You can definitely tell that you’re not a Japanese translator, but you did a very good job with what you had and it’s all perfectly understandable. I was nervous when I read your explanation in the beginning cause other translators that use online translators usually aren’t as competent as you when it comes to having it actually make sense grammatically and contextually











I don’t get the comments saying they didn’t have chemistry lol
Cause they didn't lol.We barely saw how they built their relationship,the artist didn't show that they were in love with each other,we only knew that thanks to their internal monologue.When you want to get a feeling across with drawing,you gotta draw itthere wasn't any loving gaze,there wasn't tension when they were close to each other after all these years,there wasn't any sign of little touches,nothing.They only thought "oh I'm in love"then Boom,sex.It was a very boring and forgettable read,you can come across thousand of this type of stories drawn and wrote better
*kiss,not sex
That’s your opinion I guess, but I thought it was pretty standard in terms of a BL story
Sure,I just responded cause you said you didn't understand why people were saying that,these are the reasons