Amorim's Topics (458)

i'm sorry but i don't think that's possible T_T because the second ending hasn't really to do with everything that happens in the other chapters, it's like a second route where yeon was able to say his feelings and jaeha didn't die in graduation day to start with... but if you wanna try i think chaps 0, 2, 4 (last pages are sad tho), 5, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 14 and your ending ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶ it tells their stories and has some cute moments!

Thank you! That really helped

Stop treating yaoi as your jack off material.

....I don't? I just don't find it accurate to make cross dressing men into complete women. I've met many cross dressers and none of them hide the fact that they are men by dressing up in clithes and makeup 100% of the time nor do they want to be women all the time. They like the fact that they are men and cross dressing is just a hobby and something they really like doing. I really like Mangas about cross dressers but this just isn't one of them because the main character basically became a woman

Complete women? What do you mean? How and when did they become a woman? They just like cross-dressing. There is nothing wrong with that.

Neither did I, but if you go on instagram or social media or where ever it is you chose to go, look up men in drag, cross dressers, ect ect. They have lives outside of cross dressing and Not a single one look, acts, and has the features of a woman (outside of Trans people who arguably do not cross dress but actually do become that gender) they look like, and are men. This story seems like some sort of female gratification for the readers. Well you can relate to being a woman so instead of putting in a male character here, I'll just make it be almost 100% an actual woman. The only time we ever saw any manly (if you will) qualities were tragically borderline sex scenes where they didn't even show a dick. I've seen Mangas that have done it a lot better and this didn't strike me as representation for men with stereotipically women's hobbies, as it did some sort of wishy washy (let's turn this character into a woman who occasionally is portrayed as a man. My cousins best friend likes cross dressing and has many cross dressing friends and he also thought the story was inaccurate and did not like it. Clearly you did and that's fine but coming onto the post and saying I use it for "jack off material" is weird and cringey dude.

Yeah, they do. I never said that they didn't have a life outside crossdressing.

But you see, the story did not show that he only wants to crossdress. If it was going for the whole female gratification thing then they would:

a)Give him a shorter, skinnier body instead of a strong (but lean) tall build.
b)Give him bigger eyes.
c)Make him the uke.
d)Make him act feminine.

This is literally what most yaoi mangas do. This one didn't. But if you take a look at quite a lot of "uke" characters, you will notice that they do all of the following. You will notice that they often include the reader staring right at the reader in the cover while the seme is next to them in a romantic/sexual way. Wanna know why? To catch the attention of people who want that. It's a trick used in media (mostly in magazines) to encourage the reader to buy (this applies here when people buy legally) the product by making it seem as if it's for them.

We saw the guy outside the house, in male clothing. We seen him in sporty clothes, we seen him in jeans and a t-shirt. We saw him buying porn. He sits with his legs wide open. He takes the lead and isn't a pushover. Where do we even see him having feminine hobbies? Other than the crossdressing, he acts like any human being, either male or female. Also, taking the lead during sex isn't "masculine." That's such a rude thing to say. Do you think that when lesbians have sex one of them becomes "the man" in the relationship? No offense but I get that it's probably cuz you know, the "straight life" is considered the norm/default in our society. What do you expect the guy to do?

Also yeah censorship sucks but that's just a thing we have to deal with.

Since you went with the whole "I know people who cross dress thing" I suppose it's customary for me to do too. I mean it's like the whole "I have black friends" so I usually wouldn't.
I fucking love crossdressing. I have a lot of friends who like cross-dressing e.g. my best friend. I have other friends who cross-dress and others who are actually trans. This is yaoi, most of it will not be unrealistic. This story still isn't garbage where we have a cute, little, crossdressing uke who runarounds in a skirt and blushes 24/7. There was one like this posted in the yaoi section a few months ago. Everyone thought it was shit. It really was.


What do you expect me to call it? Saying that you don't mind cross-dressing. Is that even something to have an issue with!? Saying "sexy bits when he was a girl were very unsexy because he was a girl." You do know that sometimes cross-dressing people will have sex while you know crossdressing. Why even bring up that they were "unsexy" unless you were using this as porn? So yeah I'm gonna call this jack off material because it's clearly what you see it as.

Look you can see it your way all you want with your a. B. C. D. Characteristics but I completely thought this character was feminized. Yes there were a few scenes where it showed his chest and 1/4 of a dick but fact of the matter is, there were so many ways to make him manlier. And he had the same height and body type as that porn actress so as far as point A. Goes, he definitely fits. I'd even argue his face and eyes were highly feminized with his longer lashes and narrow jaw line. Yes cross dressing is an unpopular concept so I had to make it clear I didn't mind so people wouldn't think I was hating on the cross dressing itself, but more on the feminization of this character. Basically the entire story was about cross dressing and for most of the scenes in the beginning the seme would put on makeup or lipstick for the uke to "get it up" though to his credit at the end he gave an ambiguous "I prefer both" when asked if he liked the uke dressing as a woman or a man which I guess makes my opinion of him slightly better. There were quite a few sexual scenes in this Manga which rather than a story all about plot, was clearly geared to bring in audiences who wanted something sexy. And then most of those scenes was him in female clothes and makeup and with his feminine body and massive fake breasts which gave no cross dressing representation and instead more geared towards sex with a very dominant woman. So no I'm not the least but ashamed to say "it was very unsexy" and it wasn't even to prove a point. It was just art which made a man into a woman to fuck another man so viewers could see. Also i said taking the lead was "manly" and before you start shouting "how dare you at me" look up the definition of manly. I didn't say masculine, I said manly and in the words of the all mighty dictionary "befitting a man, especially in a traditional sense." So yeah taking the lead is befitting and traditional. Some men do not, but most do, and therefore this action was indeed "manly" and though not all men need to subscribe to a stereotype, this story seemed to be geared away from that. When saying that saying one men have sex while cross dressing, yes. They do. But it is very rare against inconvenient and most men who like other men dislike the thought of constantly having sex with someone all dolled up to look like a stereotypical girl. I will once again quote my many cross dressing friends who agree and if that's not enough, look it up on online threads. So yes I continue to say it's very inaccurate and geared towards female gratification. Do you think that sex appeal = jack off? Does everything turn you on? I for one, can say with certainty that I have never have to yaoi Manga. And I don't care who knows it. If you have and that's what you read yaoi for; thats grand. I couldn't care less. That however has NOTHING to do with the fact that I can appreciate sex appeal. It can be straight, gay, between plants, idgaf. Sex appeal is often a device used in books movies, plays whatever and I recognize it when I see it and call it out when I think it was badly done. Especially in a story where the sexy scenes make up a decent part of the story. However once again, you coming onto my post and saying I use it to jack off is still just as cringey and weird as it was before. I've said everything I need to, keep on thinking I jack off to yaoi Manga just because I critiqued it all you want, I've explained myself as best I can and you can keep saying I'm wrong for it and that this Manga was just so wonderfully done if it makes you feel better.

Also here's an example of a similar one that I DO think was well done and gave 5 stars
http://www.mangago.zone/read-manga/mayonaka_love_alliance/
WARNING IT HAD A BUNCH OF SEX SCENES WHICH I APPARENTLY JACK OFF TO
that was a bit passive agressive but in the name of humor I'm letting it slide and I hope you will too ;)