sorta annoyed the majority of the sex they showed was the omega complaining of it hurting half the time and then only showed him being really into it at the end :/
don't get me wrong, all the smut scenes were good, but having him say it hurts every time and then for the alpha to get it together and we only see it once? a lil sad
This... isn't as good as the comments led me to believe it'd be. I read to ch 10 and I won't say any spoilers. The characters are introduced--if you can even call it that--very quickly before it just moves on to another plot point. The reader isn't given any time to learn about the character before the plot progresses. Speaking of, the plot is confusing in the way that it's obvious whats happening but we're also not told anything at the same time.
It's like when a scene happens in a movie but there's a weird cut. It's just very abrupt and disconnected.
If you like porn no plot, I guess this is okay for that, but eh, not me. To each their own.
Someone leave a comment under if it gets better ig?
i agree, honestly its just gooner material and im the targeted gooner
IJBOL but same twin
Ch.18 and it doesn't. Just big nice bodies and femdom, and questionable comedy. There is a underplot, but it is almost non existent and, as you said, always suddenly cut off.
Started/Skimmed ch 1... it jumps right into the story as if we know the characters and then it's like 5 different tropes happen at once. I don't plan to continue reading
Bless you for updating translator may you get everything you want in life
Im not even religious but damn was that a religious /experience/ to read
I was worried (still am a bit, tbh) given the premise/cover, but it's not as bad as I thought it would be (so far). Assuming it's not cut short, I hope the author is able to delve into the government aspects/human rights violations and I also find the proposed anatomy interesting.
ch 17
Literally speechless,,
There's still a part of me tho that wants Jinwoo to flip the scrip and take control again...
Jinwoo just gripping onto Guwon's ass and forcing him to stop until he is given the okay, or pulling a knife out and flipping them over (again) so Jinwoo can control the flow.
But also I loveee how Guwon is just /so/ into it. His O face was *chef's kiss* 10/10, no notes.
omfg the thought of jinwoo with his legs locked around guwon or his hands digging into guwons ass to control him is making me combusststsgsh AUTHOR PLEASEEE…
Okay, the ending was a little rushed, but I think it was pretty neatly wrapped up in spite of that.
And now we have them in the modern world?! So exciting!! I really hope it ends up being poly end... but, I'm already pretty satisfied with the way things are regardless.