ts so ass
Why
wrong and you stink
ml has a brain the size of a pea. mc is right behind him. there is absolutely no world outside their little bubble, as in, this world has not been built or explained. i can’t help but notice the utter lack of detail in this whenever they’re miraculously doing something other than having sex. they have only ever been seen in 4 locations: the castle, the church, the count’s estate, and 2 different basements. the mc gets kidnapped TWICE. both incidents are absolutely ridiculous. he was kidnapped for no reason. it did nothing to the plot except serve as a way to stress the ml out and make the whole wide world worry for him, when in reality there was never any danger. as cute as they are with their constant blushing and shyness and yap about virginity and sluts and sex, there is nothing beyond that. symrna and capri is an example of a story with something more. maybe i would have liked this when i was like… 14.
It’s fine if the story isn’t ur taste, but dropping into the comments just to rant about how “shallow” it is and compare it to a completely different author is… lol. Not every manhwa needs to be Smyrna and Capri–level heavy just to be enjoyable. Some of us actually like light, simple stories that don’t revolve around endless world-building or constant trauma arcs.
If it didn’t work for you, cool. But u don't have to waste ur time writing a whole breakdown about how the plot isn’t deep enough, doesn't make sense enough. U don’t have to keep reading it. People are allowed to make n enjoy cute, low-stakes BL without needing it to be a masterpiece. The author is proud of her work but here u are calling it ass.
girl then don’t read my reply lol THEY asked me why this story wasn’t for me and i explained. it’s a comment section ofc i’m going to voice my opinion after reading half of it and deciding i didn’t like it. not like im trying to convince you to dislike it. that’s like saying you can’t give a book a bad rating on goodreads because the author is proud of it, or you can’t give a game a bad rating because the developers care about it. i offered valid critiques and a work i DID like so they understand why i said “ts so ass.” if you dislike my critiques, then move on knowing that YOU like it and that that’s good enough. tsk
ml was pushy and most scenes were noncon, there was sex constantly and hardly any plot, and i don’t understand this ending. how did we go from an arranged marriage announcement to them living together? poor pacing, bad characters. it’s a shame.
I wish I could make a voice note right now. THANK YOU FOR SAYING THAT. Like for real. The top is so fickle and controlling and absurd, talking about you're pregnant with my baby. MY BABY excuse me sir who has the mentality of only sex partners and unrealistic jealousy. And bottom, I want to pinch his ear and speak some sense into him, just because he said I like you does not mean you should forget EVERYTHING that man put you through. Anyways I need to take a shxt. They left me constipated
I do agree with the 1st part buttt there's actually chapter's skipped and even season 2 is out now just wanna let you know
i was looking into season 2. the ml gets worse as a partner considering his (not so) little obsession. its good to know there were skipped chapters here because it was genuinely such a jarring jump that i couldn’t believe it wasn’t an accident made by the uploaders
i think im gonna pass out i cannot believe the fine shit that has graced my eyes
this blonde guy pmo not even just because of what he did in the bus but also because of how stupidly childish he is. i do not and cannot find it attractive for a grown man to act 5 idc how traumatized he is pack it up blud this is adult work. there’s a way to do the whole obsessed golden retriever thing this author is going for WITHOUT that. this story gives wattpad and everything revolves around this pea-brained mc.
as much as i find him hot i cannot stand this snail paced plot lmao this is horrible. how does she still not know who he is and we’re 60 chapters in be fr
i would literally never try to regain my memories holy fine shit
its so funny seeing people talk about how the plot is sooo interesting and its suuuch a shame that this is full of assault when there quite literally is no plot? don’t kid yourselves lol there’s sex in 90% of this manhwa’s pages and that’s not even an exaggeration. you think that him being whatever that thing was as a baby is plot?? he sat there, stared, was given a book, and then walked. suuuper sad backstory. but ok sex again! not to mention that the mc in this is naked nearly constantly and there always happens to be some random group of men who REALLY need sex i mean really LMAO. the apocalypse is a BACKDROP to everything else and only serves as a purpose to make the ml look stronger and make the mc seem like some pheromonal flower that no one can keep their hands off of
this is the first time i have seen an mc ALLOW himself to get manipulated to this degree lmao he literally knows everything and still behaves like he’s clueless this is dogwater
oh cuz ts is so peak