I can proofread, I've been a QCer in a previous job, let me know if you still need help. Hoping you see this as I have feeling this here is a re-post....
"hello? I'd like to order a pizza to ship the goods... only just leave it at my door because it's too shy to answer"
it's post - post - scriptum.
PSS would be post - scriptum - scriptum which would make no sense.
Post=after
Scriptum=written
Some main plot development for the whole body switcheroo thing. Hopefully then they can develop the relationship.
So what's the point to keep showing the cupola and buildings covered in melting snow - or just partial snow to make it look like it's perhaps spring? It's been "perhaps spring" since like forever!!