy got hurt trying to save her as well as the thing with perdel but that's pretty much it

eugene's anxieties are so relatable and realistic. he's finally willing to be a bit more expressive and selfish with his feelings despite knowing full well of the consequences he will have to face. say what you will but that takes a lot of courage and determination. he's really owning up to it. this is the first time for me to read about a male lead whose mentality is so heavily focused to the point that i see him as a real person rather than a fictional character

the novel is actually pretty good. just that the translations to the manhwa is immensely mediocre. it messing everything up

Heya! could you send me the link to the novel? im sorry for the immensely mediocre translations its cause i don't really have much to work with but it would be really great if I have a novel so that I can improve my translation skills.
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In a novel the writer can write,
' Amy was shocked, for the man that she has been desperately trying to avoid for the past 3 years is right infront of her. The sound of cheering and fireworks could no longer be heard for all of her attention is focused on the man right in front of her. He looks taller more handsome in fact. Just to think that she used to spoon fed him with his lil bib. In disbelief all she could mutter out was "Nox...!" '
While in the manhwa the writer can just write,
"Nox...!" and the rest is up to the art to convey the message.
the above novel setting is what I've understand from the manhwa and randomly created a few lines (it's not real long story short)
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Could you maybe provide some constructive criticism instead of just saying mediocre?

I'll provide some criticism (?) It feels rather weird(?) for having " right infront of her" repeating twice. I've found that it works and sounds much better when using synonyms to use for the same words. for example: using tired and exhausted in the same sentence. "I worked too hard today, i'm sooo tired. The man sighed in exhaustion. As i've mentioned before, your creation above has two "right infront of her" and they are neighboring sentences. Therefore, it feels repeated (obviously :< ) I suggest that you use. ...right before her eyes... Or use ...infront of her...
Example: <copy pasted lmao>
Amy was shocked, for the man that she has been desperately trying to avoid for the past 3 years is right before her eyes. The sound of cheering and fireworks could no longer be heard for all of her attention is focused on the man infront of her.
In here it sounds much pleasing to hear(?) Anyway hope it helpedddd
(๑•ㅂ•)و✧ thank you for doing this for us moony-nim! ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
honestly im not really surprised that he suggested that lol