Is it just me or is this story basically an average joe?? I only read up to ch 5 but I kid you not i was already board on ch 3. The pacing is fast, the characters are shallow asf, the Mc is quite literally a copy past kind of character...
Like dont misunderstand me, I read tons of brain rotted action/fantasy manhwas and I dont mind reading stories with basically the same plot over and over again. But this one? I dont think I can do it... I do godda confess that I had high hopes on this one bc I got this recommended, but it was sadly a let down. I think im gonna pass on this one ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
Who was gatekeeping this from me!!! I like this story a lot, there have been ton of stories with mc's who just get everything done in one go. So its refreshing to read something where the Mc's isn't a genius or incredibly talented. Everything he build till now was with pure practice and experience! I also love how he build his own boy squad and how they really care for encrid (the scenes where he died bc of Rem also made me wanna see how things would continue without him repeating the day) beside the fighting, there is a bit of fan service with the girls, but he never engages with any of them on a romantic or sexual level which was a huge relief. Ill be waiting for the next chapters (▰˘◡˘▰)
I cant tell if I hate it or like it. Personally I feel like they paced the story way to fast, like what do you mean there have been 3 run away scenarios, 2 kidnappings, attempted rape, 1 pregnant woman, multiple flashbacks from the main couple and the FL's parents and to top it all we got a miscommunication scene... Like I know for a fact that you guys have been complaining about stories being to long. BUT BACK THEN ALL THIS PLOT USED TO BE IN 140 CHAPTERS NOT 50 OKAY??? *sign* anyway, beside the fact that the storyline is a bit more unique then others there's a few plot holes, isk if they are gonna be going over then later tho #-.-)











I need someone to inject this authors writing and this art into my blood like right now