this is so all over the place im sorry i cant keep reading this. the author introduces multiple plot points but seems to forget them along the way. also the pacing is too fast. she saves ml from being chained, then two chapters later she saves him again? suddenly she's so good with her powers when she had only just discovered them; and then she's revealing all of it to the public already?? and i thoight she's supposed to be sick with an illness where she has too much power that it eats at her health. but she kills a wolf and creates arrows out of her own magic so like ???????????
all over the place i tell u! the art was nice and messy in a good way but the story is just blah
I agree so much like where is the adopted sister that got her killed in the first place there so many things forgotten and the plots development are so shallow but I like the art style so much (and maybe some characters) I don’t know what to do
I think its because the events where the adopted slave sister caused her death, MC's illness, and other things originally happened later down the line, like 7 years later. Cause she said in the first chapter that the illness affected her when she became heir (which was originally when she was like 20 or 22) and that was also around the time the adopted sister betrayed her too.
She's 15 when she returned and is doing things at an excelerated level (because of her future knowledge) and also because she's completely given up on her father's love and acknowledgement. Honestly I wonder if she will still have that illness? The illness was cause be her having too much mana (or something like that), but she's utilizing magic in this life so if the illness does hit it won't be as bad. As for how she's utilizing magic and is suddenly good, I don't know but at least she wasn't good with it off the bat and it took her some time. Perhaps she's read fundamentals in a book?
Makes sense to me!
sooo nice!! i'm glad to have reached the end, i rmb starting this when this was only arnd 30 chapters
the gap moe on mc is INSANEEEE!! his serious version is so hot
cute story and def perfect for a light read! the art is so soft and pretty. i found the romance kind of lacking (in that there was no kiss and no further exploration of their relationship) but overall i think this is really cute, especially the matching outfits of mc and the dragon kid! kind of agree with previous commenter on the dynamics of the characters. however i would still recommend this because i enjoyed reading it'
wow.... this was amazing. it's short, but well & appropriately fleshed out??? nothing felt rushed or out of place. it was the perfect pacing and had the perfect ending. this was original in the most amazing sense. nothing recycled and all fresh ideas and tropes!!! i love the time travel and the two leads helping and finding each other at the stages of their lives when they need it most. i love this. i'm satisfied:)))
this was all over the place. it already felt so draggy by chapter 67, only to find out even more unrelated stuff happens towards the end only for it to have a rushed ending??!?! skipped to chapters 95 onwards and none of it connected to the beginning. seems like nothing was tied together.
any stories similar to this, about reincarnation & villainesses ?
you're joking right
A whole new worlddddd
Please tell me you’re joking
???? god forbid a rofan fan ask for recommendations similar to this quality yall rude as hell lol
You can try these one : I Became the Male Lead’s Adopted Daughter
I'll Be The Matriarch In This Life
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